TS: The Third Person~ completed - Page 5

Originally posted by: alffim

It is very heavy, tough history. Very strong written, Stuti!

thanks Zehana.😳
I hope, that you know the problem of cancer, only from books.

Partially from books, partially from some real life incidents. Though I have not seen anyone to suffer from this destructing disease from very close, but 2 years ago one of my neighbours (My very distant relative) died in Breast Cancer, and I had seen her heart-wrenching agony and slow decaying of health! It's unbearable!😭
Once long ago my friend worked in the children's oncological center of Leningrad and talked a lot about it.

Memories about this disease overshadowed for me now attitude of Jalal and Jodha. Stages, which there passes the patients ...His family emotional dying together with them. It is easier when is ill itself, than to see as the loved one suffers.

I hope from the second part the reason behind this attitude of Jalal will be cleared. They had no emotional attachment actually and so the continuous vein trials of curing her slowly made Jalal frustrated, he started finding solace from somewhere else...

Write how you came to this?
Have you watched the movie "All That Jazz"?

No.😕

Originally posted by: lashy

I agree about sad endings... but I don't mind a sad middle IYKWIM...

Sorry, but what is IYKWIM?😛😆

Sometimes, it's the sadness in such stories that make us appreciate the journey... the trials and tribulations of the leads more, Shagun...

I agree toto.👍🏼

[Your NJAPA is the greatest example.😃]

In NJAPA when Jodha was assaulted by the professor, I received a lot of flak from members who wanted to read only the 'happy' chapters... but unless all that had happened we wouldn't have seen the relationship between Jodha and Jalal during the last 10 chapters and how he brought her out of it...

The end of NJAPA!! Aaahhh! Dreamy!😭😳👏

Same thing in HBAS too

😲😲

Don't know what Stuti has in store for the this one... 😊

A very strange ending.😛

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Okay...so we are going to hate Jalal more after the 2nd part? 😲 😭

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Awesome chappy dear

Ruks is Jalal's wife but he still loves Jodha

Jo n jalal r in love since they were in college

Ruks died because of cancer

Update soon buddy

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

I know and agree with what you're trying to say, Lashy di.

I am not saying that an entire journey will have only happy moments in it...life has it's happy and sad moments...but at least the ending should be happy na?

What makes a story sad or happy is it's ending. And that's why I don't like stories where either of the leads die in the end...what's the use of them, anyway? Especially one shots with a sad theme...?

Sometimes sad stories shows a perfect reflection of life and society... Though I don't like the stories where leads die at the end... Actually I like those who leaves the readers to weave the story longer with their own imagination.😃

A question. Do you take my OS The Beautiful Bride as a sad story? Or a happy one?😆😃

And this TS is not a sad one...I am sure end will be happy only...😆 Ruqs' death is a part of it, not the entire thing. It is, as we might see later, needed for the story to shape up.

Omg!! Don't hope so much!!!😲 I fear I will break your heart.😕

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

It's your choice. Whether you will sympathize him or hate him.😃Also you may feel bad for him...

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Please don't scare me, Stuti di. 😲


And what has he done wrong anyway, that you said he would be punished by his destiny?

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

It's your choice. Whether you will sympathize him or hate him.😃Also you may feel bad for him...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

That's the climax. Stay tuned.😉