OS: ||A Night After Chittor Siege|| - Page 3

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...Jalal took Jodha's head in his chest; Jodha did not protest, she only started to care the wound of his hand, which was deep enough and had not been cured yet, with her gentle touch. A drop of tear fell on his hand suddenly...

"You are angry on me. Isn't it?" Jalal said suddenly. Jodha nodded her head with the sign of negation and hugged him passionately. No! How can she be angry with the man of her heart?

"You had not come to me meet me once from morning. And not talking with me even now!" Jalal said in a sad voice. "I am feeling that the rhythm of our relationship has somehow broken! Has this war torn the thread of our relationship?"

"Nothing can create distance between you and me Shahenshah!" Jodha told confidently. "But I was thinking one thing only from morning!"...

Love is so incredible between both of them that the emperor is afraid to lose the feeling of love his wife and Jodha not afraid to say everything she thinks, knowing that Jalal is not only her husband but also the Emperor.

Feeling a Pyrrhic victory, this understanding Jalal and understanding the impossibility of any other way to save the Empire ... Perhaps he could reduce the losses, perhaps he would not allow the conversion of his men into beasts ... But the truth is, that he first became this beast...

I have little time today, but I will be re-read again. Thank you!

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awasome update
butyfully written
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Stuti di, thank you so much for the pm. I will be back soon, with the comment that I promised for New Life. I have read this OS, but my comment for this, will be compiled together with the FF one.

Since you've said this is an extended part of New Life 😊

Originally posted by: jasminegrewal98

Thanks for the pm dear!

Cant stop saying it enough just love your writing, really you are one of my favorite writer's the way you describe the characters feelings in so much depth I can really imagine the character and what they are going through, wonderful job!

Thank you so much for your beautiful words dear. 😳

Jodha's emotional turmoil is really difficult because before being the Mughal Emperor's dear wife she was the daughter of Rajputana, and she has always been really proud of that and that will always be her first identity so she was really hurt by Jalal's behaviour in this war yet her heart cant hate him now...the way you described Jodha's feelings was just fabulous and being in her position I would feel the same way is the lust for power really greater than humanity?

Actually the we can hardly feel the turmoil Jodha is going through... Connecting her fate with such a man who is far far different from her heritage, culture and morality, and hence witnessing the degeneration of the pride of Rajput clan in the hand of her husband day by day... must have been very tough!

This OS really makes you think about that because even to this day horrible wars continue to go on killing thousands of innocent people, but Jalal in his place as an Emperor just wanted to fulfill his life's dream but in the end was it really worth it when the darkness has entered his heart too...lots to think about and thats why I love your stories theres always something to think about!

War can never achieve anything! Thank you for reading this story and give it a sensible thought. 😊

Beautifully written enjoyed it a lot😃👏

Thank you for your lovely comment.😳