An Akdha FS : A Game Of Three Hours last part pg 27

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Minblowing, excellent, superb. Loved it, it was too good. Emotional as well. 👏

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Fantastic chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

superb update dear
poor jalal
jodha cheated him
but good thing is that she told him everything
finally she come back
she Left everything for him
jalal forgive her
both love each other so much
both get married
waiting eagerly for jodha reaction
what she think and feel
thanks for pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Woe superb update. ..

Jodha cheating on jalal nd her true confession. ...

There moment in train when jodha came nd told she told she left everything behind nd want to leade a life with his was lovely. ...

Lovely ending in d story nd loved what jalal said...

Wow waiting for next part ...

Thanks for pm...

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Fantastic update😃
She loved him but still cheated on him😕
Then for him she left behind everything and was ready to stay with him in any form
Jalal and Jodha marry in the story
Here, real Jodha is speechless, where Jalal leaves her place
There is something she wants to tell Jalal
But what??

Will wait for next update of what real Jodha decides on Jalal. Post soon buddy..

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Awww awesomeawesome chappy sis..
I loved it..
Wow.. Ja really telling a good story..
Under pressure of Ritesh Jo cheat ja..
Jo is feeling guilty..
Ja is hell angry with Ritesh n bec of his innocency he lost everything..
Finally they meet n married...
Their romance is sizzling hot..
Ja finished his story n leaving her house...
Jo is running after him..
Precab is suspense se bhara hua.m
Pls update your other story...
Thanks for pm..

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Story wala Jodha Jalal got their love back in life. Now real wala Jodha ki bari. 😉

Very nicely written Chandrima Di. The letter from Jodha was a great shock for Jalal, and Jalal completely broke down- not for himself, but for Jodha... He broke down as he could see her dreams of getting back a normal life to get crashed so cruelly. Their reconciliation was very beautiful.

I had expected Jalal to be a bit harsh to his so-called friend Ritesh, but he came out to be too much soft. Why so?? 😡

And the consummation scene was 🤪 . Ummm...☺️ So detailed description... Made me red while reading. 🤣 Now I am tensed about my open air scene. 🤣 I would never be able to describe this much.😆☺️

I loved the way real Jodha reacted when question arose about story's Jodha's love. She admitted that every girl curves for true love and every 'Jodha' is same...😳 Waiting for the last part where she will find her 'Dil' too. 😆

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Awesome chappy

Train wala scene was full on filmy...ddlj style 😆

So finally they got married...☺️

& the story ended

Now what will happen next

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

& plz update htc too

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
Story wala Jodha Jalal got their love back in life. Now real wala Jodha ki bari. 😉

Very nicely written Chandrima Di. The letter from Jodha was a great shock for Jalal, and Jalal completely broke down- not for himself, but for Jodha... He broke down as he could see her dreams of getting back a normal life to get crashed so cruelly. Their reconciliation was very beautiful.

I had expected Jalal to be a bit harsh to his so-called friend Ritesh, but he came out to be too much soft. Why so?? 😡

And the consummation scene was 🤪 . Ummm...☺️ So detailed description... Made me red while reading. 🤣 Now I am tensed about my open air scene. 🤣 I would never be able to describe this much.😆☺️

I loved the way real Jodha reacted when question arose about story's Jodha's love. She admitted that every girl curves for true love and every 'Jodha' is same...😳 Waiting for the last part where she will find her 'Dil' too. 😆

black pointout

because i think story jalal from the first is ver shy and composed...agar woh achanak violent ho jaye to accha lagega kya?? n he loves her madly so pehle uske bareme sochega

dont be u can do it... go for it!!! or haa mujhe woh jaldi chahiye