AKDHA SS: MY JO'S TANTRUMS.... Chappy 9(b) updated..yipee.. Pg 65.. - Page 25

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Posted: 8 years ago
you say na you update at tonight..
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SO AS I PROMISED.. M HERE WD CHAPPY 8...THNKU FR WAITING... ENJOY...


CHAPPY 8:-




bharmal by now knew dat thngs hv gone too far nd out of hand... His daughter is no more his own jo.. Bt is jalal's jodha... He lvs jo soo much to gv away his life bt he lvd his wife also to d extent to tk away sm1's life...TOO MUCH LV ALSO BCMS DANGEROUS...he knew dat his daughter lvs ja to such an extent dat she wd gv away her life fr him bt wd nt endure a single scratch on his body.. Nd now he knows how to gt her bak... So wd dat evil thought he proceeded nd said"fair enough jo, u lv him nd i lvd my wife... Nd wd nt tolerate u wd son of a killer... So now i u want him to be safe nd sound u hv to leave him... M sure u wd nt lk to the man u lv dead in front of u, dying helplessly lk i saw my maina..nd i know my daughter is wise enough to tk rite decisions nd if u wnt be convinced i cn show u a demo too.. Bt i hp thngs wnt go dat far.. Decide nd tell me.. M in my room"... Sayin dis he left banging d door to mk jo realise wat bombs had he dropped a minute ago... Jo ws thinking dat wat old enimosity is his dad feeding fat...he is nt understanding dat he is givin oders pain cz he is in pain.. Bt pain increases by hurting oders... How much things were different an hour ago... She ws soo happy, planning her future wd her love... Nd dat proposal... Noo how cn she hrt him ds way.. He'd be shattered nd broken.. Wat bout d trust his mom hs shown on her... Wat bout her... Only now she found her mom... Y destiny always cheated her.. Bt dn a horrible reality dawned upon her.. Wat if dad killed him.. Wat if his anger destroyed him.. Wat if smthng happened to him... She wd die... Rather dan seeing him die cz of her lv, she wd see him live carrying hate fr her... She knew dat god will unite dem again... She trusted god evn in d wrst of times nd so did she do now... Bt she knew dat frm now she is gonna be lifeless... Cz her dad is takin away her jalal frm him..
She walked into her dad's room.. Only to find her dad sitting dere wd a victorious smile.. As if he knew wat her answer ws... She stood infront of him lk a zombie nd said she wd leave him forever bt nt his soul... Sayin so she disappeared in no time...
Sitting on d floor.. She was thinkin dat how ws she gonna tlk bout ds to him... She ws confident dat life has another plan fr her...dn out of d blue she took a knife placed on d table nd started scribbing smthng on her wrist.. Blood ws shedding endlessly... Bt after getting d desired result her face gleamed wd happiness... She caressed his name(jalal) wich she had written a moment ago on her delicate wrist nd said to herself"dad now no obe cn eva tk him away frm me.. He has his imprints on my soul as well as my body.. M his.. M jalal's... My every heart beat cries out his name "nd she fainted... In d morning wen sujamal entered her room he saw her sister's lifeless body on d floor nd her hand stiff wd dried blood... He immediately shouted to bharmal nd dey took her to hospital...
She was treated nd dn doc cm nd tld dm dat she had lost a considerable amount of blood, so she needs blood rite now else she ll slip into coma... Bharmal ws dumb.. He thought dat past ws repeating itself.. Maina ws also lying lk a dead on d hospital bed nd he shouted "nooo i cnt lose my daughter.. My maina again.. Noo she ll nt die"... He pulled doctor by his collar nd said" save her.. She s my life.. Do wat u cn... Bt save her else i destroy ur hospital "... The doctor in horroe left frm dere to arrange fr blood.. Bt to his bad luck jo had a rare blood grp O-(negative)... He tried everywhere bt cd nt find a match.. Evn bharmal nd suja didnt hv d sm blood grp... Bharmal immediately called all her frnds nd informed dm bout d incident...in no time salima ruku moti mirza had cm.. Bt jalal ws missin... He ws outa town fr sm wrk nd ws supposed to return tomm..all of dm were panicking trying to arrange fr blood bt in vain.. Suddenly mirza spoke aloud "hey jalal ia also O-.. He has d sm grp"... Bharmal whose ears were as alert as always flung into shock... He didn't know wat to do... How cn he tk help frm d one whom he despises... How cn he... Wen suddenly he remembered wat jo said bout jalal... He thought, is she right.. Is not jalal at fault.. Shd nt he be blamed fr wat his father did... Shd he frgv him... Is he doing wrong to her daughter... Wen his thinking session ws disturbed by d doctor's horrified voice"plzz arrange fast, she s nt havin much time, her pulse is falling.. I fear v ll lose her "... As soon as he heard dat he felt as if he is going to lose her daughter.. His inner conscious questioned him dat wat if his obstinate nature took away her daughter frm him?? Wat if he lost her??... He quickly went to mirza and joined his hands nd askd him to call jalal... Mirza couldn't believe dat he ws begging him.. He quickly hugged him nd called jalal...

IN D CAR:-


ja"i m cmin my darling.. My lv.. U ll be soo happy too see me bak before a day... He ws lukin at d gifts he had selected fr her.. Bundles of her favourite swiss nd lint chocolate... He ws enjoying each nd every second dat was taking her close to his life his jo his sexy... Wen he heard his phn ringing *tring tring*.. He saw nd it ws mirza.. "y is ds fool calling me... Does nt ruku enough fr him.." nd picked d call nd before he cd address his bro wd sm insulting taunts, wat ja heard took away his senses frm him... He lost his control making his phn fall off frm his hands nd he drove as fast as he could... Anyone who wd look at d speed of d car wd call him a mad playing wd hs life driving lk a insane... Tears were running down his face nd his eyes red nd d face wich a moment ago ws shining to meet his lv had now bcm pale wd blood drained away frm his safe... Nd dere he reached d hospital... D distance of 1 hr was completed by him in 10 minutes.. He ran to d corridors of d hospital lk a lunatic as if his life ws being wrenched out... In d process he hit himself wd a strecher nd its sharp edge pierced his hand.. Bt it ws d last he wd pay heed to... Soon he reached in front of jodha 'room... All were shocked to see him in dat condition... Bt no one ws surprised to see him ds early... Cz dey know how far he can go fr his jo... Bharmal teared seeing jalal dat way... How wrong he was.. Ja lvs her daughter soo much.. Dat he was standing here ws blood dripping down his fingers bt d only thng he was wrried was jo... The doc cm nd took him to d oder room nd took few bottles of his blood nd gv him fruits nd milk to drink... Bt he cm out stumbling cz of weakness nd wnt towards jo room.. Nd stood dere lk a watch dog... All tried to mk him eat smthng nd rest bt he ws all numb watching his love 's body kept dat way on d hospital bed.. Her all chirpy tantrums thrower ws lying still... Tears were falling endlessly frm his eyes only to be wiped by an another hand.. Ja looked up to find bharmal caressing his head.. It ws d moment of final breakdown wen ja hugged him tight nd started cryin lk a child, sobbing nd thumping... Today jalal paid fr all d faults of his dad.. Earlier he lost his maina cz of his dad.. Bt now cz of him he gt bak her daughter... D tears wich he shed washes away d dust of anger nd regrets wd a bew tomorrow waiting fr dm...



SO GUYZ HERE IT ENDS... HP U LKD IT... PLZZ GV UR BFULL REPLIES ND HIT LK.. M WAITING... THNKU AGAIN FR READING... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chapter
Jalal is hell worried for Jodha
Bharmal is shocked to see Jalal
Update soon
Thanks fr pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb chapters misty
Loved both
Poor jo
Finally bharmal realise his mistake
Jalal is really a great lover
Hope jo is fine
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank god jo is safe
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
All chapters are very nice update nest chapter soon pm me plzz pm me accept my buddy request plzz pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear ots just amazing,fabulus chapter.now bharmal also lyk jalal.ots too gud chapter.ab jab jalal agaya to jodha to jaldi hi thik ho jayega.dear plz update next chapy soon.thanx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
unres ch7
mindblowing concept and mindblowing chapter👏 i actually amazed how each chapter your writing skills improve very beautifully
coming to the chapter
jodha miss her mother and ofcourse any daughter wish her mother to be with her in this day 😭
flashback was so beautful i cant describe how i loved it ..i could actually see little pari pulling her mother sari and the tears on her beautiful chuppy cheeks ..only if her mother didnt go that day😭
but that is only fate
you described very well the relation between the mother and daughter ..i really felt it through your words
but at least she felt hamida as her mother ..it will be beautiful relation i am sure
oh god now for the sad part
jodha's father is so angry on jodha for loving jalal and he tell her he is a son of a murderer
i dont think jalal father is a murderer..i think he did an awful mistake ..a crime but he also lost his life and left his son😭
but also i can understand bharmal pain but jalal shouldnt pay for his father mistake ..i think losing his father is enough but losing his jo as well😭
jodha answer was amazing i am so proud of our jo
👏 love you❤️
going to read the next part now😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

unres dear
amazing chappy
poor jo
she tried suicide
but jalal saved her
n bharmal also understood his mistake
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


unres dear
amazing chappy
poor jo
she tried suicide
but jalal saved her
n bharmal also understood his mistake
loved it
update soon


thanks for pm misty

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