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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys thank u everyone for ur comments and likes .Belows is the chapter2 njoy
chapter 2
Jalal:JODHA... He falls on his knees and start crying.I'm really sorry baby for hurting u
Plzzz comeback I can't live without u.plzzz come back jo nd he was crying bitterly.
Abdul:He was in shock that Jo was gone.his eyes filled with tears.He know that that joja
loves eachoter very much.In this 1year they didn't fight.one thing he he didn't understand
that y Jo leave suddenly.He compose himself and see jalal who is sitting on the ground
contineosly .He went to jalal and ask in calm tone.
Abdul:jalal where is my sister .plzzz tell me wat happen last night.
Jalal: Became of me she went ...and start crying again
Abdul:Hug jalal to comfort him.and again ask him jalal plzzz tell me wat happen.We have to
search her jalal.
Jalal: plzzz abdul don't ask me anything.I hate myself .I'm very cruel person by hurting Jo.bt
didn't do anything intensionally. Jo beat mesha infornt of me so lost my temper and scold jo.
(Guys mesha is villain in dis story.she is jalal's PA and childhood friend.He treats her as his sister
bt mesha has crush on him.)
Abdul :wat ???mesha y did she came mansion that to at night.
Jalal: she came to drop me at home after party.she came here to help me bt jo beat her.I really didn't
like the Way jo treats meesha.that's y I scold jo.For dis small matter she leaves me go away from me.
Hw can she think that i can live without her nd start crying again.
Abdul:control urself jalal.First we have find out where is jo.
Get up jalal we have to find her
Jalal: No...abdul .I really hate her hw can she leave me went away from me.if she don't need me I also
don't need her nd went back to his room in angry
Abdul:he was shock in due to sudden anger
Somewhere in private hospital one lady was on the bed unconsciously. Its has been 24 hrs she in
that condition .Nurse was checking her .Slowly she opens her eyes .she can't able to open her eyes properly
due to brightness.she feels her total body is aching .she let a small moan in pain.
Nurse :she sees the patient is in consious nd went to call doctor.
Jodha:she open her eyes see her surroundings.she was on hosipel bed.she remember last night incident
Fight with jalal and accident.A lone tear escaped from her eyes by recalling jalal name.
Doctor:came with nurse to check up jodha.
Doctor:gud mngg miss.hw r u feeling now
Jodha:come back to her sance by listening doctors voice
Jodha:gud doctor .bt my body is paining everywhere.
Doctor:due to minor wounds.take rest I'll back again.
Jodha:k thxcc bt who admit me in hospital
Doctor:Im the one who admit in hospital becoz u got accident
by my car.
Jodha:ohhh thxcc 4r saving me and my...
Suddenly she get fear that her baby in her womb is fine or not ...
Jodha : can I ask u one thing doctor
Doctor:yes sure
Jodha:is my baby is fine.
Doctor: yes ur baby is fine nothing happen to ur baby.it is safe
Jodha:she feels very happy by listening that her baby is fine.she
put her hands on her belly nd thanking her ksnha for saving her
Unborn baby symbol of Their LOVE.
Doctor:smiles seeing jodha's and ask
Doctor:may I know ur name plzzz
Jodha:I'm jo...PARi
Doctor:nyccc name I'm Dr.MIrza.can you plz give ur address I'll
inform to ur relatives.
Jodha:by dis question jodha got tears from her eyes .
Mirza: by seeing jo crying he feel bad .nd says I'm really sry miss pari if
I hurt u by asking .
Jodha:smiles at Mirza at panic face and says nothing doctor no one is
is there 4r me in dis world except my baby
Mirza :sry ms.pri
Jofha:its k doctor
Mirza:k ms.pari take some rest.I'll came again to check u
Jodha :k Dr.mirza
Jodha:due to medicines she drift into sleep.
Done with chapter2 buddies dont forgot to hit like button
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Edited by eshalli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Nice chapter but small n update nxt asap eagerly waiting for update n pls pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Nice chapter but small n update nxt asap eagerly waiting for update n pls pm me too


Thxcc 4r liking dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
It was a nice chappy buddy😃
Nut have a very sad feeling for both
Both are in gloom and sadness
Jalal is not ready to find Jodha now due to his anger...
Jodha is hiding her identity
Abdul is worried for both..
Dr. Mirza is concerned for his patient..
Eager to read more, how this story turns up...
Buddy, there is a request, if you please give a longer update next time..

Edited by Rahiramesh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Unres eshu
Awesome chappy dear
Both fighted with each other because of Meesha
Stupid she
Instead of searching he's angry with jo
Jo is in hospital that too she's pregnant
Jalal don't know
Mirza is doctor
Jo changed her name
Hope jalal n mirza r related to each other
Update soon buddy
Please don't let them apart for Long time
eshalli thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Kavya_P



Unres eshu
Awesome chappy dear
Both fighted with each other because of Meesha
Stupid she
Instead of searching he's angry with jo
Jo is in hospital that too she's pregnant
Jalal don't know
Mirza is doctor
Jo changed her name
Hope jalal n mirza r related to each other
Update soon buddy
Please don't let them apart for Long time


Thxcc darling 4r liking
eshalli thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Thxcc 4r liking darling
eshalli thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

It was a nice chappy buddy😃
Nut have a very sad feeling for both
Both are in gloom and sadness
Jalal is not ready to find Jodha now due to his anger...
Jodha is hiding her identity
Abdul is worried for both..
Dr. Mirza is concerned for his patient..
Eager to read more, how this story turns up...
Buddy, there is a request, if you please give a longer update next time..



Thxcc dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Again wonderful chapter dear
But I don't not want now long fb plz
And this time I want long update
Plz update soon I m waiting dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
FIRST OF ALL SORRY FOR LATE REPLY DARLING
PROLONG
nice prolong but feel bad for jalal's condition .is that night mare is real???
Edited by Rajat_loverr - 9 years ago

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