AKDHA SS: MY JO'S TANTRUMS.... Chappy 9(b) updated..yipee.. Pg 65.. - Page 27

another painful update
but yes very well written
I never thought story turn this way
bharmal warn jodha
so jodha agree to leave jalal
but god she cut her wrist and write jalal name
poor girl how much she loves jalal
sujamal shock to see her
bharmal also feeling guilty
he also can't able to see her in that condition
only jalal save her life so bharmal beg Mirza to call him
jalal is so happy to return back to his love
but Mirza call shock him to core
God he is so scare to loose her
he himself injure but he least interested in that
bharmal shock to see him in that condition
now he understand no body loves jodha more than jalal
jalal don't want to eat something also
at last he breakdown in front of bharmal
bharmal also can't able to see him
I hope in next chapter everything is well
so plz update next chapter soon
thanks for pm dear
I really like this chapter
everything written so perfectly

superb updates dear...

lovely chappy dear bechara Jalal Jo ko jaldi theek kar do please

Awesome update sweety...
And very nice story concept
All chapters r amazing
I really enjoyed them
⭐️
Sorry for late reply and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Aaradhya01234

Awesome update sweety...
And very nice story concept
All chapters r amazing
I really enjoyed them
⭐️
Sorry for late reply and thanks for pm

Waiting for next part
Update soon

Fabulous update
jalal came back as soon as he came to know about jo..
He was shattered seeing his love in such condition 😭
He immediately donated blood to her..
Bharmal saw his unconditional love for jo and realised how wrong he was!
Thanks for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Fabulous update
jalal came back as soon as he came to know about jo..
He was shattered seeing his love in such condition 😭
He immediately donated blood to her..
Bharmal saw his unconditional love for jo and realised how wrong he was!
Thanks for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Wonderful update.. litteraly am crying...last part so emotional..to change her father jo took drastic step... continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

unreswa...
lovely parts am... so beautifully n commendable
I love the 8 chapter most
well 7b was not bad it is also good
u writing is so cute just like u 😉
love both the parts
thanks for pm
update soon

Originally posted by: priyadogra

Nice chapter

Atleast bhar now understood ja love for jo and would not come in b/w them

I am soo happyyy

Thanks fr the pm

And update soon