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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Lovely os sherry. ...

Jo is so selfless. ..

Nd pari did good at d end...

Jalal was sweet. ...

Thanks for pm dear...

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Savindi Abhisheka

@Savi.23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

sherry cherry 😡 you wrote an new os ,name is "smile" but when i read it you make me teared😭great work sweet heart..🤗
thanks for the pm..

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Lovely os sherry...

Thanks for the pm...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Sherry,

Beautiful OS.. Liked the end👏👏

Pari and jo, both got jalal's love in the end 👍🏼

Lovely concept!!❤️

Thanks for the pm!!

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Manali

@manu_ak

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

U r awesome sherry !!!! Loved the OS alot

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avishimishra

@avishimishra

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Cherry di.it s awsme.Jo s awsme jl s also.pari too.nice thanx fr pm

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

awesome dear
I really like it
starting was really cute
jodha was so selfless and pari was opposite
but I never thought pari donate her heart
I really like its ending dear
jalal was shock to know that pari donate her heart
this is love ,so selfless
thanks for pm

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misty

@misty22

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Sooo bfull sherry di..u r lvly ...d os ws sooo magical...lk a fairytale ...ja running behing pari nd jo...u made bth d grls epic ...our paridhi the life giver in d end nd jo d life saver since d begginning...i know dat ja wd be feeling blissful nd d lucky guy...d end es although emotional bt xtremely bfull.thnku sho much fr dis...waiting fr more..muah😊

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Excellent os sherru..
Woww pari donated her heart to jo 😊
thanku for pm

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hala

@lolo91

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

amazing concept cherry 👏 AND BEAUTIFUL WRITING 😃

you brough tears to my eyes

jalal in 11 was badly injured and lost lot of blood and seeing this jodha ran towards him ..now i understand why jo is not a fast runner it because the poor girl has heart condition🥺love it ...pari also love jalal but not selfless like jo she wanted to win but when she know jalal in bad condition she was there

..i smiled when jo said" i cant wait long" i though she is just missing him but the poor girl is dying ...my baby😭 anyway he was engaged to pari and wasnt sure she is the one ..he missed his jo smile

oh dear god he had an accident but jo baby gave him blood and pari said to jalal" just a girl"😡

oh jalal knows its his jo only😳 pari confess to jalal she was jealous from jo and she knew its jo only 😲 bad pari

jalal is hell angry on her😡 well she deserve this only

oh god jalal know that jodha has a hole in her heart and i cry😭

please dont kill jo 😭

and you didnt 😃 love u for that ...you killed pari😲 well apparently pari love turned selfless 😊

now jalal can love both jo and pari and jo and pari will love him only

because its jo kinds and pari heart

amazing cherry ..i am glade i read this os ..i have so good feelings after reading it ..thank you for sharing it with us 😳

love u

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