AKDHA SS: MY JO'S TANTRUMS.... Chappy 9(b) updated..yipee.. Pg 65.. - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
No my naughty sis first U... Plshhh... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Precap is scary and interesting..
update soon..
Thanks for pm..dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow beautiful story...r u going to separate jj.. giving shock dear...continue soon nd do pm
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Hey guys... M sooo sorry for the late update... Frgv me plshhh... Nd sm readers hv been askin me will joja be separated.. Bt m too a joja lver.. Believe me dere seperation too will b worth reading... So jst enjoy... Hp u like it...

Chappy 7 (b) :-



Jodha ws still dreaming about the last night's confessions... How suddenly her lifr felt so complete.. No wrries fr d future no emptiness except one... Wich always continued to devour her heart... Wat not she had hidden inside her huge heart... Her life ws complete yet emptiness overpowered her... Her mingled thoughts hlpd those salty crystals to mk dere way down her glossy chheks falling on the photo frame wich entrapped in it a bfull picture... Jo ws an exact replica of dat pic.. Sm almond shaped brown hazel orbs wd d sm depth.. D same flawless skin... No doubt frm whete she gt dat enchanting beauty from... Her mom... She takes after her mom wether its facial beauty or the bfull heart nd feelings...
She was heading towards a new phase of her life bt one thng dat ws piercing her heart ws a plead dat was unheard DAT DAY... the plead of a 5 yr failed to to mk any difference to her ears..

She remembered how her mom used to fantasise her mind wd dose fairytales dat one day a prince on white horse riding d wrld wd cm nd tk her away... Wd lv her more dn her...nd now wen all ds is really gonna happen she does nt hv her mom wd her... Nevertheless hamida ws d woman in whom she found het solace dat warm feeling dat a daughter craves frm het mom...bt sm flashes wich hv always overpowered her lil soul were beginning to take dere way again...

FLASHBACK...

mom plshhh dnt go today... Mumma plshhh... I want u today.. 😭😭..she almost begged pulling d loose end of her mom's sari... Tears were flooding her eyes...
"pari dnt do ds na.. Its jst a day.. If i dnt go ur aunt wnt feel good.. Its her son's wedding... I need to go honey... Daddy will be wd u.. Bhai will be wd u.. Y u fear. Huh?... I ll cm tomm in d morning.. Now be a good grl.. Tk care of urself.. Dnt irritated bhai nd sleep on time.. " dn sge kissed all over her face nd went away towards her car nd left a crying baby behind...
Dat ws d last wrds of her mom.. Probably jo already hd sensed d ill omen...

END OF FLASHBACK...


frm dat vry day the 5 yr old cursed herself dat had her mom listened to her.. She shd hv been much more convincing... She ws soo lost dat sge didn't cm to know wen sm1 stepped inside her room nd sat beside her..it ws only wen she felt sm1 constantly gazing at her, she cm outa dat trauma nd saw her dad looking at her wd all d confusing expressions she probably knew so far.. She wiped her tears nd hugged her dad tight nd said good mor.. n... n.. Bt ws stopped by her father"how cd u jo.. How cd u.. I lvd u wd all my heart, i fulfilled ur every wish bt u..." Nd in a much more angry tone he shouted"u loved sm1 whom u shd hv nt..he ll regret cmin close to U😡"... Jodha failed to fathom wat happened in a flick of second... Bt unknowingly her heart ws tearing apart...
"dad wat are u sayin.. I cnt understand "...
So u don't know wat m sayin.. Wait.. He showd her pic bd askd who is ds man??...
She ws dumb.. It ws jalal hugging him... She ws thinkin dat who cliked her dese pics wen again her thoughts were jolted by her dad's shrieking voice repeating d sm question.. Dat who ws he...
She didn't know wat to say.. Nt dat she feared to tell bout her love her jalal to her dad.. Bt all dat happened in such a flash dat she couldn't comprehend d situation nd moreover sge hd neva seen her dad behave such a way.. So she scared nd stammered sayin "dad he is j..j..a.."nd before she cd speak her dad shouted" i know ds man.. He is jalaluddin Mohammad, son of humayun Mohammad..nd u dared to lv ds man.. U dared to lv d son of a murderer "...
Jo" dad murderer.. Noo u mst hv misunderstood... He s frm a well reputed family.. He s nt a murderer.. "
Bhar" noo is a son of a murderer.. His dad is a bloody criminal".. Nd he hels jo by her arms nd md her face her mom's pic nd said "see this.. D one u lv more dn me... D one whom u call as ur mom died cz of ds man.. He crashed into ur mom's car.. Dat bloody man ws drunk nd coz of his carelessness i lost my wife my love.."
Jo felt numb as if sm1 stabbed her newly found lv... D one whom she lvd ws gone cz of d man whose son she loved...
Bhar"do u still lv him... Cn u still lv d man whose father destroyed our lives"...
Jo who ws trying to analyse d situation... Looked at her dad nd wd all d love she said as if her lv fr jalal gv her dat strength "yess dad i still lv him.. Nd will always do... He is at no fault.. Evn he lost his dad in dat incident.. He didn't crash that car.. He ws also a kid lk me... Evn he suffered d loss.. How is he to be held guilty... Dad i dnt lv him fr d sake of loving... Bt cz now my heart is already his... M nt jodha anymore bt jalal's jodha... I hv lvd him wd all my might... I HV LVD HIM FR A THOUSAND YEARS ND WILL LV HIM FR A THOUSAND MORE... "



OK GUYS SO DS WS IT.. I KNOW ITS TOO SHORT.. BT I LL UPDATE CHAPPY 8 TONITE.. PROMISE.. PKKA... FR NOW ENJOY DS.. ND DO LEAVE UR PRECIOUS REPLIES.. I DO WAIT FR DM.. DNT BREAK MY HEART... ND HIT LIKE.. LV U ALL... 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
I am the first one... Yyey
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i will unres later today 😳
thanks for pm sweety😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice chapter dear.in one accident both jojl lost dir parents.she did ryte.lets see wht bil happen.dont be late.update soon thAnx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update dear but
emotional also
poor jodha missing her mom so much
she is so much in pain now
flashback is so painful
if only her mom listen to her
accident never happen
she lost her mom in that accident
she is moving in her life into new phase now she is need her mom
oh bharmal hell angry with jodha
jodha was so shock to see that picture
but who sent that picture to her father
someone behind all this who don't want jodha and jalal together
jalal father is involved in that accident
jalal also lost his father
but jodha father is hell angry with them
he don't want them together
but I really like jodha answer
she is right how can he blame jalal for all this
that was only accident
both family lost their love ones
jodha still love jalal after knowing all that
now dear plz don't make them separate for long OK
you write this chapter very well
everything beautifully describe
keep it up dear
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update dear
Jodha's mother died because of jalal's father 😲
How will Jalal react to this news
Update soon
Thnks fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
poor JJ
Jo lost her mom
Jalal too lost his dad
but Jo's dad is held Jalal responsible
haww
update asap
it was such a chotu sa chapter

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