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Posted: 9 years ago
Deat Stuti!
Each your new chapter all the best and all the intense. Thank you!
We can say that Rukaya not only jealous but also mentally ill. But I, with all due sympathy for the cancer patients I see in it only possessive, spoiled and bad character. I don't know what surprise is in the third part (but cravenly hope for a happy ending). Jalal and Jodha feel guilty, but I am firmly convinced that Rukaya calm "would go on the corpses." Even if she killed, no remorse. On the other hand, it is difficult be unloved. But even unrequited love - happiness. I hope, you will quickly update.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alffim

Deat Stuti!
Each your new chapter all the best and all the intense. Thank you!
We can say that Rukaya not only jealous but also mentally ill. But I, with all due sympathy for the cancer patients I see in it only possessive, spoiled and bad character. I don't know what surprise is in the third part (but cravenly hope for a happy ending). Jalal and Jodha feel guilty, but I am firmly convinced that Rukaya calm "would go on the corpses." Even if she killed, no remorse. On the other hand, it is difficult be unloved. But even unrequited love - happiness. I hope, you will quickly update.

Thanks you so much for your lovely comment dear.😳 For Ruqaiya's character, I have seen people in real life like her; they use to be hell irritating, somewhat over-possessive, have a great skeptical mind which slowly goes towards serious case of schizophrenia... I think this is a type of mental illness, but very common...
I will try to update quickly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc short
Oho poor jalal
Thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update stuti...
uff ruks after her death also is nt leaving joja to lead a peaceful life...
jo had done everything as a Dr to ruks but she doubted everything...
ja was so irritated nd angry on ruks had did so much for her to lead a good life but always she took a wrong about it...
poor jalal had to leave his love nd passion for ruks...
but nw also even after joja r married to each other they cant lead happy life..
update next part soon.. nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thanks you so much for your lovely comment dear.😳 For Ruqaiya's character, I have seen people in real life like her; they use to be hell irritating, somewhat over-possessive, have a great skeptical mind which slowly goes towards serious case of schizophrenia... I think this is a type of mental illness, but very common...
I will try to update quickly.


You're right, these people are often in the boundary condition, but, unfortunately, they are also very skillful manipulators and know how to poison the lives of their loved ones.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


After 2 minutes the door opened. The shadow of a dejected man, with clumsy hair and red eyes came in front of her.

😭

These sleeping-pills are worthless-

"I have a lot of work in office today... I will not be able to go out at lunch... Maybe after the year ending..."

I actually liked that he turned her down!

his eyes met their reflection on mirror...

Loved this line ^^^👏

"Who can say, maybe you attempt to kill me!"...

"No no no..." Like a restless and desperate soul, he kept on rubbing his hand under the flow of water... again and again and again...


Their marriage has been completed just before one and a half hour, all the close friends, witnesses and the lawyer have left, and it's the time of her Suhaag Raat ' literally. Simplest rituals of marriage- just two signatures on registry paper and they became soul-mates forever! Is the marriage really so simple? After so many years of separation, longing, pain, agony, hopelessness, depression, darkness it happened just with two scratches of pen! Finally!

👏

Did she hurry too much to take the decision? Should she have given Jalal some more time to come out from the hangover of the death of his first wife? Jodha bit her lips... She could have waited for him for another 6 years without any trace of expectation, just like she did before, but this time she needed to take step... for Jalal. She could sense that he is drowning in the sea of depression and solitude after her demise. He needs a companion badly. And who else Jodha will stand beside him now! Jalal was too ready for the marriage, eagerly ready... but... there is a sting of dilemma in his mind...

No she shouldn't have married him.. marriage or children doesn't cure depression... the added pressure of keeping up with social norms only worsens it 🥱 he will drag her down with him!

their chemistry is not like before... the time-span, the difference, the powerful existence of a third person have changed everything!

you are the only one who can state this boldly I thnk

The shadow of Jodha's eyes reflected on the glass of the photo-frame- directly into bride Ruqaiya's eyes...

👏

"Love!!" Her laughter being mixed with the whistling palpitation created a horrible sound!


Today she has become lawfully wedded wife of Jalal... now why the heart is filled with guilt and shame? Why she is thinking that she has snatched the right of any other woman?


A touch in shoulder returned her back in real world. Jalal was behind her, smiling intimately, with his hand on her shoulder. She smiled back and held his hand...

difficult to enjoy their flashbacks 😭

"I don't want any third person between you and me from now on..."

😲😭

A voice rang inside his ears. "I will be here only... between you both..."

Raaz 😲

"You won Ruqaiya! You will never ever let me to be happy!" He grinned suddenly, in a revengeful voice he uttered. "You had only a weapon to fight with me Ruqaiya, that is death! You had no control on it! But I..." he muttered in whisper which lost before it could enter in his own ears. "I myself handed that weapon to you!"

😲😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Now soon plz update this

O yeah! Had forgotten to write this. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Edited by 155pari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


O yeah! Had forgotten to write this. 😆


Ok ok now start writing
U can post within 2days
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so so so so much for spending some of your valuable times behind this piece. 😳

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