NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 14~CHAPTER 19 - Page 42

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Oh, My Dear Shraddha... You have poured your heart out in this chapter... I had tears in my eyes when Heera walked out of his room... The way you have penned down each emotion of Akbar tore my heart apart...

After so long, Bhavu... thanks da... 🤗

No doubt I felt proud on Heera for stepping up, but my heart cried for Akbar more... His sacrifice for her sake... for her safety... for her betterment touched my heart. Akbar, the way he constrained to mask his inner turmoil and kept his poker act of stoniness. Again and Again, my heart was questioning how he managed to put a stone on his heart... His thick sound still ringing in my ears...

But this message could've been sent this through your guards, Sahiba...'

I was almost knocked off and heartbroken at this point... With such polite manner, he offended her... His dislike in his stance... words... and eyes probably was enough to kill her not once but million times.

Thank you for bringing up this point Bhavu... I had to be very careful about the words there.. it's a very subtle disagreement between them... both are egoistic, but within reason... and both are gentlemanly-noble people... who don't cross their boundaries. Trying to create a misunderstanding between two such people is far tougher than trying to create a MU between someone more vocal...😳

'Can't recall anything else?' Clutching together a few pieces of her heart that'd just been sliced apart,

A 16-year-old girl who just gone through a horrible trauma once again, she got whacked by her newly born love. I salute to Heera in this chapter... even though he brutally broke her apart... she stands straight and walks out gracefully from his room.

She's a noblewoman... that's how she's been brought up!😳

She wouldn't demean herself by listing all the subtle moments they'd shared - only for him to claim 'vagueness' again. As a proud young lady, she knew when she was welcome - but more importantly, she knew when she was not welcome too.'

U know in Heera and Akbar convo my fav part... the way Heera was searching in his eyes one glimpse of true emotion... but Akbar is truly shrewd here... didn't gave single hint and kept on attacking again and again. She kept on trying to find the answer.

Yes... 😭

Somewhat I was pleasing shocked to see Heera's courage...and openness... not only in this chapter but the previous two chapters as well. At the canal scene and their first gentle embrace.

Openness comes when you start trusting someone... and you would have noticed a change in her after she heard him say 'Just stay safe' after their encounter outside the temple... 😳

I clapped for Heera's grace... The way she collected the courage to meet him, face him once again... confront openly... truly admirable... U always go beyond and above reader's expectation. I am not going to be satisfied in one time reading... I have to read again to feel the pain once again of those torn souls... I want to feel Akbar's pain when she was walking out from his life... I want to cry out loud for Heera... for her self-respect... for her insult... for her broken faith.

Oh thanks dear... thanks a lot!🤗

His brows stiffened 'and sorry for what I'm about to do...'

(What is he going to do now???) Are U hinting something? Is he going to parnagrah Haveli to search for Farman

yes... that's what he'd said in previous chapter too, if you remember...

Akbar doesn't know about Mahendra's intention... does he know about how Mahendra is?

nope he doesn't... he has no reason to know about Mahendar yet na... one of his spies, Chota Faizan had just found out about the Durga-Mahendar-Khalil connection, but he got killed on his way to meet Akbar... 😕

I really feel sorry for Gauri and Cha-cha Jaan... both are burning in their loved one's agony.

Like Adwi said, they both are an entire-family for these two!

'Maybe fate?' After all, fate had been unfairly targeting her quite a lot, of late 'But, why me jiji? Why me repeatedly?' she would ask again, in agony.'

At this point, I had tears in my eyes... I don't know I was feeling for Heera or Akbar... but it was truly heart wrenching...

Yes... both are suffering in their own ways, that's for sure!

There was a small corner of her heart that wasn't ready to leave yet.'

Deep down I knew the story will move further when they apart... but even though I had hoped... maybe he will realize he is the only one who could protect her and will stop her.

As of now, he doesn't see how that will happen... future mein kyaa hotaa hai dekhthe hain!😭

Till she was forced to wake up from the stupor - at least for a while - by someone's unexpected arrival.

Hope it's not Khalil

Hee hee... you're terrified of him? 😛

I am too poor in analyzing so I have just written what I felt while reading it... My heart is still feeling empty... feels as if nothing left... U R pen has magical power to bound readers in your wand. Truly amazing emotional chapter. LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT...

Lashy... I can't wait for them to be gathered again... Update soon.

Will do da... 🤗

Sorry for not commenting on last two chapters...Lately life has been too hectic.. but I enjoyed reading it. specially chapter 17 the curving point...the cupid scorpion... my fav... LOVE U

Oh thanks dearie...

HAPPY NEW YEAR

HAPPY DIWALI

Belated Happy Diwali and New year wishes to you too 🤗

Thanks a lot dearie... I totally understand how busy you are, so please don't apologise

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

lashy Di

My dear Bindup🤗
take a bow for your commendable write up
such a painful and heart breaking chapter Di
I am feel helpless after reading chapter
for whom I cry for Khan sahib or heera
their pain , their helplessness in the hand of destiny or situation is heart breaking
both did what is best for their situation

Yes they both did what they had to do! They both are leaders, after all...
really beautifully penned down everything
love really powerful word

Thanks so so much da🤗
everything going per their both plan but when they fall for each other everything change
both never been in love before , never been any relationship before
when they know they don't have any time for love because they both carry lots of responsibility, lots of people life depend on them
but love never happen per plan , it happen suddenly

Of course... head has one plan... life has one plan and the heart has one plan...
like the whole description of forest and khan sahib state of mind
what a person he is practicing in the middle of night
despite in that state of mind he don't miss his target

He never misses his target... except when he is thinking of her... remember?
heera each words repeating in his mind, he is not able to forget for a single second
poor khan sahib thinking something which is best for both
he had given a thought for marriage this prove what heera and her modesty matter for him
just for her he given a thought for marriage which he never thought nor going to thought in future also

Yes... only for her... as Akanksha said... he would give his life for her, if he knew that would keep her safe... but he knows it wouldn't so he lets her go😭
he can't able to give name their relationship
reasons behind this conclusion best knows to him, he is thinking best for her to let her go from there without given her any hope for their future
love you khan sahib for the way you thinking but if only you knew mahinder and Khalil relationship, or mahinder and heera relationship or if only you knew mahinder true colour
if only khan sahib if only

I know...😭
heera she is waiting for opportunity to meet khan sahib after that beautiful incident

Gauri what a girl she is always thinking practical or best for heera and their people

yes... she is like mother/sister to Heera
just for heera shake she arranged their meeting but she keep reminding heera what she is doing or what she is
for the very first beginning she is afraid for heera heartbreak
she knows this relationship not good for heera and her prestige,

she is true friend, true well wisher anyone get but if only she know power of love , it make people dance in it tune, if only she experience before

So beautifully you've said this Bindup!👏
finally both meet after so many given a thought after this meeting
heera such a bold step she taken
of course she never think after that incident he take her in his arms again or nor we think but this is also we don't think nor heera think

She didn't come here for romance... she came here for recognition, which she didn't get... 😭
his ignorance killing her but that don't come up in her face
she is so shock to see his indifferent attitude towards her after that incident or after he taken her in his arms
after he claim he don't recall that incident
she is so heart broken but but but what a girl she is
she keep her self respect high in that situation also nor she beg nor she shed tears in front of him

yes...
she fail to read khan sahib mind or his eyes
khan sahib what a player he is he knows how to keep an check his emotions

He is a master player - a spy... an intelligence officer... he has to keep his emotions under check
both are good player both knows never show their hidden emotions in front of anyone
at last heera hurt terribly, she hope he is going to stop her from leaving but nor he given her any hope for future nor for that time how can she move on after this
poor my heera

😭
I quess this is small heartbreak for her or only teaser for her heartbreaking situations she is going to face in future
this nothing in front of harsh reality, she don't have any idea how many people betray her,
mahinder truth, his connection with Khalil, her marriage fixed with him, most important khan sahib truth how she handle everything I am afraid to think also
and about farman everybody think that farman hidden in parnagarh, khan sahib going to find out farman easily but we all know lashy di unpredictable twist and turn in this novel so I don't going to quess anything

only AMK thinks Farmaan's hidden in Parnagarh... (from that poem that Heera told him)

No one else thinks so. even Khalil thinks Farmaan is still with Heera
love the idea of khan sahib to send his men for parnagarh people and heera safety

Yes
Chacha jaan he truly care and wish for Khan sahib like gauri understand heera well he understand Akbar so much
love their conversation

after he's been with him since AMK was a baby na... 😳
but Chacha jaan .is helpless because what Akbar think or do or going to do is correct
he is thinking best for everybody

Yes
his practical and realistic nature is so good

I love him for it too... a proper 'Man' he is... In future, Heera is so lucky to have found someone like this for her..
beautifully describe their feelings Di really how you do this??
you know how to connect readers through out entire storyline
and the effort you put each time is great Di
you put effort not only in chapter but for teaser also
that's why you are true perfectionist

thank you so much darling...
this story or thread given everyone platform to show their hidden talents such a talented bunch of people here
each one is best in their each way
everybody saying same thing but only the way is different

Exactly... but such a pleasure to read everyone's viewpoints!🤗
love and like each review here
take a bow everyone out here for your commendable write up
and lashy Di and kal Di love you both from my heart
I never forget you both and plz don't ask me why I can't express

Ok we wouldn't ask you... ok chellam?😆
waiting eagerly for next update
thanks for pm

Love you too dear.. 🤗