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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
UNRES CHERRY
Love it
Worth to Read darling
YOU in starting feel like crying
FOR what pari do
Really you write
Very interesting concept
Love it, love to read
Each and every line dear
Thanks for such lovely os

Ones again
A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO KING OF ROMANCE RAJAT TOKAS [l] [/B]

I hope that it has happy ending
But koi na
YOU did it very well
But hope read more

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
I hope that it has happy ending
But koi na
YOU did it very well
But hope read more

Thanks for pm darling
And ya do update of "PROMISE"

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

fantastic OS Sherry😃

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

amazing
loved it
sad one but beautiful

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jiya

@jiya.k

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful os sherry 👏
Pyaar paane ka nahi dene ka naam hai...pyaar mai sab kuch gawakar bhi sab kuch mil jata hai like pari get her jalal's true smile by giving her life n jodha get her jalal by giving all her happiness for his happiness...n end is perfect dear i liked it...
Thanks for pm buddy...

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Emotional os

Pari is so selfish

She started separating joja from childhood only 😡

& Jo is so selfless

Both of them loved jalal but our jalal loved only Jo ❤️

I thought u will kill Jo in this os also 😆

But in the end pari saved Jo...

Chalo Marne se pehle kuch to accha kaam kiya 😆

Really awesome os

Thanks for pm

Edited by cute.ritu - 9 years ago

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Superb OS Sherry👏
We can feel all 3 characters so well through ur writing
Both Pari & Jo sacrificed for Jalal at some point of time
Very emotional
Finally love finds its way❤️
& JoJa unite with Pari's heart in Jo😃
Very well thought and written, Sherry😊

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Amazing dear..
Happy ending...i love it
Pari is selfish...she separated JaJo... even she knew Ja love Jo..
finally she realize that she only take Ja's body not his soul..
She donated her heart to save Jo...
JaJo live their happy life with Pari's heart...excellent ending..
Thanks for pm..Sherry...