Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct - Page 78

Originally posted by: eshalli

Awesome chapter dear
Loved it
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

Originally posted by: ajuswa19pm

di!!!!!!!!!!🤗 i loved

the lift scene!😉

Thanks a lot ajju ...aww u loved lift scene 😳

jo & ja

i love sujamal & moti they

r cuteis :*

Hehehe...glad u liked Moti and sujamal's pair

n sad jala :(

he cann't make it to d party!

Its ok ...he will get more chances in future

but i guess the call was

importanat 1 nhi?😲

Important...hmm...may be

di 1st toh the chappy was chottu n then

u ended it here? post soon!

I know why u felt this chappy small...compared to ur updates this is nothing ..i know 😆

love u😳

Originally posted by: piya58

Soo nice chappy
Update
Thanku 😊

Originally posted by: Annie15

wow diii... amazing chapter..

Thanks a lot annie 😊
so it was sujamal and moti who saw jo-ja...

Yup ..it was Moti and suja 😉
the shopping mall and the lift part was amazing...

Aww im glad u liked that scene dear
continue soon..dii..

Will update soon
thanks for pm...
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Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Moti is such a darling SIL -very protective of Jodha.

Yup Moti is indeed a darling ...she is everything to Jodha .😊

Jalal has found his heart 👏👏👏 and it beats for our girl,

Hmmm he found his heart which beats for this unfamiliar stranger

Jodha! So sweet to read about the early stages of lovey-dovey feelings blossoming in the lovely couple.

It is always exciting to read about the new born unknown feelings ,right 😉

The circumstances that bring them together are really fun to read - the lift scene is so yummy!

Im so pleased to know this Rose 😳

Oh the phone call- did something happen to Noor? Don't keep us on tenterhooks for long- please update soon!

Hahahah...by now u know what exactly happened right 😉 so u got u answer 😆

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

awesome update Di

Thanks a lot bindu 😊
so beautifully and perfectly written

U really think so ?? So sweet yaar 😊
you give all characters equal importance

I try my best to give importance to all characters dear ..but sometimes i fail to do justice with few of them .
love the quote you added in first which express lot

Aww ...u noticed ...thanks re 😳
so moti and sujamal see them
not rukaiya thank God

Yes ,its Moti and Sujamal not rukkaiya ...😉
I thought something negative you know

Lol...i understand...but this will come in the way one day or the other bindu ..so be prepared dear😉
I like so much moti and sujamal
both are so sweet and caring

When i coupled Moti and Sujamal...i was not sure if people will like their pair or not but u guys really surprised me...im so happy that u people like Moti ajd sujamal too

both loves jodha to the core

Undoubtedly yes 😳
poor moti she is so scare to answer sujamal

Obviously she will be scared na...sujamal's interogation really terrified her 😆

sujamal also want proper answer

Hmm yes 😉
when moti say jalal is Reva brother
God sujamal answer is so funny

He loves teasing his wife a lot
seriously friends brother is like brother
I laughing so much seeing moti reaction

Lol...im happy i could make u laugh
but sujamal only teasing moti
moti is so angry to see him laughing but she melt after seeing his gesture

Hmm
what a husband and wife relationship na
both are so cute always teasing each other, love their bonding

Hmm lovely couple ...and i love writing about them
poor moti so tense because of jodha
she can't able to sleep whole night

Yes dear after all she is her sister in law and somewhere or the other Jodha is her responsibility too ..so yes she is concerned about her alot 😉
jodha told her everything, poor girl she is so much in pain to describe that ugly incident

It wont be so easy for any girl na ...though Jodha is strong still it sometimes twists her heart
moti is more than friend or bhabhi to her

They both share a special bonding which is inevitable 😊
she care for jodha more than bhabhi which reflect through her gesture

Yes 😊
now moti also know how jalal help her
I hope she help their relationship in future

If something is in her hand ..she will definetly help dear
moti also told her about sujamal inquiries
moti don't like to call bhabhi in college but jodha always call her that only

Jodha is aadat se majboor ...ghar mein she calls bhabhi and in college she has to call by her name...sometimes her toungue slips 😆
aww jalal is so sweet thinking about nafisa
such a caring brother

Jalal has all the qualities a girl would ever wish for 😉
without blood relationship both share such a strong bond
jalal thinking about all the incident happen
how much he is happy to remember that
only jodha thought bring smile in his lip

Jodha always brings smile on his lips ,thats my Jodhas magic 😃
poor guy fall in love for the first time
so beautifully written that part Di

Thanks a lot dear 😳
I just love the sentence in black which express lot his feeling towards her

Awieee...love u loads dear
very well written about love
girl gang going for shopping , poor jodha unwillingly join them
everybody so shock to see Abdul and Reva together

Another new couple ...😉
all are happy for them
I just love your jalal Di

I try my best to make girls fall for my Jalal 😆
such a beautiful gem he is , how much he is taking care of nafisa, how much he understand nafisa state of mind so to cheer up her he bring her to shopping and selecting clothes for her how sweet

He truly understands her state of mind dear and thus trying his bet to pull her out of this emotional trauma 😳
jodha was pretty much impress with him and me also
why not how can somebody resist him

Exactly ...Jalal is irresistable 😉

knowingly or unknowingly Abdul help jalal
poor jodha she is not able to understand her feeling
in his presence she is conscious, her heart beating fast more than usual, she wanted to run from his presence

Jodha is a confused soul as for now while Jalal somewhere knows he likes her 😊
Reva can't able to leave her boyfriend Abdul in elevator also
jodha is so much embarrass with jalal close proximity
and jalal is very much happy with her presence

Lol ...side effects of falling in love

but he can able to express to he make straight face

Poor boy ..cant show his excitement in front of everyone na 😆
jodha felt bad when he is going
she herself confuse with her own behavior
I hope one day both know what was that feeling

Sure jaan they will know their feelings soon ...it will take some time though ..but sure they will 😉
now both only hiding their feeling from each other, one day both express this proudly to each other
OK why bairam Khan call him suddenly
everybody assume that things related to salima but I guess you come up with different story as always

Wow ...thats right ...u guessed it correctly
we can't predict na
ones again I like this chapter so much Di

So sweet of u dear
eagerly waiting for next chapter
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Mind blowing update
thanks for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: konakalla

Akka it's just an awesome chappy

But I am for them to realize their feelings and proposing

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Hello avikkka diii 🤗

Priyu 🤗
Wow ..
Update pe update ...
Ho kya rha h ...
Meko mehnat hi nhi krni pad rhi h ... 😉 😆
Lol ...khali thi toh update de diya re 😆😆 dont worry next time pakka mehnat karwaungi 😉
Sujamal saw joja together .. 🤣

Hahaha...yeh tih hona hi tha ek din 😉
I was laughing imagining moti's expressions ...
Poor soul ...

Moti's expressions would be worth watching im sure 😆
Suja teased moti saying if jalal is bro of reva them it must be urs too ...

Hmm he is tease a thorn 😆
Shukr h jo ka nhi bnaya ... Vrna hmara kya hota ... Moti ne hme or joja dono ko bacha lia ...
Lol aur kya ...waise dont worry ...main hun na 😉
Jo explained everything to moti that y she didnt come nd call her ...
Moti deserves explanation and so did Jodha
All went for shopping ... Bevhare salesman ki rail bna di ... Girls shopping m yhi hota h .. 😆

Tum toh experienced lag rahi ho shopping mein , salesman ko aise hi pareshaan karti ho kya tum bhi
Seniors were also there ...

Oho .. So new couple .. Reva Abdul ...

Yeah ...a new couple 😉
Shopping ...
Lift scene was amazing ... Ahem ahem ...
Joja pass pass .. Dhak dhak ...

Hahaha...that was something very unexpected haina 😉
Jalal must be doing bhangra within feeling jo so close to him .. Cherry on the top .. Lift stuck ...

Only bhangra...jallu ke man mein toh saltza ...hiphop..jazz samba ...sabhi chal raha hoga 😆
[:D/]
Jo k bhi laddoo foot rhe honge ... 🤣
Jo ke laddo se zyada sweating foot rahi thi 😆
Bairam called jalal ..
Dont know ...
For Salima or noor or hamida ...
None of them 😆
Lets see ..
Waiting for next ..
Yh chap bhot chota tha dii ...

Update soon

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Wow suja is over protective brother moti saved jo... lovely update last part scary hope everything is ok..continue soon nd do pm