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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
loved it


thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey buddy, when are u going to post the last part😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Hey buddy, when are u going to post the last part😕



will update withing this week...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
the story come to an end so please tell me how is the story???


LAST PART

After two weeks

In between all these Pratap used to call from New Jersey. That was at * pm at night. He was shocked to hear that Jodha is in her room till afternoon. These days she didn't went out with her friends, nor she come out of her room frequently. Her friends used to call her but she never pick up. But she when ever come out of her room she used to put her phone in front of her ands stairs at the device. Its like she was waiting for someone's call but it never came.

Jalal bind her with his words "A PLAYER CAN NEVER BE A LOVER" yes, she was a player. She used to play with boys till they are become useless for her. Jodha was sitting on her room's balcony. Stirring towards the moon.

He came, and bind me with his word. But why he had such an effect on me. He is no one. But still why I feel he will never come back in the mansion?" her inner self thought.

"What if he never come back???" her heart drown in pain just thinking about this. Suddenly she remember one of her night out boyfriend Rishabh told her after she declare their breakup with him,

Tere jaane ka asar kuch aisa hua mujh par

Tujhe dhoondte dhoondte maine khudko paa lia...

Today Jodha was feeling the same. The moment Jalal crossed the boundary of her mansion her heart not in her control. It want to run it want to go behind him. Today she was trying to find Jalal but in place of that she is only find the real her in herself. Jalal gifted herself to her.

After seven days Mohan give the same brown envelop to Jodha. The same cheap dot pen handwriting. Mohan said that somebody give this to watchman.

After reading the letter Jodha just went out of the mansion like a storm and went to Howrah Station.

The letter had " I have lost my only job. The friend I live with got a job in Delhi...I lost my home. I have roamed around for job like mad. But never get one. Had to sleep in station waiting room, under the flyover. But you have to pay their also. This city doesn't accepting me the way I am. So leaving forever. I loved that 3 hours with you so before I go I want to inform you. Train from Howrah 9.35Am."

Jodha run... she was running like mad towards platform. Suddenly she heard announcement, "13007 UP HOWRAH GANGANAGAR UDAYAN ABHA TOOFAN EXPRESS WILL BE DEPART FROM PLATFORM NUMBER 12 AT 9.35 AM"

She can't hear anymore... she ran like a storm towards platform number 12. She know in this train is snatching her life now. She have to run fast. When she reach there the train was still in the platform. She started to check madly each and every window by calling his name.

Suddenly she saw him. Yes its him. Standing near the gate with hope. Is he hoping that I will come to him? She thought.

She went to him.

"jalalll..." She said like a whisper.

Jalal turn around. But shock to see her and her state.hair are scatting on her face. she is only in a track pant and a t shirt. Her face saying she is happy to see him.

"where are you going? Running away from all?" she said in a bit angry tone.

"I have to go. Because there is no one and nothing for me."

"who told u so??" she get up on the train and get down with his bag.

"now lets go." She grabbed his hand and took him out of the station without a word from jalal.

In a lonely road

"what was that?" she yelled in anger. "who the hell you to decide what u have to do."

"y are you troubling yourself Jodha. I am no one to you."

"you are everything to me now." She got tears In her eyes.

Jalal got shock. Her words are confusing him. He just said, "how??"

"I don't know. But I know only this that u are not going anywhere. Understood.?"

Tears are forming in his eyes. At last his heart found a person in this lonely world.

"I have approved you for my work." Jodha said meekly. "but I want you to be my real husband. Not for this job. Will you?"

Jalal gone numb. She is dropping bomb one by another. She looked at him for some time then smacked her lips on him making him wide with his eyes. She was on him by now kissing him...

"mmm" jalal groan in pleasure of his tongue. Its his first kiss.

When they felt short of air they broke. Jodha hugged him tighly crushing his breast on his chest.

"you are mine. I will never let you go." Jalals mile while hugging her.

She lower the speed of the car. When she went to station she was in a hurry and fear. Fear to loose the person whom her life wants. But now there is no fear. Because he was sitting beside her on the passenger seat waiting to prove himself on his newly found job.

Do u guys need an epilogue? If yes I am waning you all it will be strictly for 18+

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aesmm... Diii... Prfct... The way u potrayed jo s emotions ws beyong imagination... The story ws sooo captivating... Finally dey r together... A real husband.. Sho cute... Yup.. I wnt an awsm epilogue... 👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story dear
last part but lovely story
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing
Jo finally found him
awww
they kissed
Hehe
update asap.. the epilogue
and other stories too
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di it s superb chapter.finally jodha changed & confess her feelings to halal.obviously we want an epilogue.plz update soon.thanx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Short and sweet. Epilogue to banta hai boss.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lobely update dear. ...
Joja r their for each other nw...
Nd yes dear what epilogue. ...
Thansk for pm...

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