AKDHA FF : YOUR DREMS BECOME MINE - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
undrstnd the reason of humayun angr but dnt undrstnd his bhv n thinking abut Jo ...nt lik it..very bad he shuldnt b ...
so this the reason thy sep ...
finally Ja saw angelic face but didnt recognise her best friend ...
wow Jo cuming bck india ...excitd..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
ch-4
Nice chap dear..
Ja md gf in frst meeting ...itself?? hw..
he feel some connection n thn i love u all in one day...both r small yaar nt evn clear 10...
ohh god soo all this maha chuchak plan to sep Ja Jo but y???
Ja Jo in same mall let see if thy met or nt...??
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari

awesome update...
undrstnd the reason of humayun angr but dnt undrstnd his bhv n thinking abut Jo ...nt lik it..very bad he shuldnt b ...
so this the reason thy sep ...
finally Ja saw angelic face but didnt recognise her best friend ...
wow Jo cuming bck india ...excitd..😊



Thanku dear
But may I know your name?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari

ch-4
Nice chap dear..
Ja md gf in frst meeting ...itself?? hw..
he feel some connection n thn i love u all in one day...both r small yaar nt evn clear 10...
ohh god soo all this maha chuchak plan to sep Ja Jo but y???
Ja Jo in same mall let see if thy met or nt...??

Thanks
Yup 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow himaxi...superb
beautyful updt..
loved it.
finally Jo Ja meet...Ja uncounsiously named her Angel ...aaww soo sweet..
n both again meet in school in same class in same bench😉 n top of tht abdul n moti also helped lot mking thm sandwich btwn thm😉😆
ohh btw moti also cum with Jo ...nice..
soo finally Ja knws Jo name😊
n he also accidentally kiss n expcting slap but shocked to see blush😳 n he also blush...aww😆 wow ...eagerly waiting fr nxt...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr



Thanku dear
But may I know your name?


welcome😊
yes ...hii m Nidhi😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari

wow himaxi...superb
beautyful updt..
loved it.
finally Jo Ja meet...Ja uncounsiously named her Angel ...aaww soo sweet..
n both again meet in school in same class in same bench😉 n top of tht abdul n moti also helped lot mking thm sandwich btwn thm😉😆
ohh btw moti also cum with Jo ...nice..
soo finally Ja knws Jo name😊
n he also accidentally kiss n expcting slap but shocked to see blush😳 n he also blush...aww😆 wow ...eagerly waiting fr nxt...😊



Thanks a lot dear to see your that much interest in my story 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari


welcome😊
yes ...hii m Nidhi😃




Nidhi. .. ... Nice name 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Update soon dear
Cant wait



Sorry dear I am a little busy now a day... So can't update
But now I am free .. ... And update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 5



JALAL : Abdul... Why you come so late..?

Abdul : ( don't give any answer to jalal... And lost in his own dream land...)

BEFOR ABDUL AND MOTI COME IN CLASS,

(In a her green colour skirt the girl enter in to the corridor and suddenly dumb with handsome looking guy none other than Abdul...)

ABDUL : YOU STUPID GIRL...

MOTI : HOW DARE YOU...?
(And lift her hand to slap to him... But suddenly stop... After recognising him... As her secret crush... In same school of her... And do a little dance in her mind...) ABDUL... YOU..? HERE...?

ABDUL : (Totally surprised to see his lady love but secret wala... In same school... And do little monkey dance in his mind...) Yup... But how you here...?


MOTI : I will tell you after my class... I have to ho my lecture are start... Bye... ( goes from there)

( Jalal shake Abdul's shoulder a little to bring out him from his dreamland)

JALAL : HEY... Buddy where are you lost... I am asking you the resion of being late...

ABDUL : NO... Nothing yr... Wo I wake up little late... Na so...

JALAL : It's OK... Yr... Chal canteen chalte hai...

ABDUL : Wait... LET me ask my friend if she want to join us...

JALAL : OK..


ABDUL : hey moti would you like to come with us to canteen...?

MOTI : YUP... OK... ( Dreg Jodha with her)

IN CENTEEN,

(Both best buddy enter into the CENTEEN and search a empty place in it... After getting free place both are sit and Abdul reserved sit besides him for moti...)

( After some time moti and Jodha also come into the canteen... And Moti search Abdul... And goes near by site of Abdul... Happily)

( Jodha give surprised and confused look to moti)

JALAL : ( Suddenly stand up from his chair and offer it to Jodha) plz you sit here miss... Jodha...


JODHA : ( Site on jalal's sit with same confused look) then where you...?

JALAL : Oh... I got second chair for me... You comfortable you self here...

( both give cute smile to each other)
( jalal bring a chair for him self and place it little near to Jodha and sit on it...)

ABDUL : ( With shocking expression... ) you duo know each other...? ( because he knows Jalal from years of that the "GREAT JALAL NEVER DO LIKE THAT. AND SPECIALY FOR GIRL... NEVER... THEN WHAT WILL HAPPEND TO HOME SUDDENLY..???)

( Both jalal and Jodha not giving the answer and only give cute little smile to each other...)

ABDUL : So... Guys what you like to eat...??


JALAL : coffee for me...

MOTI : chocolate milk shake...

ABDUL : miss... Jodha what about u..???

JODHA : ( Who totally lost in jalal's charm not hear the question of Abdul who reapet it 3-4 time...) hmmm...

JALAL : ( Being sit near to Jodha.. Shake her shoulder little) miss... Jodha where are you lost...?

JODHA : ( Being shaken by jalal come bake to reality...) ha... Vo... Me... Nahi...

ABDUL : Don't panic miss... I ask u for your choice about food only... Not for marriage... ( cukel a little)

JODHA : Hmmm. Tricone...


( Abdul goes from there... To give an order)
( come after some time to bring all orders)

ABDUL : hey bro where is your cousin... Mirza..??

JALAL : OHHH. wait I call him ( called to Mirza)

( after sometime Mirza comes from his class due to the free class)

MIRZA : ohhh... Bhi hi..., hi Abdul...( Give a hifi to them... And sit besides jalal)

MIRZA : ( Recognised Jodha that she is the beastie of jalal in childhood... And jalal have a little crush on her...) ohhh... Bha... Bhi... ( Ascap from his mouth seeing Jodha in front of him)

JODHA : ( give him a confused look... With questions mark...?)


( Mirza bite his tongue ...)

MIRZA : Ops... Sorry... ( with little puppy face..)

JODHA : It's ok

(After having good time with new friends both Jodha and Moti take there leave for next lecture...)

ABDUL : Hey... Wait moti... We are in same class... We are also have class... Let's go all together

MOTI : OK...

( Four are goes towards class... But in between the way of class when Jodha lost in though of the wiard think just happened with her... Her leg twist a little... And she about to falling on ground... She close her eyes...)
( but suddenly a she felt a strong grip on her waist... And to her surprised she not hit the ground but hit in manly strong arm... None other than our jallu...)


JALAL : Be careful Miss Jodha...

JODHA : ( Stil close her eyes... And after hearing jalal's words open her eyes... And suddenly come our from his arm... And shyly run towards class...

IN CLASS ROOM,

( At that time moti and Abdul sit together on last bench and jalal and Jodha sit besides their respective bestie...)

After some time their science teacher is coming in the class... All wish him good noon...

The lecture is goes on jodha give full her concentration on it... Here our jalal getting bored because his hate thus subject... And lost in the thought of Jodha... And see Jodha by corner of his eyes... And to get a full glimpse of her angelic face he turns towards her with out catch by any one... And started to ogling her...smile

Thus is not unnoticed my science teacher...


Science teacher say to jalal, " Mr khan I am telling joke or something so that you are smiling...?"

Jalal who is totally lost in Jodha land not give any answer and ogling Jodha only...

Abdul notice it and shake his shoulder little hard... And say, " buddy concentrate on class... See teacher called you"

Jalal come out from his dream land and say sorry to teacher...

But teacher is more angry on his and say him to get out from class...

Jalal goes out from class...

After some time class is over teacher is gone and Abdul, moti, and Jodha also goes to the jalal.

ABDUL : hey bro what are you doing in the class???

JALAL : WO... me... Noting yr... Let's go home...

All four goes their respective home...


AT NIGHT,
LITTLE FAR AWAY FROM KHAN VILLA,

MIRZA : mom... I meet Jodha bhaabhi... Oops... Jodha in our school...

MC : WHAT...,? you see whom...?

MIRZA : Jodha.. Bharmal uncle's daughter

MC : NICE ( fake smile)

MIRZA : mom I am very tired... I want go in my room...

MC : Of course beta...

( Mirza goes to his room)
( Haider is come to mc)

MC : ( With full anger) how the he'll is this happened...? How can they come from London to india...?

HIDAR : What my wify...? Who come from London to india...?

MC : Bharmal and his family


HIDAR : WHAT...?

MC : now what will we do...? Now that humayu fix jalal's merrige to Jodha... No that will be git happen... No... Only Mirza will got married with her... Not that jalal...

HIDAR : YUP... my wife... Only Mirza will merry to Jodha... No one other than her... Plz relax...

AT LATE NIGHT,
KHAN VILLA,

Jalal not get sleep, he turns here and there in his room, he even don't dare to close his eyes because if he close the eyes the angelic face of Jodha come in his mind... He lost in Jodha's though only... He thought how she look like cute, hot, sexy, innocent at one time... And in the science class, " offuuu how cute she looking... How she try to place her hair bihind her ear but the stubborn hair again fall on her angelic face... How cute looking at that time... My cute angel... My love..."
Jalal though, " wait I just called her my cute angel.,my love... How can she...??? No... JALAL tu pagal ho gaya hai kya..


How can you think like that... She is pure, innocent girl... No... Jodha plz get out from my mind... Plz let me sleep... Plz... ( after that being tiered jalal get some sleep)

AT LATE NIGHT,
AT JODHA'S HOME,

Jodha sleep on bed peacefully but suddenly she felt hand on her shoulder, it is very familiar touch she felt like and turn towards it and see jalal there, Jodha get shocked and suddenly get from her dream and say, " offuuu I was a dream... But why I see this type of dream... How can I feel his hand on my shoulder... How...?
And how can it's so familiar...?
She touch her bare shoulder and remember the incident happened in the way of their class room," offuuu how can he hold me in the way of hit the ground, how he possessively hold me, how good feel his hand on my shoulder, even after save me he done leave me, I felt that he don't want to leave me... "


Jodha though," wait how can I think like that... How can I... He only save me as a good person,and I thought this type of think about his... Jodha to pagal ho gai hai...? But again she star to think about it... Jalal's though not leave her mind... ( and thinking about jalal she get sleep again... In jalal land)

IN THE MORNING,

Both jalal and Jodha decided to stay away from each other... And decided that not to see even once...

IN THE SCHOOL,

Today jalal and Jodha come on time in school not so much early nor so much late to avoid each other...

They directly goes to the class and sit on a different bench...

All lecture are finished by this only... Not even from both of them bother to see each other...

Moti say bye to Abdul and four goes their respective home...


AT NIGHT,
IN KHAN VILLA,

Jalal got frustrated by his own behaviour because in the first time in his life he try hard to control himself not see her... When he try hard not to remember her more he lost in her dream... He try hard to not thik about her and try to sleep... But the sleep far away from his eyes... Only Jodha is there in his eyes... He goes to his computer table and star it... He search her on friendbook... But he don't able to find her...
Because of privacy... He open Abdul 's friends list and bingo... He know it moti is there in his friend list... He eminently send request to her bing online moti recognised him and accept his request... Jalal start to find Jodha's name in moti' s friend list... After 15 minutes of searching he find her... He send a friend request to her... Being an online she accept it... Jalal though, " i will message her...??? No what she think about me...?"


AND open her uploaded photos and started to ogling her all photos... After all the day try hard to ignore her... Finally he see her in photo etlest... He feel peace in his heart and sleep on computer table only whole night...

IN LATE NIGHT,
IN JODHA'S HOME,

Here Jodha's situation is not less than jalal... She also started to see his uploaded photos... And after see him in photos give her heart a little relief and she got a sleep... That to her laptop on bed with her...

IN THE MORNING,
AT KHAN VILLA,


JALAL wakeup early... And him self sleep on computer table...and realised the whole night he was sleeping here only... After that he shutdown the computer and sit on the bad with the thought of Jodha... He decided to talk with her and clear his all douts ... Why he feel strong connection to her...? What he all the time thinking about her...? Why for just a second she is not leaving from his mind...? He want to clear all those questions...

AT JODHA'S HOME,

JODHA wake up little late...she directly go to the bathroom ready for the school... After having breakfast Jodha about to leave with the thought of jalal... Here she is also want to clear her all douts...

AT KHAN VILLA,

After having breakfast jalal about to leave for school... When his phone rang... He pick up the call...

CALLER : Sir plz can you come today on our karjat location... The director have some scenes to soot... For next promo...


JALAL : ( Angrily) what the heck...? How can he decided suddenly...? He have to inform me one day before...

CALLER : Yes, sir you are right... But what can I do...??

JALAL : OK... I will come... ( goes for shooting)

PRECAP : " MOT'S BIRTHDAY PARTY..."
" CONFESSION "




DONE GUYS HOPE YOU LIKE IT
LOVE YOU ALL
❤️

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