Originally posted by: melovesja
This one is not only realistic but mirroring of deep down love.😊 I love the exact use of women sentiments of that era to bring beauty and reality to story. ⭐️ Expert emotion writer at her best.👏
Thanks Mitu🤗
Well blend his skill with his inner turmoil. Mounted archer not only has to fight with danger but to her questioning eyes also. He thought from naming their relation and its effect to after his life danger to her and at the end his mind wins over his heart and he sacrifices his love for HIS LOVE.😭
How beautifully put Mitu! 👏
I love Gauri 😳as her best friend she put all her thought at side to fulfils Heera's wish.
Gauri is an amazing person!
Heera's self talk at entrance was describe her states very well . One moment she felt peace at heart to see him healthy but next moment she faced his aloofness. convo of his pretend and her will to know his stats after last evening was 👏
Thanks dearie...
Aash liye aye the hum ki
hale Dil ek sa hoga HAMARA
jo khamoshi me kaha
Vahi labjo me baya hoga
WOW!!!
Apni bhavnao ka ayna dekhne se
Jayada kuch na chaha tha hamne
Par aap ne Dil yu toda hamara
Jo huwa use kshama ke kabil bana diya.
(This is for Rose)
I'd come harbouring the hope that our hearts would become one...
That the words we spoke in silence, would be uttered aloud
If you'd cast a glimpse at the mirror of my emotions, you'd realise that I hadn't wanted much
But you broke my heart in such a way, that I was left feeling sorry for what'd happened.
(This might not be the right translation - if anyone else can do it better, please do... it's a beautiful poem!😊)
He lost only colour of his life and she lost her only companion.
😭
How life took a turn who didn't want to hurt her by mare ignorance, he hurt her to the extent that she feels she is nothing for him, Who is ready to lay his life to save her make her lifeless, Who took pain of her cause her heart wrenching pain, who wants her happy he leave her dejected.
He is ready to save her life, but he ended up making her lifeless! What a beautiful line Mitu... 👏
As he knows she will never move on and he will not be able to give her a stable and deserved life to her he ask forgiveness and lie what happens between them is cause of his illness.
Yes!
She leaved in despondency from his place which she feels as her own. Whom he thinks as HER is becomes stranger to her. I proud of her that she keeps self respect high and don't saw him her frame of mind. She move on to leave but still her heart defending for him. She is in self agony, anger towards him, may she loathing herself to put in this condition, she is hurt by rejection of her love but part of her heart wish to hear his voice to stop her that was the most painful part.😭
That's the part where we feel torn... we feel angry towards the one we love, and yet we want to defend their actions... don't want to leave them!
I loved that he silently arrange his man to follow her for her safety.
😳She leaves with loneliness as she came here and he stays with barrenness as always.
After she leaved from his room he drown in world of her gesture and lost in her thought those moments were so touchy.
I told you to stay safe
As I knew the enemy in larger size
I pretend to you
As I determined to protect you
I want you to leave
As I wish to all will be fine.
I want you to move on
But strikes of reality cause me a pain
Beautiful poem!
His convo with his father figure was 👏love the way chachajan stop him from run away. Without any addo he told him everything. his helplessness and his worry and wish for his son was very emotional but realization of her move on was 😭
Awww
His love for her and gesture of her will be his strength and HIS betrayal and hope of small part of heart will be her strength to go on and fight with each problem.
This is amazingly penned dear... 👏
.He already planned for hunting farman and continuing his loyalty towards his job and may enemies are also at their best. So, eagerly waiting for part 2
Dono chal pade hai apni apni rah per
Apni manjil ko pane
Per suna hai rahe mil hi jati hai
Kisi khubsurat se mode par
Awww... ok we will wait for that 'mod'
Thanks for these amazing words, Mitu... love you 🤗
Anupamaa
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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