NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 13-Chapter 18

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Lashy it's just awesome . Simply turn thing into the extend where he has to decide and not per her wish but got an answer by his action and cliff hanger for us.😛🤗 love you dear for you capable to bring.

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
did you really have to end there...

I thought there is a second part.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

don't kill me but i started reading it before your indication...😛

Bad girl... read again now 😡

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
did you really have to end there...

I need to end somewhere na.. 😆

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: melovesja
Lashy it's just awesome . Simply turn thing into the extend where he has to decide and not per her wish but got an answer by his action and cliff hanger for us.😛🤗 love you dear for you capable to bring.

You liked it? Thank you so so so much Mitu... thanks a lot... 🤗

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melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: lashy

You liked it? Thank you so so so much Mitu... thanks a lot... 🤗

😃🤗 love it.

Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago

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Namita

@Namita-M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow!! Twinnie, a really awesome update. Loved this Khan Sahib even though he was fever ridden when he took her in his arms.

Would like to see the day when he does that when he is sober!!!

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This is awesomely beautiful Lashy... I officially vote Red scorpion as the cutest, sweetest, bestest villain of history..😆

Except for the last part which is intimidatingly wary pertaining to Khan Sahib's next actions in his denial mode, the rest of it was like ... a poem - of most dactylic tune ... like a painting - of most aesthetic strokes

Love you lots n pots

Edited by hemakeerti - 8 years ago

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Chapter 18.

The Chemical reaction between Him and Her..

On him...

"You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know."
On her...
" You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why I treasure you my dearest

You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be
You really are an angel sent from above
To take care of me and shower with love

When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
And your touch have chased away all of my fear
You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
It is even better everytime you smile

It so magical those things you've made
To bring back my faith that almost fade
Now my life is a dream come true
It all began when I was loved by you

Now I have found what I am looking for
It's you and your love and nothing more
Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment
In my life something I've never felt

I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
But now I'm running out of things to say
So I'll end by the line you already know
"I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show.

( Copied from Internet)

Karkuzhali.

( Picture courtesy: "Maniam" 's illustration for Kalki's "Ponniyin Selvan 1950-54)

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.

The Chemical reaction between Him and Her..


On him...
"You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know."
 On her...
" You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why I treasure you my dearest
You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be
You really are an angel sent from above
To take care of me and shower with love
When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
And your touch have chased away all of my fear
You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
It is even better everytime you smile
It so magical those things you've made
To bring back my faith that almost fade
Now my life is a dream come true
It all began when I was loved by you
Now I have found what I am looking for
It's you and your love and nothing more
Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment
In my life something I've never felt
I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
But now I'm running out of things to say
So I'll end by the line you already know
"I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show.
( Copied from Internet)


Karkuzhali.
 ( Picture courtesy: "Maniam" 's illustration for Kalki's "Ponniyin Selvan 1950-54)