TS: The Third Person~ completed - Page 17

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Nice chappy buddy but very sad
Ruks will stay as a third person between Jodha & Jalal
Despite being in love with Jalal, Jo as a doctor did all possible things for Ruks
Ruks was so helpless by health but still irritating😡
He himself burnt his poems in a silly argument. Sad as they were never happy as a couple, neither Ruks nor Jalal
Just when JoJa were coming close Jalal again drifted himself from Jodha and in all sounds of water said he gave Ruks weapon for death, sleeping pills. Eagerly waiting for next part...

oh my god..whats hapening..?a sad part of ts story..feelings of three persons even one s dead..jo s in her guilt,i thought ja s going to be mad.thank god jo maried him..but the reason behind the marraige seems failure..jo wantd to get rid jalal from depresn..but oly aftr marge his depresn increasng..the words of ruks constantly ringing in his mind..i love the dialogue of jalal i myself handled tat meapon to you..and nv he s sufering because of guilt..he have everything and his lovable jo with him as wife..bt he s not happy..oh rukaya pls let ja be happy..aftr ts chapter i am wondering what wl be the end..?poor soul jo,painful soul ja,lost soul ruks..u r amazing writer..waiting for next part..

That was excellent..
Joja are married!
But they aren't able to move on coz of ruks taunts that she used to throw on jalal when she was alive..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Aree baap re! I am scared! 😆

I dont know what to say😕. The story shows Ruq as black, Jalal as greyish black and Jodha as whitish grey. So it does not make sense for Jodha to feel bad for Ruq since she wasnt the one who either killed her or cheated her in any way. Next Jalal was tortured by Ruq and he bore it all along so he is greyish black so its okay for him to get angry and frustrated. Now Ruq had most fun, she as black fulfilled it to the core and now too her prominence is there. The guilt in Jalal does not make sense even if he killed Ruq because of the torture and turmoil he went through. He should not let Jodha suffer for his self interest or pity.

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

I dont know what to say😕. The story shows Ruq as black, Jalal as greyish black and Jodha as whitish grey. So it does not make sense for Jodha to feel bad for Ruq since she wasnt the one who either killed her or cheated her in any way. Next Jalal was tortured by Ruq and he bore it all along so he is greyish black so its okay for him to get angry and frustrated. Now Ruq had most fun, she as black fulfilled it to the core and now too her prominence is there. The guilt in Jalal does not make sense even if he killed Ruq because of the torture and turmoil he went through. He should not let Jodha suffer for his self interest or pity.

Coming to Jodha, she needs counseling in self confidence and honor. She should have never married this Jalal who is weak and disturbed. He does not know what he wants. He needs psychiatric help.

Ruq soul can do whatever it wants😆😆 I didnt want to read this part from the responses here but read it for you. Not sure if I would read your next part😆😆😆

I tell you, your best character till date remains Fakhr⭐️

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

🤣

Kaash you really were, and gave us a happy ending. Alas...I know what you'll give!

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

That was excellent..
Joja are married!
But they aren't able to move on coz of ruks taunts that she used to throw on jalal when she was alive..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

oh my god..whats hapening..?a sad part of ts story..feelings of three persons even one s dead..jo s in her guilt,i thought ja s going to be mad.thank god jo maried him..but the reason behind the marraige seems failure..jo wantd to get rid jalal from depresn..but oly aftr marge his depresn increasng..the words of ruks constantly ringing in his mind..i love the dialogue of jalal i myself handled tat meapon to you..and nv he s sufering because of guilt..he have everything and his lovable jo with him as wife..bt he s not happy..oh rukaya pls let ja be happy..aftr ts chapter i am wondering what wl be the end..?poor soul jo,painful soul ja,lost soul ruks..u r amazing writer..waiting for next part..

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Hmm.🥺