Forever With You: Akdha ff(Chapter 17::page 89) - Page 20

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Jalal feel a soft hands touch on his forehead he thought that his Jodha nd opens his eyes nd was shocked to see hamidha nd bakshi
Jalal(with shock) :Ammijan nd bakshi
Bakshi :wow bhaijaan u get conscious
Jalal: when did u both come US.
Bakshi:we came last night bhaijaan.
Hamidha:with teary eyes wat is all dis jalal. Wat r u doing to urself.I was very shocked when Abdul call me nd told that u met with an accident .i feel very worry nd come here with bakshi.
Jalal:with fake smile I'm fine ammi it's just a small accident. No need to worry nd try console hamidha
Hamidha:No need to hide anything from me jalal I know that had happen between u nd Jodha Abdul already told me.
Jalal:with teary eyes becoz of me ammi Jodha went away nd hugs hamidha tightly
Hamidha:cool down jalal it's not ur fault becoz of meesha all happens.
Jalal:ha ammijan becoz of that bitch these all happen.I want to kill her.becoz of her I slap my jodha without her fault.I'm dying with guilt ammi. I want to find her nd ask forgiveness. I don't know whether where she is.I'm worry abt her nd hugs hamidha nd cries.
Hamidha:don't be sad jalal we'll find jodha beta
Bakshi:ha bhaijan we'll soon find bhabhijan
Jalal just smile to bakshi nd see Abdul nd moti entering his room.
Moti:Hi jalal hw r u ??Abdul told me that u met with an accident.
Jalal:I'm fine moti thank u. Did u know where is jo.
Moti;No jalal I'm worry abt jo nowadays her health is also not fine..
Jalal:wat ???she never told abt her health.
Hamidha :interrupting them says jalal beta i find dis diary nd reports in study room.maybe it's Jodha
By seeing dairy he says ha ammi it's jo dairy nd takes diary nd reports from hamidha
Jalal:he sees the date on the repost .it is the same date when jo leaves .He open the report nd was shocked.Tears falls from his eyes.
Abdul,bakshi,moti,nd hamidha sees jalal's shocking expression .
Hamidha:toches his shoulder nd asks wat happen jalal wat is there in reports
Jalal:He just hold reports with shocking expression.
Hamidha:(shakes jalal ) nd asks beta plzzz tell wat is there in the reports.
Jalal: with tears he sees hamidha nd says JODHA is pregnant ammi
[COLOR=green]At Rukks apartment [/COLOR]
Jodha makes Rahim to sleep.She feel very irrigate on herself that she can't able to forget jalal .She close her eyes in pain
Jodha(herself ):Y jalal y did u do that to me.I love u so much nd trust to with my life .bt u trust that meesha nd slap me without my mistake nd said that painful words that u hate me nd leave u..On that day I was very happy to tell u gud news that we r going to be parents .bt u shattered everything. I want to kill myself nd put her hands on tummy with teary eyes nd says bt I don't have right to kill dis little souls growing inside me.I want to live their sake.Now no one is there for me to share my pain not even my parents.They left me alone in dis world nd closes her eyes nd recalling her beautiful moments with her parents nd jalal.
[COLOR=red]FLASHBACK [/COLOR]
Jo was sleeping on her bed peacefully.She falls from the bed with fear by hearing a loud scream near her ears nd open her eyes to see the devil of her life Reva is sitting on the bed nd laughing loudly seeing Jo's face.
Jo ;with anger u devile I'll kill u today .I fear to the death by hearing loud scream nd throw pillow on reva face
Reva:ohh sleeping queen it's already 9a.m u forget that we have to go to shopping for evening party
Jo:ohh god I forgot it reva said with cute pout
Revs:oh jo don't put that face just go nd get ready
Jo:kk reva nd runs to washroom to fresh up.
Reva:smiles at jo
After fresh up wears yellow salwar she looks cute
Revs:u looks cute jo
Jo:thank u revu shall we go
Reva;kk chalo it's already late.
Jo:kk chalo
Both goes downstairs see maina nd bharmal having their breakfast
Maina sees jo nd reva coming down nd smiles at them
Jo:comes down kisses bharmal nd mains's cheeks
Bharmal:wow my princess looks very cute nd kisses Jo's forehead
Reva:with pout ohh chotti papa I'm not looking cute
Maina :u too looks cute reva nd pinches her nose
Reva:thank u ma nd kisses mains cheeks nd both went to shopping.
In the evening both went to their buddy tina b'day party .Both look gorgeous. Reva wear red Saree nd looks sexy .Jo wear pink Saree nd she looks cute nd lovely all boys In the party all r drum struck by her beauty.while reva went out to receive a call nd jo is talking with het friends one handsome boy come her nd greets her .
Man::Hi jo
Jo:Turns nd see surya who is drooling her from top to bottom
Jo::she feel iunconfortable by his stare nd with fake smile she says hi
( Surya is irritating Jodha from one year to love him bt jo didn't like him becoz he is a womanizer )
Surya:shall we dance jo
Jo:I'm not interested surya nd just call me jodha I don't like when strangers call me jo nd abt to go from there bt stoped becoz surya hold her hand nd dragged jo towards him and was abt to kiss her bt suddenly a punch landed on his face nd he falls on the grounds.
Surya:Puts his hand on his cheeks nd see the person with angry who dare to beat him
Man; Hw dare to touch her
Surya:with anger who r u to ask me I'm her boyfriend I have to touch her
Man :ohh really then listen I'm her brother Abdul nd I have right beat the person who lay his bloody hands on my baby sister without her consent.
Nd started punching surys body as his punching bag..If u again try to misbehave with my sister i'll kill u with cold nd was abt to beat bt was stop by reva nd jodha
Jodha:Bhai plzz leave if u beat him like dis he surely will die nd she drag him from there.
[COLOR=brown]At jodha's home[/COLOR]
In Jo's room both jo nd reva seeing their brother who is still angry
Jo:goes to Abdul nd sits beside him nd puts her hand on Abdul shoulder nd calls him slowly
Jo:bhai
Abdul:with anger who that ba***d jo. Hw dare he try to touch u nd kiss u. Wat will happen if I not come in same time.
Jo:with teary eyes he is surya bhai he is following me from one year.trust me bhai I don't love him.I hate him very much nd hugs him.
Abdul:I know princess abt u .Don't cry nd hugs her back.
(Abdul is revs's brother bt he loves jo very much more than his own sister reva)
Reva:with pout u both forget me
Abdul:oh sry revu come nd join with us with happy reva runs nd hugs jo nd Abdul tightly
Abdul hugs his beautiful angles lovingly nd promise himself that he will save these angels from evil eyes mainly jo becoz she is innocent nd kisses their forehead.
After sometime they break their hug nd Abdul to jo
Abdul:by the way jo u complete your studies wat is ur next plan.
Jo:ha bhai I apply job in xxx company in Mumbai nd I got job bt papa is agreeing for it bhai.plzzz tell to papa bhai I'm interested to join in that company
Abdul: ok princess I'll ask papa tomorrow.
Jo:oh thank u bhai.
Abdul:it's k princess nd turns to reva nd asks nd wat abt u miss .clever.
Reva:ohh god plz don't ask me bhai
Abdul:Y miss.Clever.
Reva(innocently ):actually bhai I failed in two subjects
Abdul:ohh wow u passed in 4 subjects.
Jo:ha bhai she passed 4subjects
Reva (proudly):ha bhai I'm great see passed 4 subjects.
Abdul:u never Change revu.
And three burst into laughing.
[COLOR=orange]Next day morning [/COLOR]
Abdul:Gud mng chotti papa.
Bharma:gud mng beta
Abdul:I want to talk to u abt Jodha
Bharmal:wat I want talk beta
Abdul:she want to do job in Mumbai papa .
Bharmal:I don't want jodha go far from me nd u know that she is innocent I don't want her to be alone In Mumbai .I'm fear abt her abdul
Abdul:ohh papa don't worry I'm also being in Mumbai I'll take care of her nd abt her safety .I'll make her safe .I have a friend in Mumbai she will stay there in his house .
Bharmal:being with a man in same house it's not gud idea Abdul
Abdul:No papa his mother nd sister also being with him nd abt him he Is very man.No need worry .plz trust me papa(he hide that hamidha nd bakshi also being in that house becoz he know that if he tell truth bharmal never agree with him bt maina, jo know that)
Maina:bharmal ji plzz agree with Abdul na jo also very much interested to do job
Finally both maina nd Abdul make bharmal agree with them
Jo:feels happy nd hugs bharmal tightly.
Bharmal:he to hugs his princess nd kisses her forehead.
[COLOR=green]PRECAP:JOJA first meeting[/COLOR]
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amazing chappi dr
Jalal got to know about Jo's pregnancy
poor him

aww
flashback is beautiful
update asap

Nice,so Jalal got to know of Jo's pregnancy.

Awesome chappy... I loved it...
My poor ja felling guilt..
Hamida n Baksi came in picture..
Finally ja found jo is pregnant..
Jo is in flashback..
Reva n Jo nok jhok..
Abdul is lovely bro..
Thank fpr pm n long chappy..
Aise hi deti reh...
Pld update ASAP
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Unres eshu

Amazing chappy dear

Jalal got to know everything about her

N her pregnancy

Hamida n Bakshi r worried for him

Jalal got shock by hearing Jo's ill health

Everyone knows jo is pregnant

Jo's pain 😭

Flashback is amazing

So Abdul is reva's brother

Nice thing he beat that surya

Precap is damn interesting

Eagerly waiting for their first meeting

Update soon buddy

Yeah eshu plz unite jo n jalal

Superb update dear...