Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct

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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
Plzz update ... Plz update ... Plzz update

Plzz update ... Plz update ... Plzz update

Plzz update ... Plz update ... Plzz update

Zarur 😉

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: swetiii
updateee plzzz

U gave teazing teaser and ran away

Now dont ask for any upate untill u post ur chapter ...ok 😆

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.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Chapter 9:

So,my guess was right..the lady in hospital is Salima but the twist is Hamida is aware of her daughter being alive.You've written the patient's condition and mother's pain very well👏

Good that Moti's misconception got cleared😆 Loved Jo's POV reg Jalal❤️ HIS pain is making HER restless😉

The entire part of Jalal's reverie,his guilt looking at Hamida's state and finally letting out his pain in the form of tears is so emotional😭😭.Hope the relation b/w son and mother changes into a better one.

But it was so good to see the change in him brought by the lovely owner of sparkling object😉Beautiful song too😊

I just hate this Adham😡He is such a 🤬..This thing was again unexpected.Jalal's pain and guilt hidden under his anger is justified in Nafisa's case.

Jodha is really brave to come up with such plan,fully aware of Adham's nature⭐️

Loved Jo and Jalal's dialogues,akka.❤️

I'm in love with your Jo,Jalal,ur writing and the story❤️

Edited by .AkDhian. - 9 years ago

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
Wow wow wow ...😆
Double update ...
Hahaha. Haan re ...double update ...i just want to finish this story soon and then i wont write anything again in future 😆
Yayayay 🥳
>>>>> 🥳
Amazing update ...
Thanks priyu and trust me ...its only for u i updated this chap
Jo got ready for their plan .. Jalal was still unsure about it ..
The plan is dangerous ..and so he is unsure
Jo called adham nd said she wants to meet him nd say sorry ...
Adham suspiciously asked y she want to ..
Jo nervous .. Jalal super nervous ..
Umm why do i feel u were more nervous then them 😆
Adham asked jo to meet him in his house ...
He is a leechad in real 😆😡
Jalal was pissed off when jo accepted to go...
Jo accepted being a overconfident girl ...but jalal knew very well aboit adham and so was scared
I loved it when jo tried to explain jalal ... Haayyee .. Important ho gya h jalu ...
Hmmm...jo ke liye jallu imp hai and jallu ke liye jo imp hai 😉
Joja reached at adham's place ..
Jo nervous ...
Hmm afterall she knows what adham has in his mind for her
Sujamal call ... Jo lost in hr call .. Jo suggested suja to take full advantage with moti in the absence of jo ...
Jo rocked jalal shocked ... 🤣
Hahahah... a cute conversation between bhai and behen
Jalal assured jo that he is with her ..
Yes he is and will always be there for her 😉
Nd here comes adham ...
When adham himself came to attend jo ... Mujhe pta lg gya tha ki adham knows everything ...
Hayeee... tumhe sab pata tha ??
Bcoz usne kha tha ki uska accident hua h .. Toh vo kaise aa gya khud ...
Dekha ... M smart na ... 😎
Wah waah ...ab toh ek murder mystery tumhari taraf se bji banti hai ...chalo shuru ho jao bhai 😉
Jo did everything according to plan ..spiked his drink ... But adham ko toh sb pta tha ..
Adham Jodha se do kadam aage nikla
Jo trapped ... She tried to call jalal but adham had pre - planned everything ...
Villian ko dekho kitna smart hai ...and apne Jajo ...🥱
Adham slapped twice jo nd tried to force her ...
Jalal came to save jo at nick time ...
Jalal the saviour finally came on time 😆
Joja at jalal's place ... Noor got shocked seeing her appi's condition ..
Aadhi raat ko mama ladki laye woh bhi is haalat mein toh bacchi toh shock hogi hi na 😆
I love that dialogue .. Girl's feels ticklish if boy's touches their feet ... 🤣
Hahaha...
Update soon ..
Waiting ...

HAPPY BDAY AKKU ONCE AGAIN ..
PLZ GIVE US UPDATE ASAP WITHOUT RES ...
😆

Thanks a lot priyu ...i enjoyed reading ur comment 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: misty22
Avi diii... Omg.. Omg.. Omg.. Such a remarkable chappy... I relished each nd every part... I mean i ws still craving fr more... Jalal s anger wen jo said yes to adham... It ws his love actually... Nd gosh dat adham.. He knew everything... He s sooo disgusting... I ws sooo heated up... Wen he touched jo nd slapped her askin her to cm to his room... Ergg... Dn woah... Our jalal cm nd saved her... His anger ws sooo much to destroy adham... I know he ll cm bak to trouble our akdha... Ja ws scolding jo... Bt it ws his care bd lv... Wow.. Joja together.. Nd how cute... Girls feel ticklish... Nd d way ja ws nursing her wounds... Nd jo s too falling in lv cz his proximity mks het feel comfortable... Awsm precap... Thnku fr pm nd update asap... 👏👏

Thanks a lot misty dear ,im happy that u liked the chappy . Aww u wanted to read more and i thought i already tortured u very much..so i stopped 😆 Jallu's anger was justified re , he knows Jodha was messing with fire and then his bubbling unknown feeling for Jodha made Jalal a bit more protective then usual 😆 Hahaha...why fear when Jalal is here misty ...se he came to save Jodha on time 😉 aww i happy u noticed jallu's love and care for Jodha behind his anger 😊

Will update soon dear

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment 😉

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: eshalli
Awesome chapters dear
Loved it
Continue soon

Thxc 4r pm

Thanks a lot eshu 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Shyamaladevi
Superb dear. Please post the next part asap because can't wait to see akdha's romantic breakfast moments. Thanks for pm

Aww thanks a lot dear ...and dont worry i will post the next chap as soon i finish writing 😉

Thanks for taking out time and commenting dear 😳

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
wonderful chapter , Avi..loved Jalal's care for Jo ...

just one thing... plz don't bring that idiot adham back...let him die in jail...

Thanks a lot diksha, i m happy u liked the update dear ...hahaha ...dont worry about adham...jallu will take a good care of Adham 😉

Thanks for commenting dear 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: Mavaddat
thanks for the update di...
wow...finally that coward, dickhead adham try to mess up with my jalal's Jo ...how dare he? 😡
Wow mavi...u used the exact words in my mind 😆
but now he got the lesson
ohho...JO's lesion were so so much that adham gave her ...by beating her up but my JALAL is here na 😉
Yup jallu is here
he did the treatment
noor is always cute .. I love that ticklish wala dialog...
Really u too like noor 😳
finally Jo assured him that she is fine
thanks for pm
love your update as always...update soon