Forever With You: Akdha ff(Chapter 17::page 89) - Page 4

CS is nice

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Nice character sketch dear
Just wanna know the one who betrayed jodha and jalal are same
Or she was married b4 meeting jalal
Yar so much of anxiety filling in me to know the further plot
Waiting for tmrw

I think from prologue jo will be married to someone n jalal had nightmares about Jo's accident or jalal is the one who betrayed jo n got that dream or both r happily married but jalal got sudden nightmare

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Interesting concept
Is that cheater jalal??
As per cs ja is kind..he can't cheat..
Confused
Update soon nd do pm me plz

Thxcc 4r liking

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

I think from prologue jo will be married to someone n jalal had nightmares about Jo's accident or jalal is the one who betrayed jo n got that dream or both r happily married but jalal got sudden nightmare

Kavya okka help year PM's ela pampalo chepava ppzzz dear

Interesting cs

Originally posted by: moni_06

Interesting cs

Nd when will u update?

Thxccc dear I'll update today

Hi buddies gud mngg.As I told u I'll update 2day.chapter 1 is below
njoy plzzz hit like button and dont forgot to give comments darlings.
Chapter 1
JODHA...jalal wake up screaming her name suddenly.He got bad
nightmare that his lady love hit by car his body shivering to fear.He
drenched with a sweat.He put his hand other side of his bed to feel his lady love
presence bt it empty He want to see his Jo nd want to clarify that
She is fine.He get down from the bed .suddenly he feel seviour headache
due to heavy drink .He hold his head tightly to reduce the pain.After sometime
he feel relief .He come downstairs to see his Jo.He went kitchen bt she is not there
He search her everywhere in the mansion.He get panic there is no trace of her.
He call shabeer his cook loudly.poor shabeer got tension due to his boss roar and
come to jalal by shivering.
Shabeer: Yes sir gud mng .Do u want anything
Jalal:Where is jodha.Have seen her.
Shabeer : I don't know sir from morning onwards I didn't see behanji.
Jalal: By this he get more tension. He ran outside and call Azim nd Aziz his
bodyguards.
Aziz and Azim says at a time :yes boss
Jalal: where is jodha
Aziz: we didn't see lady boss coming from mansion boss.from morning onwards
we r here.
Jalal: By their answer jalal got frustration and shout on both them .Wat the
hell r u doing ur jobs.
Both Azim and Aziz got fear by seeing their boss angry 4r first time .
Azim: sry boss we didn't see Lady boss from morning
Jalal: where r u both at night??
Aziz:actuality mam give leave to us .so we went back to our home.he says by
shivering.
Jalal:he can't able to control his anger nd raise his hand to beat Aziz
Aziz:with fear he closes his eyes for expecting tight slap.bt open his eyes by
hearing Abdul's voice.
Abdul:JALAL...wat r u doing
Jalal : by listing Abdul's voice he cool down little bit and goes inside the
mansion with angry
Aziz:ohhh thxcc abdul bai for saving me.
Abdul:its k aziz
K get back to ur places I'll talk to jalal
Azim:k bhai.
Abdul:he goes inside the mansion nd see jalal sitting on couch holding his
head in frustration.
Abdul:sites beside jalal put his hand on his shoulder ask slowly wat happen
jalal.y u loose u temper.
Jalal:both ba*****s r not doing their jobs properly abdul.I want to kill them.
Abdul:cool jalal tell me wat happen
Jalal:Jodha...
Abdul:by hearing Jo's name he get panic nd askjalal where is jodha
And start calling Jo name
Abdul:jodha princess
Jalal:she is not at home
Abdul(in angry):then where is she dam it
Jalal: I don't abdul.and he falls on his knees and call her name loudly
JODHA...
K guys dis is chapter1 hwz it.plzzz hit like button and ggive ur
Valuable comments

Small but nice chapter dear
Now I m waiting for next one...
Plzzz update soon

Originally posted by: swriter

Small but nice chapter dear
Now I m waiting for next one...
Plzzz update soon

Thxccc 4r liking dear..
Sire I'll continue soon