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So here is another os guys
This is for my opps sorry for everyone's Rajat Tokas Aka RT
I love u Opps again sorry We all love u RT
Happy Happy Birthday RT

OS-Smile

Two girls running of 9-9 Years and behind them is running one boy of 11 years to catch them but the little one is confused to whom catch first
Jodha:Catch me jalal;scream with heavy breaths while placing her hand on her heart while running left
Paridhi:Catch me jalal;scream while running right
Jalal:Hey that's cheating how can i catch u both at a time; said while stopping on one spot and taking heavy breaths
On this both girls giggles and show him their tongue and continue running
Seeing their teasing jalal again continuing his running previously he was running towards left this time he runs towards right in short towards paridhi although jodha running quite slow like always but like always jalal choose pari to catch first
Jalal:I will catch u pari
Paridhi:We will see jalal;saying this again show him her tongue
Seeing Jalal running after pari jodha smiles and stops in her tracks
In excitement of catching pari jalals foot stramps as a result of which he losts his balance and hits the ground on a stone injuring his knee
Jalal:Ahhh;screamed while holding his knee
Seeing jalal falling jodha runs towards him whereas pari seeing jalal falling continues her running to win the game and assuming that he is pretending
Jodha:R u k jalal;asked while holding his injured knee and beautiful eyes full of tears
The moment jodhas little fingers touch his wound jalal again Flench
Jalal:Ahh its hurting Jo; cried holding her shoulder
Jodha:I am sorry jalal
Let's go inside and do ur first aid;saying this he tries to make him Stand
Hearing this cry pari stops in her tracks and sees a blood flowing from jalal knees and seeing this pari runs towards him and too helps jodha in supporting jalal
In this way both holds jodha and pari holds respective shoulder of jalal to support him
During first aid jalal holds paris and jodhas hand tightly
Wheares jodha eyes were flowing continues tears seeing jalal in pain but remains mum there pari gives him support by her soothe words
When final stitch is about to done jalal tighten his hold on respective hands due to which pari flench and tries to withdrew her hand from jalals hold but jodha remains still feeling his pain and giving him strength
When stitches done jalal withdrew his hand from paris hold and places that hand on jodhas hand
Jalal:Thank u jo for giving me so much support and holding on me tightly
Nurse:U should double thank her champ
Jalal:Why sister
Nurse:As she give u her blood u lost a lot of blood and ur blood was not easy to found
Hearing this
Jalal:Th
Cutting him in between
Jodha:Hi no need to thanks jalal
For ur safety i can do anything;said while smiling
Jalal:U must be feeling weak na;asked in concern tone
Jodha:Seeing u k
i am not feeling anything except happy
Jalal:U know u r sweetest
Hearing praise from jalals mouth jodha blushes while weeping her tears
Paridhi:How r u feeling now jalal
Can i get u something; asked while placing hand on his shoulder to gain jalals attention
Jalal:I am k pari
thanks ur words give me a lot of strength; said while smiling towards her but jodha can see he is still in pain so shift his attention from his pain
Jodha:Congrs jalal
Jalal:For what;asked with confuse look
Jodha:U won as u catch me
Jalal:But its who come to me not me who caught u;said with a smile
Seeing Jalal smiling with jodha pari don't feel good and to draw his attention towards herself again
Paridhi:So what jalal whether she come to u or u go to her in both cases u won;said while placing his hand on jalals cheeks
Jodha:Pari is right jalal
in ur victory its my victory too;said in low voice
**********************************
After this 5 years
Jalal:I dont know ammi if i want to go Mumbai or not
Hamida:So decide it pari wants to take u Mumbai with her for further studies and paris father can do ur admission their on scholarship basis
Humuyun:Its ur choice beta if u want to stay here in shimla and continue ur further studies here with jodha or want to go with paridhi
Jalal:Its a good opportunity studying in Mumbai in a top school but for that i have to leave jo and choice pari but paris papa can help me in my dreams but i dont want to leave jo too;he thought
After thinking alot
Jalal:I will go to Mumbai as it's a rare opportunity for me for a bright future but before leaving i will make jodha understand as she will become sad knowing this; said to his parents

**********************************
Jodhas home
Maina:Hello jalal beta
Jalal:Hello aunty
Maina:Jodha is in garden
On this jalal just smile and moves towards garden
In Garden
Jodha who was sitting on grass enjoying the sunset suddenly hears some foot step from her behind and turn her head
Jodha:Hi jalal come; greet with a smile
Jalal:Hi jo;greeted back while moving towards her and sitting beside her
Jodha:This view is beautiful na;exclaimed while smiling towards view
Jalal:Yup it is
actually jo i am here to say bye to u
Jodha:Bye!
R u going somewhere; asked with confused look
Jalal:Yup i am going to Mumbai for my further studies with pari
Jodha:Oh
Good luck for that
Hope u achieve whatever u to;said while giving him her best smile
Seeing her smiling
Jalal:U r not sad as i am leaving u
Jodha:Why would i be said when my jalal is happy
U want to become something in life and i am glad pari is with u to take care of u;said while smiling
On this jalal keep on adorning her
Jalal:I will miss u
Jodha:I will miss u jalal;saying this she kissed him on his cheeks
In return jalal hugs her tight
Jalal:Come with me
Jodha:I cant i love being here
Jalal:I will be back soon
Jodha:I will wait for u
But come back soon
Don't be late as i can't wait long;said while breaking the hug and on this jalal gives her an assuring smile
************************************7 years later
A man driving car harshly leaving his own engagements party with puzzled thought in his mind is our jalal
Jalals pov
Its 7 years since i left shimla and jo since then she didnt contact me neither me contact her and I even dont know where she is now and now i am that much successful as much i want and engaged with pari who loves me a lot even though why i am still not happy why i am missing something in my life why i am missing jos smile why i want to meet her why i want to see her why
With this thought he takes another turn hits a car which was coming from opposite direction which results in his accident
Opening his slowly in hospital bed he finds a girl crying profoundly near the glass of the door and the minute their eyes meet she weeps her tears and smiles towards her seeing her smiling jalal too smiles back and unknown to him he was truly smiling even in so much pain but his mind got diverted feeling a grip on his hand and his sight got divert from door to the owner
Pari:Thank god u r k Jalal;asked while caressing his hair
Jalal:How i ended up here;asked while diverting his attention towards glass but find none there
Pari:Ur car got hit by another and u got badly injured by that lost a lot of blood and being O negative group ur blood is not easy to find but with gods blessing we find one girl at hospital
Hearing all the story a picture comes in jalals mind which is of only Jodha and recalls the girl who weeping near the glass door then paris mentioning the girl donated him blood and her heart joining every dot gives him one answer she is Ur Jo
Jalal:Can i meet her;asked while trying to get up from the bed
Pari:First of all she left after giving u blood and second u r not in condition of getting up jalal;said while trying to help him in laying back
Jalal:But i want to see her once
Pari:She has already left and we dont have any clue about her whereabouts;explained
Jalal:I cant rest until i meet her;said while finally getting up
Pari:Why she matters to u so much jalal i know she save ur life but still;asked while placing hand on his shoulder
Jalal:She has not only save my life but she is my life pari she was jodha my jo;with tearful eyes
Pari:No she was not why she would be here and why she will hide from us
Jalal:She was my jo and why she hides from us i don't know all i know she was jo;said with tearful smile
Pari:k fine if she is jo Forget her jalal why u forget me always in front of her even now when we r engaged and after 7 years since we left shimla i can see a true smile on ur face and that come as u thought ur jo was here why u never have this smile when u were with me;asked while weeping
Jalal:I dont know
all i know her smile makes me smile
Hearing this pari gives him a hurtful smile
Pari:I tried so much to make u forget her and keep u both apart but u still love her
Hearing love word jalal looks towards pari with unemotional expression
Pari:Why u r so shock jalal cant u realize till now u love jo and i and jo realize this 12 years ago when we were just kids i and jo both love u since our childhood
But difference is that her love was selfless and my selfish thats why she always lose for u and i always want to win over u that's why she easily allowed u to come with me here and i brought u here so to that i have u all for myself;confesses while breaking on the floor
Hearing all this
Jalal:No pari it was me who was so selfish that for becoming successful in life i never feel jos love for me her selfless support for me
U both loved me but it was me who choose u unknown to myself for becoming successful;confesses while breaking opposite to paridhi
Pari:I cant see u like this more jalal my heart is pricking for 7 Years seeing u with a fake smile and today only her single glimpse brought true smile on ur face which i always want to see on ur face
Jalal:But this is my last true smile as she has left me and i dont know where
Paridhi:She must be there outside but go fast and u wont miss her again i am sure
Jalal:Really;said with a new smile on his face
But before moving something struck in his mind
Jalal:How do u know she is still here and she cant left;asked while Looking towards paridhi with suspicion
Paridhi:I saw her when she was donating u blood and immediately recognize her but being selfish i try my best to separate her from u but seeing ur lost true smile i can't control myself anymore
I am sorry jalal and why she is still here u have to find urself
Good bye
Hearing all this jalal just remain mum and gives her a hateful look
Jalal:Good bye
And thank u pari;says with cold look
with this jalal opens the door and looks here and there and finds a doc and nurses taking a girl towards operations room and suddenly he feels urge to see that girl
Jalal:doctor plz stop
Hearing jalals voice doctor and nurses stop and jalal moves towards the stretcher and the moment he saw the face on stretcher jalal holds his breath
Jalal:Jo
Seeing his jodha on stretcher almost like a lifeless body a long tear escape from his eyes but what makes him force to cry is smile on jodhas face
Jodha:Fina..lly u r ba..ck ja
.lal but its too la...te no..w i to..ld u na do..nt be lon..g as i can't wa..it for lo..ng;said with smile
Jalal loses his voice that very second and all he could see before himself was eyes closing jodha
Seeing jodha closing her eyes
Jalal:Jo;cries while scrawling towards her as his legs and inner self is not in condition of moving
Doctor:Why u r here Mr jalal ur condition is not this much good and plz let us take miss jodha with us as she needs an urgent operation
Jalal:What operation doctor;asked while getting up
Doctor: She has hole in her heart and just few minutes before she has got a donor its her who give u blood and what makes us shock she forced us to give u blood when she herself in a critical condition
Hearing this
Jalal:What!; saying this jalals head start spinning and all he remember before fainting is jodhas dull face with a content smile
***********************************
Remembering jodhas smile jalal gets up from bed with jerk and start looking here and there and finds himself on same hospital bed and tries to get up
Nurse: Plz sir lay down ur wounds r still fresh
Jalal:Hows jodha i want to meet her;said while trying to get up
Nurse:She is k and her operation is successful and she is now under operation;said while trying to give jalal some mental relief
hearing this jalal takes a sign of relief
Jalal:when she will gain consciousness
Nurse:May be 2-3 hours
And ya ur finance left a letter for u before;said but stops in between handles him the letter while giving him a pity look
Seeing her look jalal takes the letter
Jalal:Before what nurse
Nurse:Before she went for operation
Jalal: operation!
Nurse:Yes its her who give jodha her heart
Hearing this jalal numb and looks towards letter blankly
Seeing jalal state nurse places her hand on his shoulder for motherly support which brought him back
and with this nurse left jalal alone
Jalal opens the letter shaking hands
In the letter
'I am sorry jalal for what i did in past but i love u a lot since my childhood and what i did was my weakness and what I have done now was my strength which i got from ur love
And i did this not for u but for me to feel ur true smile see here to i am selfish'
Hearing this jalal gives a heartbroken smile and continue reading
'I always want to see a true smile on ur face but i could not get it but i am sure now i will get it when u will smile with jodha and from my hearts eyes i could feel ur true smile and what will make me smile will this time that true smile will be for me too
love u
ur pari'
Reading whole letter jalal start crying profoundly holding the letter tight near his heart
************************************
Jodha slowly opens her eyes only to see jalal sitting beside her on a stool while holding her hand tightly
Jalal:Jo i love u;said while giving her his true smile
Hearing this tears roll from her eyes
Jodha:B.ut whe..re is pari
Hearing paris name jalal places his hand on her heart
Jalal:She is here only;with a smile
Hearing this
Jodha:Jal.al ho.w wh..y;said while crying
Jalal:Shh dont cry;said while weeping her tears
Jalal:She did it for her for u for me for three of us;said while kissing her forehead with a smile
After this there lives happily ever after
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Done guys i am sorry if anyone feels this os end incomplete but i feel its end is here only and sorry for such sad os and i know its not worth to read but I have it in my hwaf for two months and finally i pen it down
Do tell me hows it
I know its useless but still do tell
love u all
once again happy birthday Rajat tokas









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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res cherry blossum
i will unres soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres sherry
beautiful os dear
loved the emotions
how can paridhi do like this
jo is selfless
she donated him twice
at last jo is saved by pari
amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P


unres sherry
beautiful os dear
loved the emotions
how can paridhi do like this
jo is selfless
she donated him twice
at last jo is saved by pari
amazing


thanks for pm
even though i saw it before pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES CHERRY '
LOVE YOU LOT
FOR THIS SPECIAL
OS DARLING
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww sherry this is amazing dear
Though its a sad one...but it has a happy ending
And i loved reading it dear
Finally Jalal got Jodha and paridhi's love together ..
Enjoyed reading it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woo awesome is
ending was sad
paridhi give her heart to Jo
jalal get both love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UNRES CHERRY
Love it
Worth to Read darling
YOU in starting feel like crying
FOR what pari do
Really you write
Very interesting concept
Love it, love to read
Each and every line dear
Thanks for such lovely os

Ones again
A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO KING OF ROMANCE RAJAT TOKAS [l] [/B]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it...Jo and Jalal r really good but liked Pari more...specially her strength..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional os..very nice..lovely..lovd selfles jo and jalal..1st i thought y u chose the name pari when jo s there..realy i cant take when pari s selfish..then u gave a twist by pari's heart to jo..felt lyk crying while reading pari's leter..i also cant see pari and jo as difrent persn..thanks for making them as one person.finaly ja got both persons love..thanks for pm..happy birthday RT..
Edited by dellaakdha - 9 years ago

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