AKDHA FF : YOUR DREMS BECOME MINE - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
update soon yaar
make them face off
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Awesome prologue and chapters
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I will update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

AMAZING CHAPPY DEAR

LOVED IT❤️
WHY HUMAYUN ANGRY ON JODHA...IN THIS WHAT'S HER FAULT
JALAL AGAIN SHE BEAUTIFUL GIRL'S FACE...AND FILL CONNECTION BETWEEN THEM
AND ITS SUCH A GREAT NEWS JODHA AND HER FAMILY SOON BACK TO INDIA😊
THANKS FOR THE PM DEAR
UPDATE NEXT SOON



Thanks dear for such lovely comments
And for liking
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Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr



I will update soon dear


so update it asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late but nice chapter buddy.
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Originally posted by: swriter

Sorry for late but nice chapter buddy.



Thanks for liking dear
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CHAPTER 4




AT NIGHT, in club...

Jalal and Abdul along with Mirza enter in to the club...

(The light, music,) people all are busy in their own world... Some are dancing... Some are driving shots... And some are flirt with gf...

They directly goes to the counter and ordered their desire drink and goes to the table.. And sit there...

AFTER SOMETIME,

The drink of trios not come till.. So jalal axcuse both Mirza and Abdul to bring drink for them...

Jalal goes to the counter and ask about drink

WAITER :sorry sir... The waiter who take your order is goes his home so we don't know about your order...

JALAL :it OK... Plz make it... I my self bring to the table...

After that jalal waited for drinks to come near the counter... Suddenly saw a girl sitting in the chair continuesly drinking a vodka... Jalal goes near her and ask her...
JALAL : may I know the name of beautiful girl in front of me...?

THE GIRL : yup.. My name is neha

JALAL : hmm nice name... BTW my name is jalal..

NEHA: hmmm... But wait you know me?

JALAL : yup I know you are neha... Right now you tell me...

NEHA : (impressed by his charm...) ohhh ya...

JALAL :can I sit with you??

NEHA : yup... Sit...

IN the first meeting both are become good friends and jalal feel some connection with her... And little bit fall for her... And directly ask..

JALAL : hey... Can you be my gf...?

NEHA : (being impressed by his charm) yes... (SHYLY)

JALAL :I love you neha...

NEHA :I love you too...

ABDUL : (sout from their table) jalal... Tu kya drink khuda banane betha gya kya??

JALAL : ya Abdul.. I coming... So neha when we meet second time??

NEHA, :after 10 days my birthday... So we can meet that day...

JALAL : yup nice idea... Plz take my number... And give a miss call... So I will save your number... (give the number)

NEHA: OK done... Bye...

JALAL : bye... (goes to the abdul)

Then trio goes bake to the home...


AT LATE NIGHT...

IN INDIA, little away from khan villa...

MAHA CHUCHAK : haidar whether you heard of not our beloved son come first in the class...?

HIDAR : yup wifey... Akhir principal ko samjane kon gya tha? (having a evil smile on his face)

MC: of course you dear... Thanks...

HIDAR : not need it dear... He is my son too...

MC: ahhh. This so our big tension is become less... Apne accha hi kiya wo Jodha Aur uski family ko yaha she dur bhej kar...

HIDAR :ya you right wifey...


FLASH BACK,

HIDAR : take this money and tomorrow morning come goes to the khan villa and said to humayu what ever I write down in this paper...

MOLVI SHAB: OK hujoor... As your wish...

FLASH BACK END,,

AFTER A WEEK,

BHARMAL :let's go Jodha we have to check in to airport till 9:00...hurry up dear...

JODHA : yup papa.. Just a minute...

Bharmal and some servant both loaded the all luggage in to car... Bharmal and Maina sit on front sit... Jodha come out from the home and sit on back sit...

BHARMAL : so... All are ready... Maina sub saman le Liya hai na??

MAINA : ha ji... Ab ap chalu kijiye car... Nahi to ham late ho jayenge...

Bharmal drave the car to the airport parking and loads all luggage I trolley... And trio goes for check in...

After some time they sit on a respective sit in the plane... And fly to india...

AT INDIA,,
IN AIRPORT...

Trio sit in to the taxi and goes their home...

BHARMAL : Jodha beta... Now sleep early... OK... Tomorrow we have to go for your admittion in school...

JODHA : OK papa... (goes to her room and sleep )

AT KHAN VILLA,

HUMYU : ( sout loudly) jalal where are you??

JALAl: yes, dad I here...

HUMYU : Jalal get ready tomorrow morning early... We have to go to the school for your admittion...

JALAL: OK dad (sadly)

NEXT DAY,
IN SCHOOL...

There are two car come at same time in the school parking area... But the peoples in to the car not notice who is in other car... And goes directly to the principal's office...

HUMYUwhere is the principal??

CLARK : sir is in his office...

HUMYU : OK... Let's go jalal...

BHARMAL : where is the principal??

CLARK :sir plz wait in the waiting room.. Principal sir is busy... As he free we call you...

BHARMAL :ok.. Let's go Jodha...

After some time conforming the admittion humayu and jalal goes back to home...

And after that Bharmal and Jodha also conforming the admittion goes to the home...

AFTER 10 DAYS,,

JALAL : ( called early in the morning)

NEHA : (receive the call) hello...

JALAL : hii... Happy birthday dear... My love...

NEHA : THANKS DEAR I LOVE YOU...

JALAL : love you too...so at where we can meet??

NEHA : (search on net the most beautiful mall to hangout) we meet in mall I will send you the address...

JALAL : OK then meet in mall at 10:00 bye...

NEHA : bye (smirk)

AT JODHA's HOME,

JODHA : dad can I go to the mall with mom... Plz... After 3 or 4 days my school is started.. Then u am hell busy in the study... So can we go dad??

BHARMAL : OK beta... Take there credit card... Buy what ever you want...

JODHA : (happily hug to her father) thanks papa... You are the best papa In the world.. Thank you...

Jodha and Maina goes to the mall...

Jalal alone goes to the same mall where Jodha goes...


(so... Guys what you think if they meet in the mall or again there is no face of both of them like in school?????)


done guys ...i know it not worth to read it but if you like then hit the like button and do comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chappy dear
How can jalal do this to jo
Who the hell is this neha
Why MC n Haider r like this
They should meet in the mall buddy
Update soon buddy
Thanks for pm buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Yippee I'm first🥳



Thanks for liking dear
And congratulations for being first

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