NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 7~ Chapter 12 - UPD 10th Aug

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Zhanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Dear Lashy!
Wonderful painting! I tried to find an artist, but I could not. Dear Lashy, are you know who is artist and what is century? I recalled the old interior of Italian films and some old apartments in Tbilisi.
Dear Saraswathi Di!
Your poems grab for the soul, but of Durga line cause a fear and a tremble again. For me Mahendra loathsome than Khalil. As a werewolf that seems as a man, but inside the decomposed cadaverous, like portrait of Dorian Gray.

Oh God! You are great!
As I walked around...
I heard voices..I heard the cry..
The cry of a woman..
The cry of the girl I was to marry..."

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: karkuzhali
Give me five!!
BTW why no response about my shoe repair?

Periamma..

Typing from phone, roaming, so unable to respond individually ...

I loved it ...

I take it, the person waiting for shoe is you...

The cobbler is me LOL

sorry if I assumed wrongly 😭

@zhanna... The artist is me and Photoshop LOL

that's why you couldn't find any

It's based on an actual16th c haveli though Smile

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karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Dear Zhanna,

Thank you very much for your compliments.

The poems were taken from internet . When I saw the picture, I thought how I can relate the feelings of these characters to the huge, empty room ..

And the lines that you have marked below in red are my additions to the poem.

Saraswathi Aunty.

Originally posted by: alffim
Dear Lashy!
Wonderful painting! I tried to find an artist, but I could not. Dear Lashy, are you know who is artist and what is century? I recalled the old interior of Italian films and some old apartments in Tbilisi.
Dear Saraswathi Di!
Your poems grab for the soul, but of Durga line cause a fear and a tremble again. For me Mahendra loathsome than Khalil. As a werewolf that seems as a man, but inside the decomposed cadaverous, like portrait of Dorian Gray.

Oh God! You are great!
As I walked around...
I heard voices..I heard the cry..
The cry of a woman..
The cry of the girl I was to marry..."

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Thank you my dear Kausi.

I miss the 'Madras dialect' after having settled here in Sydney.

Periamma.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
🤣 OMG! saavugraakki 🤣

Avalo damage ah Periamma? 😆

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Zhanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Dear Lashy!
My admiration for your art photoshop! 👏 We have site Demiart, where show works of Photoshop, for me it is unattainable art. It is interesting that this Haveli is your imagination and it is also mysterious, as your novel. Amazing portraits-medallions on the walls. And I really like the surprisingly soft, as though faded by time, the overall color tone of your picture. Powdered beige, pink, soft brown. Armchair somehow reminiscent of Voltaire, and the stone floor about Italy and the Eastern interiors. The a room in which live temporarily, not paying attention to this room, it has a little abandoned form, but in the room was good to live in, and this the room is also waiting of new life.
Dear Saraswathi Di!
These poems is your source of inspiration, but what you wrote is - already a new, more wonderful work. I understood that it's your creativity. 😊

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.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Saraswathi aunty,

Wonderful poems👍🏼,loved Mahender's the most😊

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Nima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Hi Shrads.. how are you dear? Sorry for not replying from last few chappy...

Congrats fornthe new thread!!!

Chapter 11 was nice inspite of not a single scene of our lead..hehe

Akbar is really an intelligent man..no doubt about it but this chapter gives one more proof of his intelligence by the way he revealed that girl who wanted to kill him..

One more big revelation. ..kunwarsa is a negative character! !!... he turned out the same like others..not interested in marrying an intelligent, beautiful girl but only wants her land... and now he has planned to marry Harka... i want to beat him black and blue😡... i know he wont succeed but still i dont want his name with Harka...

So Harka and clan are going for the last ritual of her dearest sis... Akbar knows it... i hope they able to complete it without any unwanted interruption! !!

Waiting for the next chappy :)