TS: The Third Person~ completed - Page 37

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Stuti,

You ended this one??😲

I'm sorry for not commenting on this one till now.Honestly,I didn't know what to say on such a complicated story.😳

Your expertise in portraying human emotions in the most convincing and natural way isn't new,anymore.But,with this SS..I was left speechless,dear..hats off to you👏👏 for picking up this storyline and presenting it flawlessly.

There are so many lines I loved immensely.You are an AWESOME writer,Stuti👏

What do I say about the characters??They were shaped very practically⭐️.I'm fond of happy endings,but here,it's difficult to expect one.JoJa might move on with mutual support after few years though it's not so easy.But,Jalal can never come out of the guilt completely though he can lead a normal life with Jo.Well,anything could happen.

It's upto you to decide the fate of this SS..epilogue or no epilogue is your wish😊

Thanks a lot for the SS and keep writing more.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you so much for this beautiful comment Bindu Di... You made my day with this one. Keep motivating me like this.😳😳

Of course,you deserve all the appreciation,dear 🤗

When will u update epilogue fot the story?

Originally posted by: ishagupta

When will u update epilogue fot the story?

Its indeed a sad TS but it's seems a real situation in every married life.. a little suspect can break a relation forever.. maximum line of this story shows the sad, gloomy, heart breaking situation of 3 people still in flashback u gave a ray of happiness.. that is very much attracting in between sadnees.. Its a tragic story but written in very gracious way... Not every story has happy ending yet u gave a little happiness by revealing that jalal did not murder his wife.. Once I thought that he actually murdered his wife and jodha will not forgive him... Everything was fine at the end.. They can start their life now after removing their burden... may be they will be a happy couple... Thank u for such unique story...

Originally posted by: sayantonibasu

Its indeed a sad TS but it's seems a real situation in every married life.. a little suspect can break a relation forever.. maximum line of this story shows the sad, gloomy, heart breaking situation of 3 people still in flashback u gave a ray of happiness.. that is very much attracting in between sadnees.. Its a tragic story but written in very gracious way... Not every story has happy ending yet u gave a little happiness by revealing that jalal did not murder his wife.. Once I thought that he actually murdered his wife and jodha will not forgive him... Everything was fine at the end.. They can start their life now after removing their burden... may be they will be a happy couple... Thank u for such unique story...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you for liking this story. The idea of the story haunted me hard before I penned down this. It was tough to play with the deep psychology of human beings and I was very much skeptical about if the people would like this not-at-all-a-feel-good story at all! And I was very happy to get so many valuable and thoughtful responses for this story. Thank you for enriching my thread with your comment after a long time. 😳

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you for liking this story. The idea of the story haunted me hard before I penned down this. It was tough to play with the deep psychology of human beings and I was very much skeptical about if the people would like this not-at-all-a-feel-good story at all! And I was very happy to get so many valuable and thoughtful responses for this story. Thank you for enriching my thread with your comment after a long time. 😳

Originally posted by: sayantonibasu

I like all of your stories little sis... It is a very tough story... You need so many knowledge of human psychology to write such type of story... You did a fabulous job... Sorry for late reading this story.. what can I do, I found this one now... I have read your another story Beautiful bride but could not comment there, page showed error and showed that the topic closed... I don't know what happened.. I will read other story also... keep writing dear & give update of Destined love... I am missing that story very much😉...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

😳 😳

I think Beautiful Bride thread has been closed as I had written the story long long back. 😛 Anyways I read and responded to your comment in my index. Thank you so so much for investing your time behind my story. 😃