NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 14~CHAPTER 19

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

namu , this song ufff...

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Priyaadarshini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: lashy
 
The whole poem was amazing... but these bolded lines were so touchingly true... I didn't state them explicitly... but the fact that readers have picked up on it, means y'all have understood the main characters so well... it makes me go

and so beautifully you've penned this Akanksha!👏


Thank you so much lashy di, adwitiya and shruti.

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Priyaadarshini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
namu , this song ufff...

This song is "lag ja gale" haina,?
@njapaaddict , excellent review

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

This song is "lag ja gale" haina,?
@njapaaddict , excellent review

yep dear...😳

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi
He had to turn her down,
when all he wanted to do is to safeguard her.
He had to reject her, because he cannot give her what she deserves.
When responsibilities were weighing her down, she turned to him for respite,
He pretended ignorance, for he can never give her normal and stable life.
He walked over her heart, which is softer than the rose petal
So that she would forget him and move on.
He would have given his life,
if it can assure her safety. But it wouldn't. He have to let her go. he have to let her go.

Wow Akansha...

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Lashy Sahiba... We didn't expect this kind of heart wrenching painful chapter as Diwali gift!! You bad girl took the revenge for not crying for last chapter... Yes I did cry for this chapter. Still crying 😭 Now happy? 😡

> 😭 How can Chellam be happy when Chellam is crying? [Sandy take note... this is where she grabbed AMK😉]

It's so so so so BEAUTIFULLY written. It's full of emotion!! full of pain!! full of wilderness. I can feel those emotions in each and every words. And you've equally justified both of their stands. Hats off to you, Chellam! 👏👏👏
Apaaa.. I thought readers wouldn't be able to empathise with AMK... but I'm glad it came out balanced..

Normally I only read sad chapters once but this is exceptional. I read it thrice. I felt the fresh bang of pain every time I read. It's just PHENOMENAL chapter dear. Uff... I've no clue about what's going to happen next though I don't have to worry about Heera's safe.
They have a connection whether they've openly admitted it or not... and it's this connection that'll protect them.. his love protects her.. and her love protects him..

So phase I is done and breathtakingly waiting for phase II. But seriously I'm totally clueless.

🤗 that's how you'll enjoy the story da...
Thank you so much for this enthralling journey, Chellam!! Love you!! ❤️
Love you more🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Sandy Begum!! Whom to I cry for??

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Originally posted by: Kuki715
Heera left 😭. Whole parting scene was 🥺. Even the chief of intelligence UMAK doesn't have a solution . Lashy di you better have one 😡 because I can't see them in pain . 😭😭

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Originally posted by: cute.manasi
what a lovely surprise , lashy di...

& congratulation for new thread...😃

🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Congrats for new thread lashy🥳
You said you will update on Tuesday but u updated on Monday😲

End of part 1..

I thought it's like season 1 and season 2 but then I read chapter 20😆

You can consider it Season 1, Season 2, Season 3 and Season 4

Or Phase 1, Phase 2, Phase 3, Phase 4

Phase 1 about 20 chapters

2 about 10..

3 about 20

4 about 10...

Something like that... 😉

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@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
Part 1 was full of sunshine days at Aidabad. Began with Heera being separated from her sister and her Parnagarh. And has ended with her separation from AMK. Sandwiched in between were the magical moments of 'Pehla Nasha...Pehla Khumar...naya pyar hai naya intezaar.'😳

Part 2 is bound to be full of farmaan hunt. AMK's entry probably in disguise into the haveli of Parnagarh to peep into every urn, nook and cranny...Heera's misunderstandings of AMK's intentions and Mahender and Khalil's villainy at its best. Moments of 'Ab tere bin jee lenge hum...zeher zindagi ka pee lenge hum...'🥺

😕 😲 😡 ⭐️ 👏

Sandy 🤗

I wait for you to write a story... and I'll grab my popcorn and sit down to experience the ride...

seriously... why don't you write.. you're so intelligent.. with such a command of the language!

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: lashy

You can consider it Season 1, Season 2, Season 3 and Season 4

Or Phase 1, Phase 2, Phase 3, Phase 4

Phase 1 about 20 chapters
2 about 10..
3 about 20
4 about 10...

Something like that... 😉

am so soo sooo excited ...