NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 12- Chapter 17

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jayaks02

@jayaks02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

In the shining yellow Heera looks absolutely lovely, hauntingly beautiful and timless.

An ethereal beauty - No wonder Khan has fallen so so in love.

She is UNMATCHED 😃

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

interesting chapter, Lashy...AMK cares for Heera...but due to his loyalty towards Shehezaade, he is in two minds... but for how long...

if he is aware of Khalil's every deed, then is he aware of Mahendar's betrayal, as well? coz the way he cares for her, should not allow him to let her get closer to Mahendar...

waiting for next update... I am still not able to understand, but there is something I feel is missing, or may be I missed out..😕

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misty

@misty22

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Oh lashy diii ur one of a kind... Wat mst i say.. M speechless.. M spellbound... Jst m at lack of wrds... My wrds wnt be able to do justice to ur exceptional wrk.. No one cn eva match upto ur level of perfection... U sure na dat u weren't a writer eva.nd d way u described heera's beauty in dat shinning yellow i cn fantasise it all before me.. AKM cares fr her bt wat to do loyalty too hs its own value nd d last line wat shd i say.. M soo heart filled.. Cz d way u potrayed every scene wether its a lv sensation or political demandind of d scene... U execute it sooo well dat ur brain runs at horsepower speed... No doubt... Ur magical poetical chappy is a peace for d soul... Nd m a crazy fan of urs.. I thnk u fr ds extraordinary wrk of urs.. Nd i consider myself fortune to be a reader of ds flawless story...u hv hypnotised me... I heartily appreciate ur efforts... Thnku fr pm nd update asap... M waiting... 😳😳

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harshal

@harshu27

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: lashy

chalo we will give u also a hug🤗

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eshalli

@eshalli

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Superb chapter dear
Thxc 4r pm

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Shraddha

@lashy

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
Interesting chapter, Lashy...AMK cares for Heera...but due to his loyalty towards Shehezaade, he is in two minds... but for how long...
Yes... wohi sawaal hai.. how long... 😛

if he is aware of Khalil's every deed, then is he aware of Mahendar's betrayal, as well? coz the way he cares for her, should not allow him to let her get closer to Mahendar...
He is not yet aware of Mahendar's betrayal na... that is the information that Chota Faizan was bringing him... but got killed midway... so no, AMK doesn't know about Mahendar... ... 🤔

waiting for next update... I am still not able to understand, but there is something I feel is missing, or may be I missed out..😕

What happened Dikshu... I get the feeling from past few chapters, that you're not able to enjoy this story...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

Ditto...😛

😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: jayaks02
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful Chapter.
Yayyy thank you thank you thank you!

But you broke my heart with the last line.
😲

NOOO - Akbar should not have the linen washed. He should caress the Cloth in later chapters in the fond and loving memory of Heera till she comes back to his arms. 😃 😆

Please !!!!!!!!
OMG srividhya that's so filmy 😆 but I am glad you liked the chapter dear... 🤗
thanks so much for the thumbs up on the painting... she's my personal favourite too!

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: misty22
Oh lashy diii ur one of a kind... Wat mst i say.. M speechless.. M spellbound... Jst m at lack of wrds... My wrds wnt be able to do justice to ur exceptional wrk.. No one cn eva match upto ur level of perfection... U sure na dat u weren't a writer eva.nd d way u described heera's beauty in dat shinning yellow i cn fantasise it all before me..
Thanks a lot dear... am glad you enjoy reading what I write😳

AKM cares fr her bt wat to do loyalty too hs its own value nd d last line wat shd i say.. M soo heart filled.. Cz d way u potrayed every scene wether its a lv sensation or political demandind of d scene... U execute it sooo well dat ur brain runs at horsepower speed... No doubt... Ur magical poetical chappy is a peace for d soul...
Thank you dear... 😳
Nd m a crazy fan of urs.. I thnk u fr ds extraordinary wrk of urs.. Nd i consider myself fortune to be a reader of ds flawless story...u hv hypnotised me... I heartily appreciate ur efforts... Thnku fr pm nd update asap... M waiting... 😳😳
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