JA FF : Warriors in Love (Chap 6 Part 2 on Pg 33) - Page 6

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
Jalal in love
Hehe
so sweet
update ASAP

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Amazing writing. Especially about jodha and jalal😳

Originally posted by: M_Y10

Thanks so much for complimenting my writing style, it made my day.

I'm really glad you're enjoying! 😳 I was smiling like 😃 this widely while writing Jo & Jalal's shyness scene.

As for knowing more about Jalal, Jo most certainly will, but who knows how she'll react. 😛

It's getting interesting daily.. All the best 4 further updates

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

You're most welcome, Meryem. You write really well, buddy. ⭐️

And I was smiling wider while reading it... 😆

Actions and their reactions... that's why we're reading the story, to know about these... 😉

Originally posted by: avishi467

its very nice chapter.jodha is soo innocent beautiful heart.jl s also nice.lets see wht bil happen.our akdha bil rockobviously.thanx fr pm

Originally posted by: vjctpt378

It's getting interesting daily.. All the best 4 further updates

the 2nd chapter s nice..so the shehanshah s free frm the politics and enjyng the caring of the princess..nice..i lyk the way ja reads jo's mind regarding forgeting of name..the best part s when ja says about the fire in his heart regarding kind nature and the smile of princess..their convo s cute..i love shivani's part when she told tat her sister s lying and hiding for stranger..the words about the blood s gud..i wonder hw she ll react when she will come to knw abt jalal..the next part may involve more convo btwn jo and ja in the aspect of jo want to knw more abt warrior but really i dnt have any idea abt the next part dear..u have ur own ideas na..?waiting for update and thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: M_Y10

To be honest I'm a big fan of writing reactions, especially this Jodi's reactions because they're both a 100% when it comes to facial expressions. 😆

But this story will have action for sure, as I love that too.

By the way, I sent you a PM!