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divyavm

@divyavm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

My Dear Lashy's Banjaras

I have written to every clan, tribe and people group I can think of and no one seems to be getting my messages. So now I know that I must appeal to you for some news from the outside world. As you must know, ( you know a lot more than me) I am unavoidably detained at Aidabad and am making the best of a bad situation. When I say 'bad' , I mean...something is happening and it's started happening to me. The heart flutters and the instant joy of seeing my host has kept me going. I hope it has kept you all also following along so far. But I suspect there is more that is keeping you hooked. I may seem clueless but rest assured, when I put all the clues together, I will not be surprised. So please do by pass the obstacles and communicate to me what you do know. I cannot over state how urgent this matter is.

Your Harka Bai.

Heera,

Sometimes life does throw surprising turns ... sometimes it is better to not know everything. Ignorance is bliss like your sunshine-filled giggle.

If you know what danger lurked around you, you may wish to flee but you would find yourself in the clutches of unknown dangers far worse.

Hence, it is better you do not know, it is better you do not leave. That is why destiny conspires that you stay right where you are.

Your well-wisher

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..Anusha..

@..Anusha..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: divyavm

Heera,

Sometimes life does throw surprising turns ... sometimes it is better to not know everything. Ignorance is bliss like your sunshine-filled giggle.

If you know what danger lurked around you, you may wish to flee but you would find yourself in the clutches of unknown dangers far worse.

Hence, it is better you do not know, it is better you do not leave. That is why destiny conspires that you stay right where you are.

Your well-wisher

Dear Well Wisher

Are you a Banjara? Or an interceptor of my scrolls? I didn't ask to know everything. I didn't even care about dangers lurking around me until you reminded me. You seem to be implying that I am blissfully ignorant. I want to assure you that I can face the truth. I am already sensing you want to keep me here and Banjaras do want that too ( for different reasons which I can't write about ). All right! I am back where I began! Nowhere !

Harka Bai.

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selvi1275

@selvi1275

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Note to readers - Please don't read the comments before you read this one!

Is that for ME???""😲😭

Edited by selvi1275 - 9 years ago

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Hello lashy diii ...

I knew that from very beginning that Ustaad is none other than AMK only ...
But aap itni jldi reveal kr doge yh nhi pta tha ... 😆

Ustaad gave all details to shehzade ...
Now m thinking .. Wats the difference between shehzade nd AMK ... 🤔
Indirectly nd unfortunately, he also become the part of durga bai's death ..

Wow ... That mahendra is maha kamina ... Not only he is greedy to conquer panagarh ... He is the sole reason for heart wrenching incident ...
He helped khalil nd gave all information regarding haveli ... Pathetic ...
Coward ... It means he was doing drama of love wid durga ...😡 disgusting ...

Laat part was amazing ...
Bahadur ignoring khan sahib 😆 .. Nd giving importanace to heera ...

Loved it ..
Update soon

Edited by Priyankaakdha - 9 years ago

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

My heart was beating fast the whole time while reading the chapter. Was taken aback to know akbar was the ustaad of shehzaade.

Last part was fun to read after the suspense ka khulasa part. Even bahadur has fallen for our angel harka sahiba😳

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

The story goes..

He goes to the war camp to meet

The shezada who was there to greet;

Who is he who is so close to the lord

But for the Ustad, who has mastered the fight with the sword?

Ustad is the man , a right hand to the Prince

The man who , also the officer of intelligence

Given the job of spying her

And the whereabouts of the Farmaan so dear

Lo! The author's brilliance seen in the scene

During the game of cards the two played between

When the Shezada asks him in words so straight

The latest about the heiress who took to flight

Ustad! a man trained by the Prince

And hence loyal to him , lies for once..

Hiding some facts he chose to prefer

With his heart full of thoughts of her..

Her statement keeps haunting his mind

"I am blind,..actually , ...partially blind!"

Oh!..What a twist to the tale so perfect

What a pleasant shock that no one did predict

When we find Ustad is none other than Akbar with the muzzle

Everything falls into its place like a jigsaw puzzle..

Does the prince notice his little pretension?

Will he trust him for his future retention?

The art of story telling reaches its pinnacle

In the creation of situations with the suspense to tackle

What a wonderful and suspenseful chapter

The author has given us in a platter

We waited like the impatient father

To see the face of the new born and gather

It in our arms and kisses we want to shower!

Ah lo! the baby is a bunch of beautiful flowers!

Karkuzhali

Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

wow aunty , another fabulous verse...👏

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The story goes..

He goes to the war camp to meet
The shezada who was there to greet;
Who is he who is so close to the lord
But for the Ustad, who has mastered the fight with the sword?
Ustad is the man , a right hand to the Prince
The man who , also the officer of intelligence
Given the job of spying her
And the whereabouts of the Farmaan so dear

Lo! The author's brilliance seen in the scene
During the game of cards the two played between
When the Shezada asks him in words so straight
The latest about the heiress who took to flight
Ustad! a man trained by the Prince
And hence loyal to him , lies for once..
Hiding some facts he chose to prefer
With his heart full of thoughts of her..

Her statement keep haunting his mind
"I am blind,..actually , ...partially blind!"
Oh!..What a twist to the tale so perfect
What a pleasant shock that no one did predict
When we find Ustad is none other than Akbar with the muzzle
Everything falls into its place like a jigsaw puzzle..
Does the prince notice his little pretension?
Will he trust him for his future retention?

The art of story telling reaches its pinnacle
In the creation of situations with the suspense to tackle
What a wonderful and suspenseful chapter
The author has given us in a platter
We waited like the impatient father
To see the face of the new born and gather
It in our arms and kisses we want to shower!
Ah lo! the baby is a bunch of beautiful flowers!

Karkuzhali

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The story goes..
 
He goes to the war camp to meet
The shezada who was there to greet;
Who is he who is so close to the lord
But for the Ustad, who has mastered the fight with the sword?
Ustad is the man , a right hand to the Prince
The man who , also the officer of intelligence
Given the job of spying her
And the whereabouts of the Farmaan so dear


Lo! The author's brilliance seen in the scene
During the game of cards the two played between
When the Shezada asks him in words so straight
The latest about the heiress who took to flight
Ustad! a man trained by the Prince
And hence loyal to him , lies for once..
Hiding some facts he chose to prefer
With his heart full of thoughts of her..


Her statement keep haunting his mind
"I am blind,..actually , ...partially blind!"
Oh!..What a twist to the tale so perfect
What a pleasant shock that no one did predict
When we find Ustad is none other than Akbar with the muzzle
Everything falls into its place like a jigsaw puzzle..
Does the prince notice his little pretension?
Will he trust him for his future retention?


The art of story telling reaches its pinnacle
In the creation of situations with the suspense to tackle
What a wonderful and suspenseful chapter
The author has given us in a platter
We waited like the impatient father
To see the face of the new born and gather
It in our arms and kisses we want to shower!
Ah lo! the baby is a bunch of beautiful flowers!


Karkuzhali



👏
another mater piece aunty
superb

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

wow...as the story progresses it bringing amazing twists and shocking revealations.

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The story goes..

He goes to the war camp to meet
The shezada who was there to greet;
Who is he who is so close to the lord
But for the Ustad, who has mastered the fight with the sword?
Ustad is the man , a right hand to the Prince
The man who , also the officer of intelligence
Given the job of spying her
And the whereabouts of the Farmaan so dear

Lo! The author's brilliance seen in the scene
During the game of cards the two played between
When the Shezada asks him in words so straight
The latest about the heiress who took to flight
Ustad! a man trained by the Prince
And hence loyal to him , lies for once..
Hiding some facts he chose to prefer
With his heart full of thoughts of her..

Her statement keeps haunting his mind
"I am blind,..actually , ...partially blind!"
Oh!..What a twist to the tale so perfect
What a pleasant shock that no one did predict
When we find Ustad is none other than Akbar with the muzzle
Everything falls into its place like a jigsaw puzzle..
Does the prince notice his little pretension?
Will he trust him for his future retention?

The art of story telling reaches its pinnacle
In the creation of situations with the suspense to tackle
What a wonderful and suspenseful chapter
The author has given us in a platter
We waited like the impatient father
To see the face of the new born and gather
It in our arms and kisses we want to shower!
Ah lo! the baby is a bunch of beautiful flowers!

Karkuzhali