NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY - Page 95

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

THE EPISTLE:

The full text of the message of Heera to the Rajput Heads, as imagined by me..

Your Highness, Maharaj...

This humble message comes to you,
From
The only heir left to protect Parnagarh, the land of valleys,
The region , rich with iron ore and lots of fields
Of barley, wheat, pulses and oilseeds
And villages that are alive
Gifted to Mansabdar Jagatprasad singh once
By the Shahenshah of Moghul sultanate.

And our ownership of the palace and the lands
Was continued and confirmed by a farman issued,
Since we fulfilled all the conditions
That were therein stipulated..
But...
Durga Bai, my protector, who was really a heera,
Anything she touched blossomed, anyone she treated healed,
Poor she, fought with her sword
To protect the Farman and save the title,
With no one to help her, all alone and in fear,
Alas, had to beg and plead...shedding her tears
The proud heiress relinquished her ego
To plead for her modesty ..
She lost her self
Together with her farman and finally her life
To the infamous and ruthless messenger Khalil.
Now at this desparate hour
I come to you for a favour
As she would say in her words
"Your mind is a weapon stronger than my sword"
Hence,
Please stand by me...
A lonely warrior with only a strong mind..
Please show your support for the great warrior Durga Bai
Who sacrificed her self, for the sake of her subjects
By helping me to bring the criminals to justice
Please speak up for Panagarh in court..

Thankfully Yours

Heera
The lonely fighter.


Karkuzhali.



Periamma... It's too good!!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Teaser for Chapter 10

A long-stemmed Zergul flower for her...
A silver goblet of Sherbet for him...

But, all is not what it seems!

Because she is...

"Hiding the hurt, hiding the pain

Hiding the tears that fall like rain

Saying she's fine, but she's anything but

This ache in her soul rips at her gut

Her soul is on fire she burns from within

The calm on her face is an ongoing sin.

Because for him...

The world must stay out, he's built up a wall

His lies will collapse, should it ever fall

Loneliness consumes him, it eats away the years

Until his life is swallowed by the darkest fears

He knows not he's waiting for someone to see he wears a mask

Or that he wants someone to remove it, but is that too much to ask?"



P.S. thanks to Melissa Bernards and Saraswathi Periyamma... for bringing us those lines of poetry!

Wow wow wow!! 👏 Chellam that Pics and poems... Superb!! Summa nachunu irukku 👍🏼
Periamma you 're a star as always⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

THE EPISTLE:

The full text of the message of Heera to the Rajput Heads, as imagined by me..

Your Highness, Maharaj...

This humble message comes to you,
From
The only heir left to protect Parnagarh, the land of valleys,
The region , rich with iron ore and lots of fields
Of barley, wheat, pulses and oilseeds
And villages that are alive
Gifted to Mansabdar Jagatprasad singh once
By the Shahenshah of Moghul sultanate.

And our ownership of the palace and the lands
Was continued and confirmed by a farman issued,
Since we fulfilled all the conditions
That were therein stipulated..
But...
Durga Bai, my protector, who was really a heera,
Anything she touched blossomed, anyone she treated healed,
Poor she, fought with her sword
To protect the Farman and save the title,
With no one to help her, all alone and in fear,
Alas, had to beg and plead...shedding her tears
The proud heiress relinquished her ego
To plead for her modesty ..
She lost her self
Together with her farman and finally her life
To the infamous and ruthless messenger Khalil.
Now at this desparate hour
I come to you for a favour
As she would say in her words
"Your mind is a weapon stronger than my sword"
Hence,
Please stand by me...
A lonely warrior with only a strong mind..
Please show your support for the great warrior Durga Bai
Who sacrificed her self, for the sake of her subjects
By helping me to bring the criminals to justice
Please speak up for Panagarh in court..

Thankfully Yours

Heera
The lonely fighter.


Karkuzhali.



Lovely poem!! 👏⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


Yes Namu... and that's the thing which gives meaning to the line also, coz saying and doing are two different things!

I know re...that scene when the little boy comes to her Mom and tells her her last words... Oh God... that was heart-wrenching yaar...😭 She knew her end was near, but her last words proved that she believed in a never-ending life...⭐️


strange coincidence , here all were discussing about neerja & i just got to see that movie yet again... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi


strange coincidence , here all were discussing about neerja & i just got to see that movie yet again... 😃

wow!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you Kausi and Namu.
Actually it doesn't have the characteristics of a poetry, though it looks like one.

Saraswathi Periamma.

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Posted: 9 years ago
lashy dii when r u posting??😔
i'm so eagerly waiting for it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Posted... the update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

😳

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