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This is simply simplicity simplified!
(Pardon my syntax errors, dint know what better way to put it - but this is exactly what I feel about your story😳)
There is nothing unique, but it is obviously beautiful - there is no bombardment of emotionally draining drama, but the emotions do make it appealing - there isn't a saga full of surprises at every turn with shocking events awaiting you at the cross roads, but it is a journey claiming to be remembered - it isn't exotic, but definitely sweet!
So far, I have enjoyed this journey, so typical of you, full of savoury simplicity which I infer is something NATURAL about your stories - but I loved it like that 😊
The friends are a treat, the siblings are but eye candies worth a second serving, this college is turning out into a joyride of sorts, with the Jalal and Jodha spinning up and down the cartwheels!
The carnival of togetherness, lighted up with twinkling lamps of friendship, strong bonding - stronger understanding. You have suspended suspense elements, amidst this mega fruit cake, what with a comatose Salima hidden from the family by a visibly weakening Hamida and the college bully Adham, sticking out like a sore thumb.
Little Noor surely deserves a special mention as her charming innocence and Cupid like interventions often serve as a bonus point of the chapter. She is lovely! But not more than you❤️
So this gang is upto some secret mission and we have had the couple stealing some moments of accidental romance, too - that's cute! Waiting for more to unravel, praying for a mission successful and wishing for the romance to blossom soon...
Thanks a lot for putting up with me, and regularly dropping by pms - my festive wishes for you!!!
Will be waiting for the update and your response! 😳
Adwitiya...
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