NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8 - Page 23

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Lashy,

@blue:

I don't understand. What pazhakka dosham?

Periamma.

I meant... as in when it comes to RT or Jalal... automatically I tend to gravitate towards the character however it is portrayed... that was the pazhaka dosham, I was referring to periyamma...

I'm sorry periyamma... I sort-of assumed from your replies on Akdha-lover's thread... that you had a soft spot for Jalal too... I'm sorry if I assumed wrong! 😕

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chinkirashmi

Nice part . loved the way akbar handled the horse. his instincts are really sharp. you have very beautifully written the part whre heera makes a medicine. looking forward for interactions between heera n akbar.

Originally posted by: melovesja

Lashy one tight wala hug🤗 for Akheera update😊

First part was bit emotional with little of his past but he is capable enough to get regards. After that smile creepy on my lips till end.🤗

Thanks for pm.

Sorry lashy for always post it in two parts.

Originally posted by: baubles

Heyya akkaaa!!! Since you didn't update last sunday, hadn't expected an update till today..but surprises are always a 100 times better when they come unexpected na...love you for this one!🤗🤗 I read the update 3 days back, haven't had time to comment..sorry!

Thank you so so so much 🤗

The paintings before every chapter keep getting better and better di...this one is breathtakingly beautiful...her expressive, sharp eyes and her slender hands holding the dupatta..such elegance!!❤️ Can I keep it as my siggy..pleaseee???😳

Sure... and I can already see it there... 😉 thanks so so so much!

Coming to the chapter, the connection between Heera and Akbar is something I felt throughout the chapter...unravelling each other, connecting the dots, finding answers to the questions about each other's identities...you've written it so so so well..👏👏

Thank you darling I liked the words you used,... without knowing each other, they know a lot of each other!

To start with, the Jija- Saali connect was great...they both realise they need to look out for the other person in this tough time where they both are equally engulfed by grief of losing their loved one. 😭

His anger and thirst for revenge is understandable, I hope he gets it..Khalil especially needs to die a slow painful death! 😡

Yes da the criminals need to be punished!

My girl's got such a sharp mind...it more than makes up for her partial eyesight..one line from Bindiya that the sheds aren't new and she deduces that the maids hadn't exaggerated the other day..he was indeed a young established merchant. Proud of my gal..

Me tooo!

And that opened up another range of questions in her mind..such curiosity when it comes to her guy...I'm loving it!!!

already decided her guy 😆

The angry young stranger becoming more familiar to her with every answered question...☺️☺️

Isssh

The return of the 4 dams and the purse...that has to be the best 'shortest' story in itself for me! Right from him being the 'rude' guy charging 4 dams for the water to him finding the purse to return the 4 dams to the rightful heiress...our 'Sahiba'.. love the connection there!

this was the best part... i loved this... thank you!

Another list of questions after this..why did he return it, how did he know Bindiya wasn't the Sahiba...

She knows the answer... if you want to know the answer, I've written lamba explanation on 1st page!😆

she's gonne be having sleepless nights if it goes on like this...bless the angry-young stranger!😆😆

awww😳

Heera's conversations with her jiji are heartbreaking and yet insightful..so many unanswered questions, the already existing problems and a fresh range of puzzles to decode..

And as Heera converses with her diamond ring here, another pair of eyes look into a hazel- brown topaz ring! That makes his thoughts drift to those expressive pair of eyes of the 'Sahiba' that had many stories to tell...for which he might not care now, but eventually will I'm sure! 😳

yes... he must eventually

They can then compete on who spends the most number of sleepless nights decoding the other..😆😆

And I'll be spending sleepless nights thinking about these two...😆

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I'm particularly in love with how they both have each other's thoughts etched in their minds since their first meet and the first time they heard each others' voices. You don't give every stranger a second thought after all..☺️

Love you for this line🤗

Loved this chapter, wouldn't have put it down till I finished the last word if this had been a completed novel..how I wish I could get hold of all 60 chapters right away!!❤️

☺️

Eagerly looking to get answers to all of Heera's questions...as curious as her! You updating today aa? Hope you do..Sunday is HBS day haina..😳

Love yaaa🤗

Love you too 🤗