TS: The Third Person~ completed

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#311

amazing
poor JJ
ruku was such a bit*h
Jalal didn't kill her
update asap

Quote

Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

first of all happy friendship day belated

unres stuti
amazing shot dear
jalal didn't kill her
instead she killed herself
jo n jalal's life can be normal??
is this the ending??
if it is , a sad ending
if not update soon stuti
with a happy ending

Happy friendship day to u as well dear.❤️

Thanks for reading dear. I tried a lot but don't know whether it's possible to end this story with a happy note or not...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
YOU'RE NOT ENDING IT HERE MS. STUTI...

OMG I am scared! 😆

Ok give me idea what Jodha will do now.

Quote

Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Flawless update
Ohh so ruks herself gulped the pills!
Heyy but u can't end it like this
All the updates of this ts were sad sad, at least give us the pleasure to read a happy happy epilogue...plzzz
thanku for pm

Quote

eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Superb chapter dear
Poor jalal suffering so Much
I feel really bad
Thxc 4r pm

Quote

Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Happy friendship day to u as well dear.❤️

Thanks for reading dear. I tried a lot but don't know whether it's possible to end this story with a happy note or not...

try to give happy ending stuti

jo's life is destroyed like this

becoz of jalal n ruks her life is destroyed

Quote

Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

try to give happy ending stuti
jo's life is destroyed like this
becoz of jalal n ruks her life is destroyed

Should I get Jodha married with some other tall dark and handsome guy? 🤣 As this Jalal is a gone case. 😆

Jokes apart, yeah her life ruined for no reason, and more than that I have fastened her in such a situation that I myself don't know what would I hve done if I were in her place! 😔 Some situations become too much complex to be ended happily! That's life. But since it's a story, and a short story, you all have the freedom to imagine in your own way what would happen to them now. I deliberately ended it here to give you that freedom.😃

And do share me your thoughts and ideas... (Maybe I get an idea for a happy epilogue. [Short story with epilogue! OMG!! 😆])

Quote

Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Awww awesome chappy dear.
Itd toi emotional chappy...
I am very shock when ja said yes i killed Ruk...
Firstly jo cant believe but later on she agree...
Omg Ruk killed herself n shr know ja want to kill her...
Ja is totally unbroken ...
Jo want to support but she did not do that...
Ruk is always luve between them..
Thanks for pm..
Pls update ASAP..

Quote

Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Flawless update
Ohh so ruks herself gulped the pills!
Heyy but u can't end it like this
All the updates of this ts were sad sad, at least give us the pleasure to read a happy happy epilogue...plzzz
thanku for pm

Thanks for reading Kajal! 😃

Awww dear I told you all that this story will end kinda weird and sadly. 😆 The ending is not an end of their story; rather it's just the beginning with new challenges and all... I kept those free for your imaginations... Do share your thoughts of happy happy ending to give me ideas about epilogue. 😉

Quote

RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#320

A very gloomy and miserable story. Good part is Jalal did NOT kill Ruq👏 Bad part is you are hell bent on making Ruq win😡😡😆. Jodha was sensible in this part. She used her heart but theek hai jab sar okhli mei diya hai toh moosal se kya darna😆😆😆

Yes like all others have said you ought end the agony of Jalal. You cannot let Ruq the evil win, it goes against the basic tenets of society. It would be like the show where evil Ruq kept on winning😡🤢😆. Or in case u plan to make Ruq come back as ghost and haunt Jodha-Jalal😆😆😆 and then they go to Baba for saving them😆😆

End Jalal agony, may be psychological therapy helps.

Quote

1 ... 30 31 32 33 34 ... 39

TS: The Third Person~ completed - Page 32

Related Topics

Explore Topics