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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini


The Saved saves the Saviour!


Yet, sadly enough for him, she gifted him something sweeter than the crumbs of his favourite sweet, sweeter than that gesture of remembrance itself - she gave him something so sweet, that he can barely afford to assimilate, at this juncture!


👏


Loved it, Adwi and hats off to you specially for the quoted lines. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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Loved it, Adwi and hats off to you specially for the quoted lines. 🤗


Yes she saved the saviour... and trapped him at a juncture again and with even more complicated webs around... that untangling is no easy feat...

if only he had left as he had planned...
if only he had sat idly and not worked...
if only she hadn't decided to take a stroll to the canal...
but all that would've led to something else...
It had to lead to this instead...

On a side note - I wasn't sure of this chapter at all... I assumed people wouldn't enjoy it much... I'm serious!
So waking up to this is like ... a surprise birthday party when you assume people have forgotten! 😆
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Good Morning Baisas and Banjaras

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Thank you so much for the sweet messages... thanks a lot darlings... means so much to me...

Image result for good morning karwa chauth
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: harshu27

'Harka Sahiba...' his husky murmur effectively stifled her words, his thumb drifting over from her chin, to discover her soft flushed cheeks. They were flaunting a colour glossier than the reddest rose, a colour similar to the one he'd seen on her, during the first instance that she'd blushed. And he had longed to caress them since - a longing that had finally found its haven today, when his fingers ran over the velvet of her virginal skin, before nestling her cheeks within his palms.


I love it... for these lines... his hand action... awww thank you darling..


Harshu... do you have that scene where Jalal opens his heart out to her.. and Jo comforts him... Those expressions... would be spot on, hai na? More intense? he's not in his senses...
I think it's before the misunderstanding between them...
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 18.


Image result for picture of two lovers embracing


The story goes...

How could any one write so picture perfect
Like our author who has chiseled the scene with no defect
He and she will meet in every story
But the stand out here is the scenic glory..
Her heart stopped for a moment when she thought he died
Then she realised her love for him which she could never hide
She forgot her mission, her position, her own self , everything
But focused only on his safety to which her mind did cling

The next few moments were precious in her life
Each step she took to revive him tested her belief
Eyes filled with tears, and heart full of hope
She brought his life back carefully, like one walking on a tightrope
He opened his eyes and and touched her cheek to make sure
She was a human and not someone from heaven who was so pure
The cupids in heaven had no other duty
Than to aim their arrows on this lovely pair of beauty

His mind was full of thoughts on her safety and care
Which he couldn't speak about with his friends and share
"What would be my future, I have to choose using my wisdom,
My love towards her or my loyalty towards the kingdom?
Should I spurn her and see her go following her fate?"
What will he do, will he follow what his conscience dictates?
Or will his love overcome his loyalty, pushing both of them into danger?
These questions will still remain until the author choose to answer...

Karkuzhali.


Omg omg omg omg I love this so much I loooved it...

and this picture that you got ... is the best HBAS picture Baby and Babloo have dug out till date.. or was it this naughty fictional grandma, who did? 😉

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: lashy

I love it... for these lines... his hand action... awww thank you darling..


Harshu... do you have that scene where Jalal opens his heart out to her.. and Jo comforts him... Those expressions... would be spot on, hai na? More intense?
I think it's before the misunderstanding between them...

which one d day he burns his throne after maham's curse dat scene in DEK he hugs her and she comforts him??btw thnx lashy 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: lashy

Good Morning Baisas and Banjaras


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Thank you so much for the sweet messages... thanks a lot darlings... means so much to me...

Image result for good morning karwa chauth

Good morning di😃. You made my day with this chapter 🤗

Harshu di .. lovely pic😳

Adwi... Yeah the net connections are sometimes 🤢... Hope it gets sorted out... good to see you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: harshu27

which one d day he burns his throne after maham's curse dat scene in DEK he hugs her and she comforts him??btw thnx lashy 😳


No da... he imagines that she has given him consent na... he's drunk...
before Benazir

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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 18.


The Chemical reaction between Him and Her..

On him...
"You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know."

On her...
" You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why I treasure you my dearest

You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be
You really are an angel sent from above
To take care of me and shower with love

When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
And your touch have chased away all of my fear
You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
It is even better everytime you smile

It so magical those things you've made
To bring back my faith that almost fade
Now my life is a dream come true
It all began when I was loved by you

Now I have found what I am looking for
It's you and your love and nothing more
Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment
In my life something I've never felt

I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
But now I'm running out of things to say
So I'll end by the line you already know
"I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show.

( Copied from Internet)


Karkuzhali.

( Picture courtesy: "Maniam" 's illustration for Kalki's "Ponniyin Selvan 1950-54)

its amazing chemistry aunty...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: lashy


No da... he imagines that she has given him consent na... he's drunk...
before Benazir

yeah i was xactly thinking abt dat pic only...ya i had made retro thread on dat... will post dat pic...😉

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