NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4 - Page 17

Thank you so much dear...

With the first line you saw Durga a determined and confident .Ready to go on her mission. Who talk to her parents as every child at any age want their blessing and their faith on her.

Yes... after all she was only 17.. 😭

Poem was so meaningful. she aware of danger to her life she wants to take a glance of her sweet home and went to sweet and proud memory land.😛 Where we got picture of their peaceful life and harka,s ability and her thinking at the same time their father's wish, different personality of siblings and as she lost in her thought

Yes... she relived their achievements every night.. I guess it kept her going!

unawares of prince's fast and unexpected step to attack at haveli before she left for Agra.

When she got little doubt of something wrong she lost all her loyal people and fear caught hold on her but very soon her clever mind work towards the use of small opportunity to save herself and got help from others and worrier prepare herself to fight if needed .

Yes... she had to be very practical at that point!

Unfortunately she faces the worst. I hate Khalil, I understand his character as he is supporting prince against his father but his did with durga is a monster's act.😡 I feel the pain of a girl to lose her modesty, her helplessness, vulnerableness be it a worrier or common girl( like najpa's jo) who is unable to save herself in front of that monster. You successfully create the accurate scan of fear in that situation to lose everything which they try to keep safe till today. Its make me numb.

It is sad, dear... very sad! 😭

Last meeting of two sisters was heart wrenching.😭(in her drame)salute to Durga ⭐️not only for her bravery but after what she going through she motivated Harka with her ability. When she becomes emotional she reminds about danger and guide her how to get out of situation fulfill her responsibility.Durga'word feel like real.

She will always be there to support her... in her own way..

Like dedication and guidance of rattan kaka and mohan bana. Excellently describe state of harka's mind , her readiness to stand by her people and maturity and calmness to understand the need of time.

Of course... she is the sole heiress now... she has a responsibility of nearly 400 families and their livelihoods!

Entry of dominating stranger was marvelous.👏 Connecting to the reality as a needed help against attack and very effective.

Waiting for their interaction. 😊

Thank you so much dear.. 🤗this means so so so much coming from you... love you and cherish your presence here dearly!

Originally posted by: eshalli

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Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!

😊

Here, this was their favourite poem... but the message was that every trick uncanny she may have tried every nook and cranny she may have spied (i.e. every trick they used to try find her... every place the prince's soldiers went searching for her) they never could find her, because she knew how to hide...