Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful os payu after a long time got to read ur os🤗and as usual its sensual and passionate one...😉per last part incomplete laga re...😆i mean jo leaves him and goes...😕anyways waiting fr u to updte ur ffs...😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my god !!! Look whos here ... i've waiting for u to write for so long ... thanks payal .. will b back with the comments after i complete reading ...😊 i m so so happy 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.manasi


no mazak only mudde ki baat...😉

Jo gayi to gayi , now i want Jalal to do something & i would love to see DOMINATING , FURIOUS & POSSESSIVE but also CARING Jalal... , start writing next part...👍🏼

BRING HIM yrr. !


well.. no second part for this.. as I wanted this ending only😆 and about "DOMINATING , FURIOUS & POSSESSIVE but also CARING Jalal... ", I have written an os but yet to type so just wait for few days.. I think you will like that os and jalal..😛


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manu_ak


Oh my god !!! Look whos here ...
Yesh.. I'm here

i've waiting for u to write for so long ...
Really?? 😃 Thanks manu..

thanks payal .. will b back with the comments after i complete reading ...😊 i m so so happy 🤗
Thankyou so much🤗





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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CindyTruong

Hot and sensual OS..Payal..
Awesome ...love it...
Thanks ...



Thankyou so much,Cindy🤗
That day you were also asking me to write so here I posted😃

Thanks for reading dear. I am glad you liked it.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Super duper update...i didn't like jo leaving ja as like object...


You didn't like ending so how come it's super duper update🤔
😆
Anyways, Thankyou for reading dear🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27

wonderful os payu after a long time got to read ur os🤗and as usual its sensual and passionate one...😉per last part incomplete laga re...😆i mean jo leaves him and goes...😕anyways waiting fr u to updte ur ffs...😉😉


Harshu🤗

Thankyou for reading re. I didn't send pms and here you read it and commented too.

you too didn't like the ending😕 but you read na,.. that's enough😆

Love you re❤️ and Thankyou soo much 🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow payal
thank you so much for os
I am so happy to see your pm after so many days
really so good to see you update at least something
and os is just awesome no doubt in that
very well written
love it
in your stories jodha is totally different from other stories
so jodha don't love jalal
both break up three years ago
but now she only landed on his department because she is frustrated , feeling guilty because of her father and also she is drunk
poor jalal he is thinking she come back to him after so long
but yes I don't like ending
you know I love happy ending no matter what
nothing much to say but yes love this os
infact I love all your work you know that
now you started writing so eagerly waiting for updates of your stories
start writing dear its distract you from your personal problems
I know you are going through lot
I pray for you all problems sorted out soon so you back in original self soon
stay happy dear
thanks for pm



and yes
beautiful banner dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CindyTruong

wow beautiful banner...dear..


Glad you liked the banner dear😃 Thankyou soo much.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: binduprasad41


wow payal
thank you so much for os
I am so happy to see your pm after so many days
really so good to see you update at least something
>>> Aww 🤗


and os is just awesome no doubt in that
very well written
love it
>>> Thankyou😃

in your stories jodha is totally different from other stories
so jodha don't love jalal
both break up three years ago
but now she only landed on his department because she is frustrated , feeling guilty because of her father and also she is drunk
poor jalal he is thinking she come back to him after so long
>>> Yes dear..😛


but yes I don't like ending
you know I love happy ending no matter what
>>>> I think no one likes this os and ending😆 It's ok but I don't understand.. was it a sad ending??
I mean everyone is saying happy ending but she's happy without him na..😉

nothing much to say but yes love this os
infact I love all your work you know that
now you started writing so eagerly waiting for updates of your stories
start writing dear its distract you from your personal problems
I know you are going through lot
I pray for you all problems sorted out soon so you back in original self soon
stay happy dear
>>>> Thankyou so much, Bindu😃

thanks for pm



and yes
beautiful banner dear
>>>> glad you liked the banner dear😃

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