An OS: The Broken Nest

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

amazing
emotional but lovely
I don't wanna describe it & break the moments purity
loved it

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Forgot to add one comment in my previous msg. Salim whom jalal called as abnormal child never had any hatred for his dad even after he grew up infact his dad was always his hero. The so called normal child would never have pardoned jalal for his behaviour. This puts a question towards our so called normal society, as to who is more abnormal.

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Actually I read that when u wrote b4, it is inspired from real life
I also expected something of this sort you wrote in above lines..
Where such insensitive people turn to other person for happiness and content, leaving their pained spouse aside to fight a lonely battle against life..
It sad but thats how it happens in reality :(

Edited by Rahiramesh - 9 years ago

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

wow stuti..u r realy amazing dear..a writer who always take the fact tat hapens in the society and convey it to the readers the way they like the story..u make readers to think about these facts hapening in the society..though it s hard to acept but these are the true facts..but u made a difrent father here though not a real one..u justify al the characters in their own way..love the convo btwn jo and jalal..though ja and salim dnt hav any convo it s emotional..

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Hermione Granger

@misspotter

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

soo beautiful writing dear..
keep up the good work
thnks for pm

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Let me applaud👏👏👏 you for a different idea, a thought provoking story⭐️ and with a tinge of harshness of life. People in their obsession always look up to beautiful and pretty and forget the importance or necessity of being Normal. You expressed the ability of " Divyangs" very well and of course the agony of parents. Its never easy to accept abnormal. You did make emotions rule over.

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I have a different take here, you knew that😆😆.

I don't mind Jalal wrong. He has full right and desire to have a normal child. Jodha was stubborn in not understanding this viewpoint and being adamant about having a single child.

I have met parents with divyangs and they have more children. I found the siblings being very responsible towards their sibling. And the divyang sibling also forms a bond with the normal sibling. I guess they to recognise love and care, so did not find Jodha's reasoning palatable. For me Jodha broke her home.

I think Jalal was right in asking for a second chance and Jodha can still take care of the center she opened. Its all about possibilities.

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You still havent written a happy and joyous story😆😆

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Its true that jalal had a right to have a second child. But his behaviour towards his first son might have discouraged jodha to think abt second child

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

^^ thats right and fair enough but Jodha didnt even give Jalal a chance to change his approach. In place of debunking his desire, she could have worked towards refining his attitude and be open to idea of 2nd child. And there is no research to prove that the differently abled child would hate sibling, infact they get more love and care. Yes financial management needs to be taken care of.

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Aww Stuti🤗 I seriously don't know how you do this,dear! As I had already said,you are a pro at describing human emotions and you proved me right,again👏👏

A touching story,this is..😭 Love you for picking up such themes.First it was an OS on acid attack victim and now on a differently abled child.. proud of you,Stuti❤️

I feel,writers are blessed with the power to send out beautiful messages to the public through such thought-provoking stories.Hats off to you and all such awesome writers👏👏

Saw your comment that the real life story you mentioned had no repentance,at all.😡

Loved Jodha-Salim's bond❤️.Undoubtedly Mother is the only one who loves her children selflessly after God😊

Jalal had also agreed with Jodha..but the so called society is always bothered about others more than themselves😡He was carried away by their useless talks and was rude to his wife and son in a drunken state..that's understandable to some extent.But,how can he not meet them for so many years?What if he didn't see Salim at the exhibition?

He wanted to have a normal child just to prove his capability?Not out of love?Disgusting👎🏼

Jo has taken a wise decision and she also proved she didn't need his money or anything out of responsibility.So proud of her⭐️

Jalal is in fact,blessed to have a son like Salim,who had absolutely no grudge on his father for abandoning him.Instead,he considered Jalal as his role model.We hear/read many stories where the so called normal people throw their parents away.

Father-son interaction was so touching,dear😭 Even Jo's reaction was surprising,to me.She had no hatred for him.How can someone be like this.Loved their dialogues😊

Thank you so very much and pls keep writing more.