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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter dear.gud DAT jalal knew abut Jo's pragency.poor soul both r suffering.is flashback continue? Unite Jo,Jl soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chappy
Jalal got to know that Jo is pregnant
Poor jalal...he is feeling so guilty
Hamida n bakshi also came back for jalal
Abdul beat surya...well done Abdul 😆
Plz if possible end the flashback soon
& unite our joja soon
Waiting for precap...their first meeting

Thanks for pm
& continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
A very nice chapter
Finally jalal comes to know about jo's pregnancy
Plzz make them meet soon
I loved all the parts from flaskback to present
Jo wanted to kill herself how sad
Plz plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi swriter I read ur ff ek mohabath it's really awesome I love it dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ..
Jo is pregnant with twins..
Hope they meet soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
[COLOR=blue]Chapter 9[/COLOR]
[COLOR=black]Flashback continue [/COLOR]
After telling gud bye to everyone at their homes both abdul nd jo started their journey to Mumbai.jodha feel very sad for leaving her parents.She never leave her parents anytime bt at the same time feel very happy nd anxiety to do job.
After a long journey they finally reach their destination .When their car enter the big mansion jodha mouth opened in 'O'shape by seeing a beautiful house.She never see such a beautiful house in her life.She loves dis mansion 4r site.The mansion is surrounded with a beautiful garden.when she step down from the car a lovely fragrance of flowers nd cool breeze touches her face as they r welcoming new guest with a warm hug.
Abdul guides jodha inside the mansion.when she stepped inside the mansion she feels like as she is in heaven.The mansion looks like royal.She see a big painting of a man hugging a beautiful women hanging on the wall .They both looks like a lovely pair.
Abdul notice that jodha is watching the beautiful painting nd he said to jodha
Abdul:They r my friends parents Mr.Humayun nd Hamidha aunty.
Jodha: bhai they r really beautiful pair.They r made for each other .
Abdul:Ha princess they r beautiful. Bt sadly uncle was died 2years back with heart attack.
Jodha:ooh so sad their family.
Abdul see jalal comes from upstairs nd he introduces jalal to jodha
Abdul:see princes meet my best buddy jalal khan.
Jodha see a handsome man in his twenties coming from the upstairs. He looks handsome without blink she staring jalal.
On the other side while coming from upstairs jalal see Abdul with a beautiful girl.She wear a beautiful white simple long dress.He was spellbound by her beautiful.She looks likes goddesses. By seeing her his heartbeat start to beat fast.Both jodha nd jalal r in lala land
Jalal slowly coming from upstairs nd stand in front of jodha nd both r looking each other without a blink.
Abdul: Firstly he get confuse with joja r looking eachother without after he understand that r lost in each other's.
With playful smile he stand between jodhajalal nd cough loudly.
After listening Abdul both joja from the LALA land nd feel embarrassed.
Abdul:By seeing joja embarrassment faces with playful smile he says "I THINK SOMEBODY LOST"nd he winks to jalal.
By statement both joja faces become red like carrot. After that Abdul get glare from jallal to stop his teasing session.
To close dis awkward situation jalal introduce himself to Jodha
Jalal:with smile k buddy won't u introduce me to ur baby sister
Abdul:oh sry jalal met by princes jodha.
Jalal with smile hi jodha nyc to meet u nd he hand shake with her.
Both feel a shock passed from their bodies by touching eachother.Swiftly both leave their hands.
Jodha(blushing ):Nyc to meet u Mr.khan.
Jalal (smiling ):No need formalities jodha just call me jalal. You r Abdul's sister means you r also like MY...MY...(He was shock that he was about to tell her sister)he was searching suitable word nd says "YOU R ALSO MY BEST BUDDY ".
Jodha:she also feel shock jalal is about to cal her sister after she feel relief that he cal her buddy nd she blushes
Abdul:By seeing both blushing faces he was sure that both fall for each other.He pray to god to make his baby sister nd jalal love each other.
Abdul:k jalal shall we go to office u know na that my boss like a Hitler. If I go late he will kill me he said with a fake fear face.
Jalal(fake anger): Ha I know Abdul beta I know who is ur boss .u dare to call .e hitler know today u see the real Hitler in me I'll chop ur head for taking soo many leaves.
Abdul:ohh sry sry jalal I'm just kidding man u know my boss is very best boss in the world nd laughs like a fool.
Jalal:I'll show u man wat is jalal to u come to office.
Jalal to jodha:k jodha I'm leaving feel like ur home nd feel comfortable. If u want anything ask maids or shabir nd introduced every one Jodha nd shabir will show ur room.
Jodha:just nodded to him with nervous
Jalal to make her laugh he says be comfortable like ur own house plz don't ask me for documents of the house [:D][:D]
Nd he laughs.
Abdul:oh man plzz dis opportunity to me I'll surly ask ur mansion.I love dis mansion very much he said with a dreamy tone.
Jalal:I know u r bas^^^d Abdul
Both burst into laughs.
Jodha:smiles seeing both best buddies
Jalal:k Abdul it's already late chemo
Abdul; k jalal
Jalal:k jodha I'm leaving feel free we'll talk evening bye
Jodhs:bye said with nervous
Abdul:sees Jo's nervousness nd went to her hugs her nd says don't feel fear jo. Feel like ur home .I'll come daily .u will safe her.trust me k nd gives her chocolates
(Jo loves chocolates very much )
Jodha: By seeing chocolates a big smiles appeared on her face nodded her head with a smile nd hugs Abdul nd says thank u bhaiya
Jalal:He was lost in her smile nd smile softly by seeing jo bright smile by seeing chocolates
After sometime talking with jo both Abdul.nd jalal went to office nd jo goes to her room
Ok guys done with chapter 9 sorry for mistakes .Dont forget to hit like button [:)]
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Posted: 9 years ago

😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful chapter.
Wowww joja's first meeting great.
But I want short FB dear.
Plz update soon dear I m waiting for it 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter dear.both r fall fr each odercute moment thanx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Unres dear
Awesome chappy
Jo n jalal first meeting is beautiful
Lost in each other
Loved it
Please don't drag it with flashback
I want them to patch up again
Update soon buddy

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