NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6 - Page 97

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

When did that happen?🤔

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Res... Tonight I will read it😃 Horray update .. I was expecting on coming Sunday... Early😃 Wow... Love U🤗

Originally posted by: _Namita_

This was a fantastic update. I loved that we got a bit of Akbar's musings!!!

Originally posted by: lashy

oh yes Zhanna... I know that story ...

and you write stories too? That is amazing!!!!

Oh nooo!!! I can't be Scheherazade. 😊 I can be only Shah. 😃
I very love to read stories and novels. At the most, maximum, that I can do is, in despair, that no continuation, I can think up a "fish" (our journalists so called of basis of plot. By analogy with the backbone of a fish), for stories that the authors have thrown. It was for "Pyaar Kiya Toh Nibhana" and "No Name To My Desire".
Our poet Andrei Dementyev wrote poems:
Let another brilliantly playing the violin,
But still more brilliantly you listened!

in Russian language it is rhymes:
Pust' drugoy genial'no igrayet na skripke ,
No yeshche genialnee slushali ve!

I don't write stories, but I'm a good reader. 😃

Perfect pic for this chapter.. Loved it.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing chapter lashy... loved heera more, in this chapter.👏👏

First scene-Mahendar's state was written very nicely.. feeling very sad for him and also recalled third chapter-durga's pleas to khalil.., when he saw her room.

The rage he had felt on imagining those men, murdering his love was justified and I liked that but why do I feel that he won't able to take revenge from prince and khalil and will be sent by khalil and his men to durga, his love soon.😕

Anyways, I won't mind that either, as we have our Stranger to take revenge from khalil.😛

Heera is becoming normal again.. though she can't able to be happy from inside after losing her precious one, her only family-Durga but for the sake of her responsibilities, the 16 year heiress put aside her grief.👏

Heera- Self-possessed,Quiet and sagacious. This is what I feel about her,reading this chapter.

She was quite enticed by his strong and Confusing personality after her encounter with a stranger at canal yet she was suspicious of him. Afterall, he was the owner of that haveli, where they were staying.. Liked that..😉

This shows how insightful and incisive she is..⭐️⭐️

Though felt quite bad for those guards as the poor men had to eat chacha jaan's Saffron pilaf but liked gokul's words.

Be grateful for what you've got!!😊

Heera was asking for glass and I was like, in 16^th century they had/used glass.. I never had interest in history so don't know these basic things too..😳

Then a thought occurred to me, why don't heera use spectacles,then??😆

She wrote a letter to her jija sa.. hope he reads the letter before katwaing his ticket to heavens..😆

Stranger has connections to a royal family.. for a second, many thoughts started wandering in my mind.. anyways, I think this will help him and harka in future to go to prince's palace.

He returned the money.. I just love this Stranger..❤️

But why?? Is that because he came to know that she is the one who apologised to his man, after a bad behaviour of bindiya and her guards??

He recognised her voice and knew that she is Sahiba (I love when he calls her that..) then why he returned the money, he charged her for water??😕

With this, he indirectly told her that he knows that she is real sahiba and not bindiya... 😉

Loved the scene where he was looking at a ring.. that ring reminded him of Sahiba.. Don't tell me he loved someone in past..

In the whole chapter, I was waiting for Stranger and my eyes getting closed reaching this para.. Suddenly Your words tea and coffee mantra recalled and I opened my eyes..😆😆 and when I read this para, I was like...😃 Stranger aa gaya and after that.. chala bhi gaya.. 😭aur chapter khatam bhi ho gaya..

But it's ok.. Though there was only a small scene of his, in this chapter but he was present in a whole chapter in heera's thoughts and discernment.

And not to forget, loved heera's talk with Durga..😊

This is what we do, actually.. In a day, we can act normal but when we go on a bed after switching off the lights, we remember that someone, who has a special place in our life.

Waiting for next chapter, dear!!😊

Beautiful picture lashy not only your word but pic also speak.😛 As her hazal speak to him.

Write up of his visit to her room, Kuwarsa's pain and his condition at lost of his love was heart wrenching.😭 Like his dutiful loyal who bring him back to reality and remind him for his duty. Each time you exactly show relation between leader and loyal in that era. He work under sultnat but didn't lost his pride as rana . his is adamant to punish that barbarian who do this heinous crime and fulfill his promise to take care of harka and praja. To gave back her right. He very well knows about prince power and strength of well train people who do crime. Rana is on the way to get back his glory.👏

You find a way to gave some light moments between their pain .pillaf kand was hilarious. 😆

I like rattan kaka who was always on guard to face upcoming things.

Morning rays bring those memory and pain back to her but after the incidents of previous day . she try to get back to herself and dutiful ,sharp heiress. She remember her father as she have that glasses which were her great support. Her past memory was so touchy. She keenly observes haveli and surrounding to know he stay here or just now he came here. take help of her people's talent to know detail of nearby things and about him as a leader to protect themselves from danger . Along with that she notices his quality, loneliness and pain. She constantly thought about him, conflict was going on in her mind.. One moment she suspicious over him and another moment she denied with logic or information . Her talk with durga and puzzle she got from him. Like who he is, why he stay like this etc and most hard one why he return 4 dams .she understand he know about her disguise . try to find another reason. She also thought that he must recognize her voice and other things at canal. She notice similarity as sharp mind with him. Her complain and mental challenge to Durga had ting of confidence and pride about her ability. Her self talk was marvelous.👏

Other side Akber was not unaffected hazel affect him too. With the ring colour and quality of stone remained him of her eyes. He remembers her partial blindness and in one look he knows its beauty in spite of dressing and her spirit which she not lost because of fear. Cunning man with returning money he told indirectly about he is not mean or opportunist and( by voice and grace. hand with glass bangles which is not of commoner )😛

Destiny brings two different people in front of each other for few moment which affects one with his presence and other with interaction. Unknowingly its left effects somewhere deep down. His identity makes her constant thought about her and her hazel click him as unique thing. Soft heart wants to find everything about him and hard heart wants to avoid it. 😊

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Me😲😲 ** thud **

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Me too

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