An Akdha FS : A Game Of Three Hours last part pg 27

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GUYS THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I AM WRITING AN FIVE SHORTS. THIS CONCEPT WAS IN MY MIND FOR SOME DAYS BUT DUE TO MY HEAVY WORKLOAD I CANT TAKE OUT TIME TO TYPE IT DOWN.
BUT TODAY I HAVE SOME TIME SO I AM HERE TO GIVE YOU THE FIRST GLANCE OF MY THIS NEW STORY.


P.S. : I AM WATCHING U ALL ARE NOT AS MUCH COMMENTING ON MY STORY NOW A DAYS. IF YOU HAVE OFFENDED OF WANT TO SEE ANY ANGLE OF MY STORY S PLEASE LET ME KNOW ON MY INBOX...YOU ALL ARE WELCOME WITH POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE COMMENTS.



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SO HERE IS THE PROLOGUE OF MY NEW STORY

A GAME OF THREE HOURS

Prologue



The big bungalow house standing like a silent palace. From outside nobody can imagine there can be some people inside the house. In the library room, an aged man was leaning on his high backed chair, reading Vikram Seth's A suitable boy'. He is aged but there is some kind of elegance and royalty in his face. Previous year he got the Best Business Personality Award' for his achievement in the business field.
Suddenly a same age as him, his servant came and in low voice said, "Bade Saab, Bohot raat ho gayi. Aap so jaiye."
He said without taking his eyes off from the book, "kab nahi hota hai deri Mohan?"
Mohan was there in this house since he was 23. He can understand each and every words of his Bade Saab, Pratap Singhania. So, after his words he can understand that there is no point to say another word to him. He take out a deep breath and went out of the room.
After Mohan went out Pratap look towards the watch. Its 1:30am. The watch is is just like him. Old aged but it's says the correct time.
Suddenly he listen a horn blow down to the gate. He went to the window.
The car came in front of the portico. Jodha came out of that Honda city, and started to walk towards the main door.
"Hey Jodha!!" A boy wearing a blue shirt and a off white chinos came out from the driver seat. Neil, Jodha's latest boyfriend. Her night life partner designation is like watchman of a big apartment building. It change faces.
She turn around. Neil came near her and put his lips on her for a passionate kiss.



INDEX




CHAPTER 2 Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135810875


Chapter 2 part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/135811257




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow... Jodha, with a dark character!!!! Impressed!!!! 😊
Update soon dear... Looking forward to read more...
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Congrats on your new story😃
Jo's character seems to be lil hatke,here😉

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Wow dear a different jodha
Jodha a girl whose nights are spent with different persons
Well would like to read more
Update chapter 1 soonish
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Interesting concept dear plz update first chapter fast .
I m waiting dear
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Congrats for ur new story
Interesting prologue
Jodha's character is little different
Thanks for pm
Update first part soon

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congrats for new story dear
prologue is interesting
so jodha is in this story is different
I really looking forward to know more about her in this story
thanks for pm
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congo for ur new story...
nyc prologue..
Jodha 😉 😆
update first chappy soon... nd rhanx for pm
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congo for new story...
its different concept..
jo is so different here
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Congrates for new story
prologe is intresting jodha is in diffrent first chappy update soon and pm me

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