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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.

The story goes...

How could any one write so picture perfect
Like our author who has chiseled the scene with no defect
He and she will meet in every story
But the stand out here is the scenic glory..
Her heart stopped for a moment when she thought he died
She realised her love for him which she could not hide
She forgot her mission, her position, her own self ,and everything
But focused only on his safety to which her mind did cling

The next few moments were precious in her life
Each step she took to revive him tested her belief
Eyes filled with tears, and heart full of hope
She brought his life back carefully, like one walking on a tightrope
He opened his eyes and and touched her cheek to make sure
She was a human and not someone from heaven who was so pure
The cupids in heaven had no other duty
Than to aim their arrows on this lovely pair of beauty

His mind was full of thoughts on her safety and care
Which he couldn't speak about with his friends and share
"What would be my future, I have to choose using my wisdom,
My love towards her or my loyalty towards the kingdom?
Should I spurn her and see her go following her fate?"
What will he do, will he follow what his conscience dictates?
Or will his love overcome his loyalty, pushing both of them into danger?
These questions will still remain until the author choose to answer...

Karkuzhali.

Just read the chapter and now this...

So beautiful aunty

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karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Thank you Shruti 🤗

Aunty.

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.

The story goes...

How could any one write so picture perfect
Like our author who has chiseled the scene with no defect
He and she will meet in every story
But the stand out here is the scenic glory..
Her heart stopped for a moment when she thought he died
Then she realised her love for him which she could not hide
She forgot her mission, her position, her own self ,and everything
But focused only on his safety to which her mind did cling

The next few moments were precious in her life
Each step she took to revive him tested her belief
Eyes filled with tears, and heart full of hope
She brought his life back carefully, like one walking on a tightrope
He opened his eyes and and touched her cheek to make sure
She was a human and not someone from heaven who was so pure
The cupids in heaven had no other duty
Than to aim their arrows on this lovely pair of beauty

His mind was full of thoughts on her safety and care
Which he couldn't speak about with his friends and share
"What would be my future, I have to choose using my wisdom,
My love towards her or my loyalty towards the kingdom?
Should I spurn her and see her go following her fate?"
What will he do, will he follow what his conscience dictates?
Or will his love overcome his loyalty, pushing both of them into danger?
These questions will still remain until the author choose to answer...

Karkuzhali.

lovely aunty...

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

wow lashy wat a wonderful chappy just read it...akheera's dreamy moments m still reliving dm...btw congo fr a new thread...🤗

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

OMG Chellam... What a beautiful chapter it is. 👏👏 I'm so wordless here and I don't know what to say. Simply it's MAGICAL!! and I so so LOVED it! ❤️ Never in my life I thought I will love RED SCORPION this much!! ❤️🤣

Why your stories stand out, be it NJAPA or be it HBAS? It's because heroine too in a giving end. Heroine too have equal passion. It's always only Hero had to go through everything to save heroine. But It's always equal in your plots. So it's now Heera's turn to show her selfless attempt to save him. Hereafter it will be Akbar's turn!! and we're breathlessly waiting for it.

And as always I'm not going to worry about Akbar's stunt at last. Because It's always other way round happens at days despite of whatever he promised himself to do in previous late nights. 😉

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.

The story goes...

How could any one write so picture perfect
Like our author who has chiseled the scene with no defect
He and she will meet in every story
But the stand out here is the scenic glory..
Her heart stopped for a moment when she thought he died
Then she realised her love for him which she could not hide
She forgot her mission, her position, her own self ,and everything
But focused only on his safety to which her mind did cling

The next few moments were precious in her life
Each step she took to revive him tested her belief
Eyes filled with tears, and heart full of hope
She brought his life back carefully, like one walking on a tightrope
He opened his eyes and and touched her cheek to make sure
She was a human and not someone from heaven who was so pure
The cupids in heaven had no other duty
Than to aim their arrows on this lovely pair of beauty

His mind was full of thoughts on her safety and care
Which he couldn't speak about with his friends and share
"What would be my future, I have to choose using my wisdom,
My love towards her or my loyalty towards the kingdom?
Should I spurn her and see her go following her fate?"
What will he do, will he follow what his conscience dictates?
Or will his love overcome his loyalty, pushing both of them into danger?
These questions will still remain until the author choose to answer...

Karkuzhali.

It's so so BEAUTIFUL, Periamma. 👏👏👏

He and she will meet in every story

But the stand out here is the scenic glory..

So loved this lines!! ❤️ I don't how but I too mention about stand out in my comment too, Periamma! 😲🤗

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.

The Chemical reaction between Him and Her..

On him...
"You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know."
On her...
" You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why I treasure you my dearest
You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be
You really are an angel sent from above
To take care of me and shower with love
When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
And your touch have chased away all of my fear
You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
It is even better everytime you smile
It so magical those things you've made
To bring back my faith that almost fade
Now my life is a dream come true
It all began when I was loved by you
Now I have found what I am looking for
It's you and your love and nothing more
Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment
In my life something I've never felt
I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
But now I'm running out of things to say
So I'll end by the line you already know
"I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show.
( Copied from Internet)

Karkuzhali.
( Picture courtesy: "Maniam" 's illustration for Kalki's "Ponniyin Selvan 1950-54)

So so APT, Periamma. Specially loved the bold-ed line. ❤️

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Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Lashy di,

This time the comment is mainly to respond to this splendid update and cute "humble request" at the end of every chapter. My Internet connection has been fluctuating for a while now, it takes ages to post something properly, hence I will keep it short this time. My like button is also deceiving me , so... I can only hope that by the time you post the next chapter, the connection would be fine, and my comments shall regain their usual alacrity. Coming to the update, this was another gift of fantastic introspection, wilful imagination and above all else, the flair for unearthing romance at most unexpected settings.

Sweet are the uses of Adversity...

So as the Red Caped Cupid continues to rule - for the lovers and in our hearts - I am assured, blind he might be, but Cupid is certainly the most farsighted among all the heavenly beings - she meets him yet again, and this time, presumably the last time in Aidabad, in a place where they had met the first time. She meets him to find him helpless - dying - and in need of support, hence she plunges in to save his life, more for herself, than for him, whereas the situation at the same place, between the same people could not have been more different than it was, barely a fortnight ago. The Saved saves the Saviour!

It's a curious thing, this unnatural whims of heart, that the people most logical are pulled into the throes of surreal existence for a while, where imagination is a sublime bliss. Hallucinations, more clearer than the visuals of a mortal eye. Where fantasy soothes bitterness of truth and one visits the other life, as if peering through an orb of glass. Yet, sadly enough for him, she gifted him something sweeter than the crumbs of his favourite sweet, sweeter than that gesture of remembrance itself - she gave him something so sweet, that he can barely afford to assimilate, at this juncture!

Hope this one gets posted

Adwitiya...

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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harshal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

'Harka Sahiba...' his husky murmur effectively stifled her words, his thumb drifting over from her chin, to discover her soft flushed cheeks. They were flaunting a colour glossier than the reddest rose, a colour similar to the one he'd seen on her, during the first instance that she'd blushed. And he had longed to caress them since - a longing that had finally found its haven today, when his fingers ran over the velvet of her virginal skin, before nestling her cheeks within his palms.

Edited by harshu27 - 8 years ago

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.

The story goes...

How could any one write so picture perfect
Like our author who has chiseled the scene with no defect
He and she will meet in every story
But the stand out here is the scenic glory..
Her heart stopped for a moment when she thought he died
Then she realised her love for him which she could not hide
She forgot her mission, her position, her own self ,and everything
But focused only on his safety to which her mind did cling

The next few moments were precious in her life
Each step she took to revive him tested her belief
Eyes filled with tears, and heart full of hope
She brought his life back carefully, like one walking on a tightrope
He opened his eyes and and touched her cheek to make sure
She was a human and not someone from heaven who was so pure
The cupids in heaven had no other duty
Than to aim their arrows on this lovely pair of beauty

His mind was full of thoughts on her safety and care
Which he couldn't speak about with his friends and share
"What would be my future, I have to choose using my wisdom,
My love towards her or my loyalty towards the kingdom?
Should I spurn her and see her go following her fate?"
What will he do, will he follow what his conscience dictates?
Or will his love overcome his loyalty, pushing both of them into danger?
These questions will still remain until the author choose to answer...

Karkuzhali.