NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 12- Chapter 17

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini
Harshu di,

That was another beautiful musing from your end. Have really been missing the muser in you, while adoring the author in you just as much!

Out of the two pictures, I prefer the first one, it has that listless, lost in contemplation thing about her... with the slightest hint of colour on her porcelain cheeks, was just trying to imagine this expression on the latest illustration of Heera from Lashy di!

Well said 👏

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Terrible headache...can't read now..😭

Will read tomorrow...sorry di

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Agree with you... a happy princess makes a happy mother, a happy mother lifts the spirit of the author and she's happy, and a happy author certainly makes the readers super-happy! 😊

So sweet of both of you... 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Kuki715
Terrible headache...can't read now..😭
Will read tomorrow...sorry di

Get well soon, dear... rest well (like Harka says)

Imagine Khan Sahib... and all will be fine... 😉

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: roseraja1915
Lashy dear, thank you so much for posting the update. Glad to know Rithi is on the mend and you are good as well.
Thanks Rose... 🤗
Truth be told, when you gave us a Harka Sahiba with impaired vision, I had trouble coming to terms with a 'flawed' heroine.
But it is that small flaw, if you can call it that, in an otherwise flawless girl that draws him to her.. that makes him want to protect her... that makes Khan Sahib not want to leave her to face her enemies alone...
Of course, it's the fact that she's such a positive person despite that flaw that makes her seem all the more special
But now I simply love her handicap because that has been the sole reason for all the close encounters between the two troubled souls.😃😃😃 First at the canal bank and now at the meadows, her partial blindness seems to be the catalyst in their love story. This chapter gets a curtsy from me and lots of claps 👏👏👏.
Thank dear... thanks a lot 🤗

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Shraddha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: --a.ishu--
Lashy diii!!! 🤗 your writing is a magic!! The first few chapters of HBAS made me cry for hours dii!!
Really?
Even thinking of them get me shivering!! Durga bai and harka bai.. Siblings who are so similar yet so different!!
Thanks a lot dearie... thanks a lot 🤗
One update from you.. I forget that i have exams.. And start reading them!! Missing NJAPA days!! Res!!!!
Which exams are you giving btw? 🤗 All the best for them..

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Image result for crying in buckets emoticons

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Some moments are there in everyone's life, which touches the deep of heart without any particular reason. For me this chapter contains those moments in Heera's life. A small time together in the meadows with the 'stranger'... and the moment must have been embalmed in the deepest of her heart forever. This chapter gifted me with an immense soothing feeling in my heart... Loved the part of the conversation, and Heera's lonely moments of nurturing those thoughts... 😳

The chapter has some interesting points too I guess... A composed Heera writing letter to Mahindar, and has come up with a good plan of sending it at the right place. Heera's methodical approach to every matter and the ability of coming out with a mature solution so calmly is really appreciable. 16 years is not an age of taking a decision so articulately about difficult and complex political matters- though that time 16 years old are easily considered to be in adult group, but the complications and adversities against her has compelled her to become more matured, and being a heiress of aristocratic birth and a composed young lady by nature, she is able to sit for any test in her life!

If Heera's plan succeeds Mahindar will get to know about Heera's whereabouts and will start executing his further plans. Here Heera is imprisoned under Akbar's eyes, and there Mahindar, whom she thinks her biggest well-wisher, is also from the enemy camp. Heera has nowhere to go fleeing from the shadow of the shrewd prince... The story is growing more and more irresistibly interesting day by day! 😃 😃

Now Heera in her emotional turmoil blurted out the poem of her Jiji in front of Akbar, which most probably is a clue of reaching to the farmaan... Akbar is too much intelligent, and he will fathom it very soon!! 😲 He has already guessed that the farmaan is right in her own house and he will get that... It is interesting to feel Akbar's inner tussle between his love and his duty to the prince. For this moment, probably the duty comes first to him...

The best part of the chapter was the time they spent together, needless to say! This part can only be cherished; I have no ability to explain the feelings in words. Loved the way they opened up their agony in front of themselves, and their pains are completely same... In spite of being completely different individuals of different mindset, background and personality, the first time both realized that they are so same from inside; the string of pain of losing the dear ones have bound them in a single strain... Heera's tears, Akbar's support to her... everything was so heartwarming and soothing!

One of the gossip girl has spotted them! OMG! 😲 😆

Loved the chapter di! Waiting for next...