NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Hi Harshu di, shaam ka naashta done? 😆

hhhiii shagun haan nashta bhi hua aur khana bhi bus abhi sona baaki hai... 😆

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Nancy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

@ Divyavm ~ Amazing amazng write up! 👏 Thoroughly loved reading it. Its a pleasure to read the chapter again .. from your eyes !! I specially loved the last bit where you highlighted how Harka couldn't find her way out .. neither out of the waters.. (nor out of her pain of life) and how stranger ended up helping her out in the former case.. and now waiting for the latter case to be solved by him! Thanks for such wonderful review 😃

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

@ Mitz - What heartfelt comments dear. Love reading them absolutely 👍🏼 😃 And thank you so much.. am glad you liked the musing... 😳

Edited by NJAPA_Addict - 9 years ago

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: lashy

🥺 my innocent replies pe ilzaam!

OMG ...😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Thank you Manasi for noticing the pictures... So glad you loved them!

Originally posted by: aishg1698
😳heeeyyy superb 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 bestest of all 😃😳

heera missing duga was quite heart wretching n made me teary eyed😭 but once the stranger entered... forget heera i fell in love 😳
n i wish i could just grab him out of the story😆😆😆😆😆😉

Awww thank you Aishwarya...🤗 am glad you liked his personality...

As for the lady in the photo, she is an acclaimed actress Pooja Sharma, she is very popular... I think she is renowned for playing the 'strong young woman' on TV... so, personally, I thought the choice was apt... 😃

Anyway, glad to have you here.. your first reply na, in the thread... hope to see many more 🤗

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: lashy
Thank you Manasi for noticing the pictures... So glad you loved them!

seriously , those pics were exquisite...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: alffim

*I am so happy that the picture created that effect! 😳 Thanks and thanks for taking this story so personally... this story is 'dark' if I had to describe the colour of this story it would be 'grey'! Like how many histories were ...*
It's amazing what you wrote about the color! It is surprising because that yesterday I did not have time to finish about color. :)
You know another person who likes describing scenes in songs and colours is a member called Divyam... she picks out the best allegories and analogies one could ever see... she would enjoy reading what you have to say.. and vice versa too, I imagine!

For me, all the chapters of different color. Maybe it doesn't coincide with your feeling.
Oh of course, the first one was a vibrant yellow (desert, sun, horses, sand, racing etc)
2nd was duller
3rd was definitely blood red
The colour you've chosen for 4th is what I have in mind too...

My color 4th chapter has shades of gray, as you have, but the main color - glaucous. We have the pigeons of this sort of color. I wanted to find a picture. This picture - a bit like the color, but not plot. There is a time (I didn't love this time since my childhood), is not yet a full night, this isn't a black-blue velvet. There are only gray-bluish twilight, pulling, exhausting all of mental strength.
The colour of twilight.. wow!
This is my, but maybe am I wrong?
I don't have a chance yet to read all the comments, but they are all stunningly interests. Therefore, I shall add far only and will be read further.

All comments are in this thread... you don't have to scour anywhere for it!

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divyavm

@divyavm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict
@ Divyavm ~ Amazing amazng write up! 👏 Thoroughly loved reading it. Its a pleasure to read the chapter again .. from your eyes !! I specially loved the last bit where you highlighted how Harka couldn't find her way out .. neither out of the waters.. (nor out of her pain of life) and how stranger ended up helping her out in the former case.. and now waiting for the latter case to be solved by him! Thanks for such wonderful review 😃

Thanks so much for the sweet words ... Credit to Lashy and the beautiful layers she creates in her chapters ... yes, I am wondering what the rope ladder will be in Harka's life.

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divyavm

@divyavm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: lashy

Wonderful thoughts on the colors ... a wonderful dimension that I had not realized but completely reflects the emotional tempo across the chapters ... yes, this chapter was indeed twilight, before a new dawn.