Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Thread 2(uptd chp 14) pg 113 / 16 oct

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: kartikaJA
awesome update
totally love it
thanks for pm
waiting for your next update
update soon

Thanks a lot dearie 😊

Will update next part soon 😊

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.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

Chapter 10:

Part 1:

Very interesting update,akka with a major twist in the tale..actualky it's a shock😆

Also,you cleverly fooled us with these lines..didn't give any hint that Adham knew JJ's plan😉

Jodha...surprised he called her name , I'm good wassup ?? Wondering what made her call him today he asked a bit suspicious .

Meet u ?? Seriously ?? He quizzed sensing fishy .

Friendship is really a beautiful bond.How lucky Nafisa is to have such friends😊

Bhaisa ,im fine , it's only about a night and u r so worried haan ,will come back tomorrow morning , u have the whole house bhaisa , take a good advantage of it , Enjoy with my Bhabhi ok...shamelessly advising her brother , in between forgetting the person sitting besides her she smiled cheekily and the next moment when she realised what she blurted that too in front of him she swiftly craned her neck towards him who looked shocked .

>>🤣🤣

Take care of urself Jodha ...come back home soon her words sent a wave of confidence in her , she knew nothing bad can touch / happen to her when her Bhaisa and Bhabhi's prayers were with her .

>>How beautiful!!❤️

This is my number , in case u sense any trouble pls dont hesitate to call instructing her he placed his hand on her's ... Dont worry Jodha, im here only, trust me i wont let anything happen to u he uttered extremely worried for Jodha .

I trust u Jalal, she replied with a confident smile on her lips .

>>Wow

Disgusted ,she fixed her eyes on the ongoing movie which was as lewd as him but a little better when compared with him.

>>😆😆

So ...How is Nafisa now ??

>>Got a mini heart attack here and hadn't you updated part two,I would've died of anxiety😆

Your description of emotions and surroundings is too good and real,akka👏👏

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.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Part 2:

I was so scared for Jodha..poor girl ended up in trouble for the sake of her friend😭😭Adham should be punished severely that he should not even think of messing up with any other girl in future😡😡

So,Adham's friends got to know the plan and helped him..else,there was a chance for Jodha to succeed.

Thank God,Jalal entered at the right time and lovveed Adham ki dhulayi😆 but this isn't sufficient😡

He jumped on him like a wild animal and punched straight on his face ,changing its geogaraphy .

>>🤣

Becoz girls feel ticklish when boys touch them mamu ...

>> So cute😆

While Jalal was fully engrossed in his work ,she stealithly watched his features closely .

>>😆😆

He was so close to her , yet she didnt feel awful , Adham's presence made her freak but Jalal's ,made her feel secured .

Jo and Jalal started understandiing the unspoken words..beautiful👍🏼

Waiting for Jallad and Hitler's breakfast update😉

The story gets interesting with each passing update..👏❤️

Sorry again for the delay in comments..detailed comments ki time kudaratledu

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
Avika akka.. ... Omg.. Omg.. Omg... . Omg... Oh my my double update wow... ...
Hahaha ...double treat for birthday girl 😉
Such aa marvellous chappy...
Thanks re
Totally love all the line of chappy...
I relished each nd every part..
U really liked it ??
Jalal is anger wen we'd have said yes to Adham's...
Obviously he will be angry na ..when he very well knows about adham and his dirty mind
How can she do it with my jallu
She is going for nafisa 😆
.But my jallu angry.. It ws his love actually. Na.. ..
Love ...hmm may be 😉
Nd ggosh that stupid adham..
He knknell truth... ... He s sooo disgusting... I
Wen he touched jo nd slapped her askin her to cm to his room... ..
I WAS feeling to slap him too..
Hahaha u felt like slapping him ...and see jallu did ur work 😉
But wow my jallu come and saved her...
See he came on time ...thanks to abdul 😳
His anger ws sooo much to destroy adham...
Wow.. Joja together...
Nd how cute and Romantic..
Hehehe love is in the air 😉
ANd The way ja ws nurturing odha's wounds...
Nd jo s too falling in lover because his pproximity. ...
makes het feel comfortable...
Aww u liked his caring nature ...so sweet
Wow precap..
Waiting for update...
Thnku fr pm. ...
nd update asap...

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment dear

Will update next part soon

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: Monucute
Avi di🤗
Monu 🤗
Look! this time I'm on time *raising my invisible collars*😆
Wah waah ..im really shocked ...pattinng ur back 😉
I'm loving it...😉 ^_^
Really 😕
Ok, coming to Chapter...
Amazing update didu...
Im happy if u really liked the chappy 😊
The plan was dangerous and after
Adham's confession, it became more dangerous... But Jodha is our jhansi ki rani🤣 and jallu! haaye kya bolu ab😆
Jodha jhansi ki rani and jallu the saviour 😉😆
Update was written so well didu, each scene can be visualized...
And what cracked me up was "Becoz girls feel ticklish when boys touches them..." 🤣 like seriously, I liked noor from starting😉
Even i like noor yaar 😉
Waiting for next update didu...
Will try to update soon dear 😊
Please update soon...
Love you❤️

Thanks for the beautiful comment

Love u too dear 😳

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Monucute
And yeah happy birthday akku🥳

Once again Happy birthday akku

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: GERUA
fantastic update

Thnks a lot dear

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: meera_02_82
Wonderful chapterFinally adham behind bars.Very nice to see jallal' care for jodha

Thanks a lot dearie ...im glad u liked the update 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Wonderful chapter Avika😃

Thanks a lot Nonie 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Flawless update dii
Thanks Kaju 😊
Jodha and team were realdy with their plan to trap adham ...but that b****** adham's friends overheard their conversation and informed him everything 😡
They r smarter then our brave team 😆
Jo wa trapped
But jalal came on time saved her 😃
See jallu is there for Jodha
Police arrested adham 😃😃😃
He took her to his home and nursed her wounds 😳
He cant leave it just like that na so he nursed himself 😉
Thanku for pm
Continue soon