Akdha OS- One single night * Note on page 18* (23/10/2016)

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: eshalli
Awesome os dear
Beautiful banner. ..
Thxc 4r pm dear

Thankyou eshalli😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: manu_ak
This was one nice piece of work ...
But the ending was sad 🥺

Thanks dear..😊 Are why sad?😆

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

well.. no second part for this.. as I wanted this ending only😆 and about "DOMINATING , FURIOUS & POSSESSIVE but also CARING Jalal... ", I have written an os but yet to type so just wait for few days.. I think you will like that os and jalal..😛

OMG , ek aur OS...

& i like this one too its just that i don't want any of them to be sad in the end...😭

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
I was Superglad to se your PM in my inbox
>> Aww🤗

Superb OS, ofcourse a hot one😳
>>> Thankyou so much Rahi😛

Jo's state was like she was entangled in so many issues
& found her solace in Jalal
>>> Hmm.. not solace.. but yes she forgot her issues when she was with him..
She just let out her frustrations in that way and you can say she used jalal/his body to do this.

Leaving Jalal confused on this encounter she again left in her world of worries...
>>> Yes.. she left but she gave a thought as I wrote in os... As she had so many issues so she wasn't ready to get into a relationship with his EX,AGAIN.😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: swetiii
wow
wow
wow
payu di
u are back
will read asap & comment
and..
welcome back dii

yesh.. I am back😎

Thankyou dear🤗🤗🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: swetiii
and yeah
waiting for ur updates of ff
plz update them asap

Sure dear!!😊

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Superb banner payal.

Its not that no one liked the ending. But kya karein. Ja without jo or jo without ja feels so incomplete. This has happened after watching joja movie and serial😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: GERUA
too hot to handle

Aww you liked this os. Thankyou so much😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
regarding update u pen down all the emotions very well so it's super duper update...
Ending I didn't like she just used his emotions nd desire as per her will nd left

Glad you liked my writing dear.. and about ending, I completely understand your point of view😃

Yes.. She used him/his body and just left. She used him to let out her frustrations in this form. She didn't expect that he will take it seriously😆 and obviously anyone would feel that way na.. when your ex suddenly came back to you then you shall feel that he/she still have feelings for you.