NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6 - Page 99

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Ok got it... Then it should be someone else.🤣

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

very interesting chapters , Lashy

Originally posted by: alffim

Oh nooo!!! I can't be Scheherazade. 😊 I can be only Shah. 😃
I very love to read stories and novels.

Awww 😳

At the most, maximum, that I can do is, in despair, that no continuation, I can think up a "fish" (our journalists so called of basis of plot. By analogy with the backbone of a fish), for stories that the authors have thrown. It was for "Pyaar Kiya Toh Nibhana" and "No Name To My Desire".

Wait... are you asking those authors to continue or are you saying you can continue that... 🤔

Our poet Andrei Dementyev wrote poems:
Let another brilliantly playing the violin,
But still more brilliantly you listened!

in Russian language it is rhymes:
Pust' drugoy genial'no igrayet na skripke ,
No yeshche genialnee slushali ve!

I don't write stories, but I'm a good reader. 😃

Got it!

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Lashy di,

Loved Pari's pic,so very much.She is blessed with the most beautiful and expressive eyes,I've ever seen😃

Hunar ki khaan,you are👏

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

Hi Lashy...like I said before, both chapters r really interesting...

one thing I noticed in mostly all the stories...not just Jalal (Akbar in this story) but even all writers/authors and their readers have unanimously decided that if Jo 's eyes (here Heera) r to be described , then it has to be hazel / doe shaped eyes ...in none of the story I read Jo has black, or blue or green eyes...not that I have any complaints, but still ...

Originally posted by: Donjas

A characteristically enthralling update. The story is developing nicely. For me one of the highlights of your writing, is the impressive command you have over the language and the way you use it to express your thoughts.

Just as important and which for me marks you in the ranks of professional writers, is the painstakingly detailed used of terminology of that era.

I will be more specific in review in later episodes as the story takes shape.

Originally posted by: lashy

Also like all authors describe the male as someone who's fair with shoulder length locks... is tedha... has a smirk etc etc.. you get the gist 😆

because we cannot imagine anyone other than pari playing the female lead... just as we cannot imagine anyone other than RT playing the male lead... and Pari's most beautifully expressive features are her eyes!

PARIJAT were perfect for the serial... they will continue to be perfect for the stories here too 🤗

P.S. You wouldn't believe it.. here I wanted to do away with the term hazel and use honey coloured or almond coloured for a change... but since there was already 'LOT TO PROCESS' clues, puzzles, coins, voices etc... I wanted to keep it simple... and not make the other descriptions complicated...

but from now on, I plan to use a shade other than 'hazel' to describe her brown eyes... 😉

Originally posted by: lashy

Thank you Donjas... that was a very encouraging compliment! Am glad you have been liking it so far... 😊 and thank you for picking out those points that have stood out... hope the remaining 54 chapters capture your interest too!