Forever With You: Akdha ff(Chapter 17::page 89)

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Unres dear
Awesome chappy
Jo n jalal first meeting is beautiful
Lost in each other
Loved it
Please don't drag it with flashback
I want them to patch up again
Update soon buddy

Thanks for pm eshu

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Fantastic chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Awesome chappy

Wow Jo jalal's first meeting was beautiful

Both lost in each other

I guess love at first sight

Abdul teasing them & joja blushed 😳 😆

Thanks for pm

& continue soon

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Superb chappy
JoJa first meeting in flashback
Abdul Jalal relation is a nice one
Jo staying at Jalal's mansion
Documents of mansion dialog was hilarious😆

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Too good one eshu
Hmm. Jodha is gonna stay in jalal's mansion
Loved that one a lot
Pehli nazar mei hi pyaar haan
He stopped at the correct place hahaha
He was about to call her sister but hehhe
Nice one yar
Plz update daily

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

amazing chappi Dr
JJ already in love
Hehe
update asap

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misty

@misty22

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Wonderful chappy...muAh...lv u fr dis sweet intro nd joja s dream land. ...aww jo lvs chocolates nd ja lost in her smile...bt chotu sa chappy..sweety nxt time update a long chappy plzzz...thnku fr pm nd update asap...😊

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Awesome chappy dear...
But this time is also very short... Pata nahi kab long degi ya pfir dene ka bhi irada hai ya nahi...
Jo love the place...
Both r staring each other...
Abdul see the love between them..
Both abdul n Ja r best buddies..
Ja lost in jo smile..
Pls try to update ASAP ...

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Lovely update dear

Finally jalal got to know about Jodha's pregnancy

Flash bavk part was cute

Jodha and Reva's nok jhok and then the protective brother who came into action after hearing about surya

Well done abdul

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: swriter
Wonderful chapter.
Wowww joja's first meeting great.
But I want short FB dear.
Plz update soon dear I m waiting for it 😉

Thank u dear 😊