NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 7~ Chapter 12 - UPD 10th Aug

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My Rhyme:

[The original:]
"Cobbler, cobbler, mend my shoe
Get it done by half past two
Half past two is much too late
Get it done by half past eight!"

My Version:

"Lashy, Lashy, please update "
"I'll do it by August eight!"
"August eight is much too late,
"Please do it by this twenty eight!"

Karkuzhali.

👏👏👏

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: lashy
Periyamma you weaved one poem about the flight... and the turbulence inside has still not ended... 😆 with air hostesses, passengers all fighting and tussling to get into the cockpit

Adwitiya... Kuki, Sandy, Chellam, Manu, Catty di, Sush you girls are all so naughty 😆
Bindu, Bindu P, Shagun, Zhanna, I and the rest of us are innocently watching on... 😆

Now I fear where Periyamma's 'shoe' is going to end up! 🤣

Miss Harshu 😭

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

@Kuki. ...sure, my dear😉

@karkuzhali Aunty🤣

@lashy di...well u will be quiet, after all ur busy debating whom should you attend first...Dave or RT😉

Edited by durgeshnandini - 9 years ago

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Chapter 12

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The Empty Room...What they say about it...

Akbar:

"Thought I heard a sound

coming from a room I've kept locked

for a very long time..

I opened the door and tried

to remember what I 've left inside...

But there was nothing there

When I turned on the lights...

And then I remembered

I filled my heart with darkness

so no one can see

how empty I am inside.."

Durga's soul:

"An empty room and an empty space

I can only fill it with memories of your face

That once filled my heart

You acted well , yes you played the part

Fooling everyone and fooling me

Making the room void and empty..

Room of darkness haven of grief

In this dreary hour there is no peace..

My joy was stolen by a cruel thief

Who cut my sanity and ate a piece.."

Heera:

I sit with myself

I converse with myself

I berate myself

I commend myself.

I think of times past

I ponder upon laughs shared

I muse about arguments forgiven

I simper at those forgotten

I concede my wrongdoings

I forgive yours

I wonder why

I wonder how?

Oh how I long to smile yet again

How I long to watch the reflection of my self..

Should I lay in wait?

Tell me my beloved sister!

Mahendar:

I stood alone on the path

looking around

The place was dark

Confused and quite scared

I kept on walking

My feet leading me to a room

Huge and satisfying..

There were bags of gold.

Everything beautiful

No signs of worries

Seemed everything was good

The feeling was pleasant..

Oh God! You are great!

As I walked around...

I heard voices..I heard the cry..

The cry of a woman..

The cry of the girl I was to marry..."

Karkuzhali.

[ Poems (?) taken from the internet and used with minor changes]

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini
@Kuki. ...sure, my dear

@karkuzhali

@lashy di...well u will be quiet, after all ur busy debating whom should you attend first...Dave or RT

Adwitiya, hee hee LOL

*hugs*

AD is still a good friend... LOL

. RT ki tho baat hi alag hai! Wink

Btw, just mentioned cos you're referring to me as 'di'... Fir tho, karukuzhali aunty would be aunty na... She's older than all of us Embarrassed

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Beautiful poems...👏

Suited them all so well...

You wouldn't blv it, bit I actually liked the one abt Mahendar a lot👏

About Heera, who is she talking about forgiving periyamma🤔

Btw, another clue ... That is AMKs haveli 😉

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Aunty!!

Beautiful poem👏👏 and very apt lines for Akbar, Durga,Heera and mahendar⭐️⭐️⭐️

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Lashy,

1. When I read the poem, I also had the doubt.But I thought that let it be her forgiving Durga for the mishap that caused her the physical damage..

2. Lashy, in fact I guessed that it must be Akbar's haveli , but I thought just how would be the different feelings of these 4 people, in the context of an empty room..

3. Many lines in Mahendar's poem are mine!

And Lashy, when you said that the picture is cluedo like, I thought about these 4 persons..

Periamma.

Originally posted by: lashy
Beautiful poems...👏
Suited them all so well...
You wouldn't blv it, bit I actually liked the one abt Mahendar a lot👏

About Heera, who is she talking about forgiving periyamma🤔

Btw, another clue ... That is AMKs haveli 😉

Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago