An OS: The Broken Nest - Page 5

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

wow stuti..u r realy amazing dear..a writer who always take the fact tat hapens in the society and convey it to the readers the way they like the story..u make readers to think about these facts hapening in the society..though it s hard to acept but these are the true facts..but u made a difrent father here though not a real one..u justify al the characters in their own way..love the convo btwn jo and jalal..though ja and salim dnt hav any convo it s emotional..

Originally posted by: haya_gorgeous

soo beautiful writing dear..
keep up the good work
thnks for pm

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Let me applaud👏👏👏 you for a different idea, a thought provoking story⭐️ and with a tinge of harshness of life. People in their obsession always look up to beautiful and pretty and forget the importance or necessity of being Normal. You expressed the ability of " Divyangs" very well and of course the agony of parents. Its never easy to accept abnormal. You did make emotions rule over.

Thank you so much Siyadi.😃😃🤗Love you for your words in this para.😳

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I have a different take here, you knew that😆😆.

I know, and that's why I enjoy your reviews.😆😆😃Though I expected you to give Jalal verbal black and blue here for his attitude towards his wife and child here; and even to bash Jodha for being nice with him at the end. 🤣 🤣

I don't mind Jalal wrong. He has full right and desire to have a normal child. Jodha was stubborn in not understanding this viewpoint and being adamant about having a single child.

Yes Jalal's urge for a normal child is somehow justified from his view, and i have tried my best to justify him more and more as the story is majorly written from his pov; but he wanted the second child to mend the wound of having an abnormal child more than out of pure love and that would surly lead to a more tough situation for Salim, as he will surely be neglected much. I think here Jalal was much adamant to understand Jodha's viewpoint.

I have met parents with divyangs and they have more children. I found the siblings being very responsible towards their sibling. And the divyang sibling also forms a bond with the normal sibling. I guess they to recognise love and care, so did not find Jodha's reasoning palatable. For me Jodha broke her home.

I cannot say it surely, but some kids are used to be very possessive and sometimes violent type. Jodha knows the type of her son much. Also, the second issue will obviously want Jodha's attention more as a mother, what will happen to Salim then? Jodha has to take care of Salim, she will understand better whether she is able to raise another kid or not.

However, it's more of Jalal's attitude than Salim's insecurity problem. Jalal had made it clear to the boy that he does not want him... His urge for a second issue is much an insult to Salim's existence than his desire and it would get worsen, making Salim's condition violent towards everyone if another kid much loved and cared by the other members of family come to show the difference between Salim and him.

Jodha didn't break her home; it's Jalal who did not let her to save her home.

I think Jalal was right in asking for a second chance and Jodha can still take care of the center she opened. Its all about possibilities.

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You still havent written a happy and joyous story😆😆

I have to seriously think about it. 😆

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Its true that jalal had a right to have a second child. But his behaviour towards his first son might have discouraged jodha to think abt second child

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

you chose very different concept dear
which I like it most
you describe so beautifully dear
I really feeling bad for both jodha and jalal
if only jalal change his attitude and try to understand jodha and salim they never separated
I don't know exactly whom to blame
but I guess this is truth of life

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

wow...R. Tagore's Nostoneer ki name li h...

Revew resurve raha padhke comment karungi

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you so much dear for such a touchy comment. I am lucky to get such readers like you all.😳