Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 81

awasome update
thanks for pm
adham was disgusting
jalal plan was superb
waiting for next update update soon

Awesome chapter dear
Loved it
Ja gives gud punishment to Adham
He deserves it..
Poor jo lost her parents on her b'day
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

Amazing chapter dii!

Wonderful chappy garnished with romance 😊

wow avika Di
just wow
what a power pack update you give
we never imagine story goes like this
love you so much for this chapter
OK I know we all impress with jalal idea but idea given and well executed by our dear author
really I am impress with you Di and of course with our hero also
he is pretty smart
how can he let go adham easily
nobody mess with jalal close one
adham like seriously he can't even think other than women
each time his brain lingering around girls
maham give him last warning but he don't care anything
but yes maham planning something big
her intention is not good
I don't know why I think maham involved in salima accident
maham herself is women but she don't understand women feeling also
she don't feel bad for nafisa
she only care for adham
she warn him only because nafisa is soul sister of jalal
adham he deserve worst punishment
now also he is thinking for jodha
OK so that girl is Divya street girl
we never imagine that girl
jodha is shock to see her
of course we also how we think that jalal involved teen girl but she is necessary in plan
her teen age is main weapon in jalal plan
jalal also surprise to know that jodha knows Divya
but jodha reply very smartly
and Di you manage to give little romance also
and this time romance effect more to jodha
poor girl
Divya smart girl
she trust jalal so much that she involved in this plan
but feel little scare of course she is just teen so this is natural
my god adham don't leave small girl also
how can he think to do that with teen girl
he just don't care about anything
he just want girl to warm his bed
Divya act smartly
she timely did everything
and Abdul and Reva come to help her
love Reva dialogue most
jodha enjoying Reva dialogue and laughing so hard
so jalal much do something to shush her
and jodha can't stay away from plan
adham reveal sardarji romantic scene
Abdul very know about that
but jalal don't even let him speak
adham torture lots of girl
he deserve that kind of punishment
Reva also take her revenge
so moti and surya act media person
everything so well plan
now nobody save adham
his each details circulated in social networking site
at last how can jodha let him go without her punishment
cafeteria scene is so touching
jalal really a good human being
his and Divya bond is so pure
he really care for her
jodha now fall more for him
why not jalal is gem and good human being
OK so next chapter is about jodha birthday
and she don't want to celebrated it
but jalal is there so he definitely plan something for her
of course he celebrate her birthday in different way but yes not grand way
and one more time Di I just love this chapter
very well written
your ideas is always different and great
love you
thanks for pm

wooow diii amazing jalal ka mind just muaaah and poor jodha.. oooh di i enjoyed it alot its wonderful chapter and next time full of akdha scenes ok iam waiting haha thanks for pm dii..

What a zabardast update and zabardast dhulayi of adham. Bravo👏

Avikka pls. Read on 1st thread also