A half story of love part 2,3,4 & last part updated 1/9/2016 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Us book ne uski kismat bdal di use wo mila jo jo use hasil tha lakin phir bhi kisi jagah use wo tanahi k

Jakham de rahi thi wo roz wahi jata jhan se usne suruaat ki ,,lakin kya raste apne aap use uske paas le skte the nahi fir v wo use dkhta hi rhta ,,,,, uss book ne logo ki ankho ko nam kiya ,,, logo ka shayar ke liye pyar bhi bdha wahi shyar anjaano kit rah apne app ko tlaash rha tha ,,, koi esa na tha jo use whi halat de ske ,,,,

Uss ladki ko bilkul bhi andaza nhi tha kya koi ladka itni mohbbat kar skta hail akin esa toh ho hi chukka tha uski friend aur classmate ne use mafi mangi par iska uske liye koi matlab nhi tha ,

Usne kha kbhi kiski jindgi mein yu mat aana ki us se bas nafart ho jaye wo bhi kbhi khtam na hone wali. Jisne bhi book padhi wo uske drd ko batna chata lakin wo kisi se nhi milne chata hai.wo bss apne ansho ko apne tak hi simit rakhna chata tha

Ladki kuch din baad apne ghar aayi toh usne socha chlo dkha jaye apne pyaar ko toh dkha wow ha nhi tha ...wo ghar ki traf gyi toh dkha ladka toh bilkul changed tha ...use dkh ladki ne kha kya baat bdi aag lagi rkhi lottery lag gyi kya . ladke na jan bughkar hard jwab diya mam saab ye toh aapki lagyi hai ...hum toh sirf jalte hai.

Usne kha kya hua shayari chod di kya..shayar ne uska jwab bhi diya kuch yu

Avin smghi na ki ro ke din katle ,

Tere drd mein smbhal ke rakhle,

Ni sou lage jis din gayi tu chdke jindgi ka wkhra swaal ho gya,

Likhe jo lekh tere dekh jindgi meri mein kmaal ho gya,

Ladki ne kha chod do likhna kuch nhi bnna tumhra ... ladke ne kha mghe yhi dkhna hai kit um kya kar skti ho. Tumne pyar kiya hota tmhe pta chlta pyar kya hota hai feel hota .. usne kha rahn do mghe pta hai aaur wo khakr chali jati hai.

Aur ladke ko ehssas hota hai kya usne kya really pyar kiya tha yaw o kuch or tha aur wo uss khyal ko chod deta hai .

Jab ladki ghar se susral jar hi hoti hai toh uski saheli use wo book thma deti hai wo wha se chli jati hai . susral m jaa kar wo book ko dkhti hai aur wo chonk jati hai ,,,uski dhadkan tezz ho jati hai. Uss ladke ka name dkhkar use shock lga phir usne pdhna suru kiya aur pdhte pdhte wo rone lagti hai wo sari shayari suru se jab use sirf feelings thi tab se suru thi ... uski wo pyari shayari ...toh uski aankhe tapkne lagti hai par wo book ko continue rakhti hai rote ab wo uske drd ko pdhna suru krti hai toh uski zuban ladkhdne lgti hai .

Use apne aap pe gussa aane lagta hai. Ki sirf usne uss ko itne drd m chod diya usne puri raat kitab padhi aur roti rahi . ab uske liye hare k sans swal krta ki kyu kiya esa tumne aur last page padhke wo khudpe chilate hai .. I hate myself ab use sb begana legta uss ladki har wo baat yaad aati hai jo usne kbhi boli thi ...

Uss last page pe yu likha tha ki ek shayar ki tmno se kalam chlti hai toh kuch likhti hi hai wo word ye the

Karta ijhaar rah gya ek tarfa pyar rah gya,

Meri khamosh mohabbat kitab likhta rah gya,

Uss ki jhalak ki khatir takta raah rah gya,

Bol ke apna wo kisi aur kaa ho gyaa,

Kagaj pe likhta likhta book mein bhi likh chla

Mein konsa likhna sikha teri pe book chpa chla

Dunia se ho juda mohabbat kisi se kar chla,

Ja khush rah tu bhi mein v dunia chad chla

Ab ladki ko dar lgne lga ki kysa hoga wo uska man vichlit ho gya ab wo kya kare usne apne aapko gunahgar man liya . wohi book uski saas pdh leti hai aur use khti hai .. kya galti thi uss ladke ki jo esa kiya uski saas ko pta nhi tha ki ye wohi ladki hai ab use rah nhi paya usne apne husband se khti mghe ghar chilye plzz uske pati ne kha kal hi tum aayi ho aur ajj phir tum chli jao mghe kaam hai

Usne kha nhi apka jana jaroori hai plz mere liye chliye wo ghar se gadi leke niklte hai par wo ladka use whi pe milta hai jha wo roz mila krte the . wo gadi rukwati hai aur gadi se utarke uske samne aakar apne hath kin ass kat leti hai aur uss ladke ki traf ishara krte hue khti hai wo mera pyar apne pati ko khti hai

Wo ladka uski traf dodta hai wo ladki behos ho chuki hoti hai kafi khoon bah jata hai h. ladka pglo ki tarah chillata hai aur ambulance kafi der se puhnchti aur use hospital le jaya jata hai ... kafi der baad dr. khta halat najuk hai kuch nhi kah skta hain ..ladki ko thoda sa hosh aata h toh wo us ladke ko bulati aur num aankho se use apne sine se lagti hai aur khti next birth m tumse bhi choti bnke aaungi sirt teri khatir aur ladki uske sar ko shlate hue hi dunia se chli jati hai... Wo ladka apna hosh kho deta hai . use do din ke bad hosh aata hai aur ghar le jaya jata hai .. ab wo esi baat krta hai ki dunia m uska kuch hai hi nhi .

Us ladki frnd usse se milne aati hai toh ladka uspe gussa hota aur khta kyu aayi ho yha pe m kisi teri frnd ko nhi janta m kal usko bhula dunga ...

After one year

Ek page chapta hai paper mein usme us ladke ki ek shayari hoti hai,

Khud nu khuda ka bna ke m dekhiya,

Kisi aur nu bhi mein chah ke vkhiye,

Har din tumhe bhulane ki kosis krke vkhiye,

Aaj ek saal ho gya hai khte ki kal bhul jaunga tne,

Aaj bhi uss rah pe jaa ke ro ro puchta hu,

Ki kab aaayega mghse milne pagal tu,

Tenu rok na paya mein rokna tumko cha,

Ek vari tu gya mudke na phir tu aaya,

Jis pal chad gyi uss pal gale lag m soya,

Uss pal ke baad m kitna tere sine pe roya,

Iss trah ek love story aadhi aadhuri rah jati hai .hmesha hum jesa sochte hai who wesa hi ho esa jaruri nhi hota. Its end of story agar wqut mila toh hum khamosh mohabbat ke bare m jarur baat krne ,

Special thanx to readers

And someone who ,,jisne mghe yha pe suggest hi nhi meri help v ki.

MERI KHAMOSH MOHABBAT (THE BROKEN HEART)

LADNA MERI KOI FITRAT TOH NHI PYAR TOH SBHI SE KRTE HO KBHI KISI KO AJMAA KE V DKH LO

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Posted: 9 years ago
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what to say about ending.. but it's a nice story..

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